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@sherlockthor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

krani! i really donno what to say... before i used to wonder how can a story of yours get 500+ likes ?!! then today i realised why! its the way you portray emotions and the writing is too engaging! i must say well done! read 32 chapters in one go ..waiting eagerly for chapter 33 !!

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MithilaTorr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

You never need be told! You are a professional writer! Ur words simply is right on the mark. Earn it, ASR have to. Obviously Arnav in ASR will know how! NK will atleast give him a chance to look at their relationship in a new perspective.Beautiful!

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socrazy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

a lovely description of the gamit of feelings and emotions Arnav is going through. Its about time he give them some thought and see where Kushi is coming from and understand her feelings. Hope he does something soon about earning her trust.

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Dhara Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Haha there's another 1st for Mr. ASR !! can't wait fir the nxt !!

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SA_nimk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

that was beautiful!!!

atleast arnav is noticing her now!!

thats progress sum how!!

LOVING NK's involvement!!

atleast khushi smiled after soo longg!!!

very realistic i must say once again!!

SUPER AWESOME UPDATES!!

love how arnav remembers everyone's words!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

don't know how did i missed last three chapters

so still doesn't know how to manaofy his betterhalf hmm...lage raho socho socho 😆

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disha7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

I am so glad that khushi's "Earn it" i bothering him so much! this shows how much he has started caring of her!

the beach scene has been beautifully described...i could almost imagine myself sitting on the beach and feeling the waves 😊

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kooltoad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Amazingly written... Arnav's thought process about the incident and how he subconsciously looks at khushi's moves... Beautiful... :)

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123vava

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

😉ooohhh loveddd the update

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--BumbleBee--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#190

Edited!!

That was a really nice update.

One of the things I love about the way you write is your descriptive style. You articulate stuff really well and there is a motion picture running in my head at all times when I'm reading your work.

I like how you have made this real.

It's not possible for real people to forgive others because they are given pretty things.

For, forgiveness needs to stem from inside. From an assurance- silent or verbal that they are sorry for what happened and that they won't do it again..

I love how NK has brought out the real side of Khushi, making Arnav witness it and smile at the memory of uninhibited joy.

Arnav resents that in NK, his ability to make people smile.

The scene with his teacher, was really well done and reinforces what I thought. Your Arnav is a man of actions, not words. He doesn't know the art of articulation and relies on his ability to provide security, happiness and grant all the whims and fancies of the people he holds close.

The small details you provide, go a long way in seeing the character through your eyes. Love how you have described the scene at the beach.. He is meticulous, pays more attention to the details than to the main picture.

The man you have shown at the beach has come such a long way in terms of stopping to think about what has been done and what should be don in future.

He was honest about it with himself, atleast to a certain extent and I like how it's gradually coming out..

Brilliance in multiple dimensions.

Please keep writing.

Loved it..

Update soon

3 updates in a row!

WOW!!😃

Thank you:))

P.S. I read your OS- Marriage night yesterday. Loved it.. Thanks for re-posting!😊

Edited by --BumbleBee-- - 12 years ago