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@Anony_mous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#581

Update after really long time, but totally worth the wait.

I LOVED the way you described Akash's personality. I think I can somewhere relate to it, and to see it being put in words was a whole new revelation. Kudos for that.

As for Khushi and Arnav's relationship, I know Khushi might have been suffocated to an extent with such possessive man. Her side of story was so well etched out. Now I can't wait for their secret issue and Arnav's memory plot to unfold.

This is one chapter that I know I will read again and again for the sheer beauty of words, depth of characters and your fluid languid writing style.

Don't make us wait this long for the next chapter :)

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#582

Finally!

But you kept your promise :) You told me that you would update around the 3rd or the 4th of April & you did. Me happy :) I just hope that you won"t make us wait this long for your next update. Arrre yaar we have short memories, at least I do, & I forget what happened previously if there is such a long wait, also kind of lose the essence of the story if you know what I mean... I would hate to do that since yours is such an unique story told so intensely that it would really be shame...

I've told you this before, saying it again, I just love the way you write. The zillions of metaphors & analogies you use is amazing. You paint the characters & their feelings in so many shades, that you pretty much cover every facet of their personalities & thoughts...

Loved the way you described the characters & their feelings to such painstaking detail in this update as well. You said Aakash will always remain sick & needy in your story... Sucks :( Poor Payal, she will have to be very strong, hope she is that...

Up until now, I am a little confused about Khushi... She is not the goody two shoes she usually is portrayed as in the show & other FFs. Your Khushi seems to be a bit of rebel. Why would she kiss Vivek Rathore on the LIPS when she is NOT dating him, only to spite Arnav?? I didn't get that. Sorry, I have to agree with Arnav there. She promised him she would be his only yet she seems to be a bit on the promiscuous side, am I right?? What kind of a girl is she really? Simply don't get her... It is one thing to feel stifled & claustrophobic with overbearing love that Arnav had for her, but to sleep around or kiss around other men just to experiment?? Beats me really. 😕

You should tell us soon how Arnav developed amnesia where Khushi is concerned, it is becoming quite frustrating to guess all the time... Because, I for one did not understand why would Arnav crush Vivek Rathore if he really has forgotten Khushi... Me not getting it at all...

Update soon :)

Edited by pixiegirl - 12 years ago

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utthra1208

@utthra1208

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#583

nice update...
when r they gonna stop running

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#584

i read all 12 chapters

your portrayal of arnav is overpowering. he is like a storm ready to take on anything his only salvation being khushi ... but in order to be a hero, he needs to realise that it is love and not possession that drives a relationship

khushi, on the other hand, is strong yet her feeling for arnav, one she is unwilling to acknowledge, takes over her every sense.

your analogy to a spider is awesome

just one thought ... more dialogues needed

but all in all - sinners in love, great idea

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sruthiif

@sruthiif

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#585

Nice update...
Arnav has always been so...behaving like he owns her...
If he doesn't remember Khushi, Shashi would be his source of information. If Shashi detests Khushi, he might fill Arnav with wrong information... in that way again he'll be a pain for Khushi... once with love and now with -ve feelings...
Akash...I so pity his condition...
So rathore has come down... no fell down into a deep deep pit...he did underestimate Arnav Singh Raizada, the cold and ruthless man...

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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#586

great great chapter . beyond the expectation u have set for this story ... so in the flashback when Arnav had ask Khushi to promise him never to do it with anyone else but him and she had broken that promise time and again .. Sooo dose that mean that she had been unfaithful to him ?? where on other side he thinks he only belongs to her ... You have painted new picture of khushi which very diff n she as ruthless as he his ...
My heart goes out to this broken n tormented Arnav
I kind of don't like this khushi
What could he have done or hide it from her that she told him that she would only forgive him if he dies ... that's very unhuman n evil ...I m not fond of this khushi who tells people to die if they want to repent .. she admits her innermost feelings that she didn't love him so in a way she had used him it may not b how her own needs but for her brother she did
I can't wait ti finf out the couse of their separation

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#587

still my only question has ever khushi felt any love for arnav... i don't think vivek will be gone that easily...he will pounce in a personal way...hisrevenge

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greshu

@greshu

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#588

hmm their relation what ever may be it is very intense,nobody can able to understand it, i really want to know what is their in arnav's mind,continue soon...

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#589

I hoped to see some arshi of the present situtation.

Anyways...i liked the way ou have described their emotions & themselves too.

You chose the perfect example for comparing them!

Thanks fr d pm.

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Aditi

@uv-crazyfan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#590

hey finally u updated after a long time and dear it was an amazing update. Khushi and akash both r so different from each other yet they did the same thing- they r running away from the love of their life. Arnav is such a over possessive lover- past incident indicate that clearly. So arnav ruined vivek's company if i m not wrong and now has decided to buy the company. A very interesting update dear and worth the wait as well. Continue soon :-)

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