Arhi FF For You Forever Thread 3 Thd 4 link pg 1 - Page 13

Originally posted by: daljeet

hey Harem, sorry yaar couldn't read this one before.

Iunderstand your words and now I understand your view point. Yes when you put it that way I really understand your intentions. But don't take me wrong when I told I found too much sweetness in the story and the characters seem a bit unbelievable. I mean with the way our society is going, to believe that such people with so much of innate goodness ( I know that there are people with goodness, but so much so that they seemed to have no faults) was surprising.

But when you said your purpose to write it so was because it was a way of showing plus covers minus. Good point. Yet I would still say bring a little more originality to the character sketches. (please I don't mean your characters are superficial, not at all, infact they remind me of some of my cousins and their would-bes). but my point is when I look from outside they are like this-cool cute roses blooming into a relationship. But when they enter into the relationship officially their minus and plus have duels and then I find a more realistic picture.

That is what I meant. Hope you would understand.

I like the proposal between Arnav and Kushi. I have read stories where Arshi's marriage celebrations run into many chapters, but here their proposal itself is running into may chapters😛. I wonder what all surprises you are gonna plan for their wedding then😉

Originally posted by: harhem

aww. dear. I really felt your question was worth answering. Its true to find the characters something superficial. Believe me it starts with this sweetness but later on one understands the other be it through fights and arguments or through proper discussions. It doesnt necessarily mean that one should argue and fight in life. I have seen many incidents where a couple fights and argues each and every second which has affected the children and their futture. I hope we can wish and dream for such a life where we lessen the worries and arguments and be sweeter enough to accept each other;s faults.

Afterall we are here to enjoy a nice a story and refresh our mind instead of getting over tensed and emotional over the stories if it flows smoothly it really clears our mind devoid of worries and stress. So dont worry you will like it more as it progress.

Originally posted by: daljeet

OKAY!!!!

Done👍🏼 I agree with you. I understand your view point and I'm okay with it. Yea I don't want Arshi to fight forever like in our serial. But as you promised more essence in coming chapters, I have high hopes😳

And yea I must thank you for taking such a decision. Sometimes I sit to read a story to relax myself but I get more emotional. Lol. So your attempt to rest reader's mind and not cause tension is so thoughtful on your part. Thanks a lot.😊

Hope you are enjoying my story. Missing you on my thread😊

Sorry dear. Couldnt read after Part 1 will get back soon and comment on it.

Originally posted by: harhem

Thanks for understanding. I have more ease in discussing with you as we had been into such discussions before as well.

Sorry dear. Couldnt read after Part 1 will get back soon and comment on it. 😊