||~Something About You~||#5 *COMPLETED* - Page 68

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Posted: 12 years ago
simply superb.loved it
keep writing
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
i loved the deal part...its so funny...poor khusgi no one can win over ASR...hahaha...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update. loved it

payal and anjali conversation was just awesome, the way they both took their siblings side! loved them for that!

woah payal finally noticed something! may she uses her brain and investigate a bit in this matter! lol! wat to say about anjali! as usual blind as she was in the show but hoping this time she sees the attraction between her chote and baby gupta on time!

looks like Mr Raiazada is very eager and impatient but still a trial room! lol. anyway it was so cute watching arnav getting desperate to have some quality time with her! but as this time also, the usual disturbance the phone! lol.

smart and intelligent khushi and her thinking and ideas totally out of this world but wat was more fun was reading arnav's reaction and response to the deal! she should have learnt by now, arnav never goes for a deal which is not profitable to him!

maybe payal and anjali will see something more important to their eyes this time and will finally believe that something is really brewing between them


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Posted: 12 years ago
woh khushi kp loooll
i love the update thank u
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superbbb!!!! Loved it... You know from the time I started reading till end I was smiling continuously and it was superb update... KPs were quite a good idea (have u done it personaly or an idea u want to hold when u will meet ur prince charming *cocking eyebrows* bolo bolo waisay I have made a mental note for future *grin*) ... Oh my two sisters fighting for their two siblings who were busy in changing room discusing the kiss... You potrayed the love of Anjali n Payal in such a cute plus lighter way n I enjoyed alot... Another update with perfect xombination of sweetness,cuteness and humour
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Posted: 12 years ago
ASR never agrees to a non-profitable deal, Red!"

lets see how he deals with the families :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update.. khushi and her kp😉 anjali blamed khushi and den apologized...
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Posted: 12 years ago
good one.. update soon plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
nothing can happen between khushi and arnav, huh, poor anjali and payal!!!!!!!
trial room scene was cute...can you actually do it in india...I mean isn't it monitored??
and no precap :(!!!!!!!!!
good update though!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, thats something unusual the sisters having an argument for their respective sibling.
I thought the arguentn between Anji and Payal would turn out to be a fight but they apologised from their end to behave like what they did.

Something is actually burying up thats what Payal noticed, since Anji said it can't be that went to reverese gear. Well the truth will come out one day so I wonder how these two sister in law will react.

Arshi KP is so damn funny. Arnav claimed he wanted it staight after agreeing to her term. He had a point there how else can he be a business man. I reckon he forgot the term in business as the deal will only be considered after singing or agreeing. So the previous things will not be counted, therefore Arnav took advantage using his romantic brain which blocked the real world brain.

LOL

Sorry for long comment

Fabulous update... Continue soon & thanks for the pm

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