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Khushi's Laad-Governor aka Devil is giving her a tough time.. But we all know how she loves to love this Devil.. errr.. Hot Devil!!
Arnav's incessant teasing was reminescent of some scenes from the episodes during Payaash's pre-wedding ceremonies in the show!
I love the way how you write about how Arnav's constant heated gazes and brushes burn Khushi up and from there emerges Arnav's Red,who tempts the Hell outta him!!
Anjali went into a daze because she thought that her Chhote was gonna surprise her with Kaaleere! Where there is Anjali, there has to be some emotional atmosphere and an over-usage of lachrymal glands!!
Can't she understand that she makes her already-PDA-shy brother uncomfortable with hugs and tears?
Poor Arnav!
Khushi is quite observant- she understood perfectly how Arnav was feeling about Anjali's reaction to the Kaleere. You indirectly made the readers also aware about how Khushi truly understands Arnav.
Arnav is very much in the Nascent stages of love- poor guy can't resist himself from Kissing Khushi all the time!!
Khushi's sarcasm was hilarious ..and Arnav's crisp reply was very romantic,possesive and 'Junoon' kind of a thing!
The business man in Arnav who makes awesome kissing deals is so,so adorable-what can I say?
I just love,love the way how you Redefine Romance!
But this businessman is unaware that his opponent party is anything but naive!
I thought that he would bite the dust once Khushi clearly explained The Rules Of The KP Game.. But he didn't even bother and was about to start his ministrations..
.. But Alas! Kiss-ke-beech Interfere karne-wali ko tabhi phone Karni thi!
Huh! So Payal is way much more smarter than she was in the show! It is a bliss to read!
Payal will soon get to know that there is a Big Fire and definitely a Smoke too!!
Why does Anjali has to do something or the other to make me dislike her?
"She was always a bit on the wild side".. Huh!
She should go and ask her Chhote how Khushi's "a bit wild" persona makes him go Crazy Like Hell!
Payal's point-blank answers were great! Exactly Spot-on.
Well, after reading the part where Anjali was sad about her Chhote,.. I felt that whatever she was blabbering about Khushi minutes before was just a protective sister speaking.. Sigh.
But whatever, she shouldn't have blamed Khushi for all those childish things..
Payal and Rohan's sibling possessiveness is very heartwarming to read.
It was a real treat to read Arnav's teasing and his apparent innocent way of defending.
The 'Nanand-Bhabi' camaraderie was refreshing. Never read about such a pair who argued about their siblings and in the very next moment, they apologised for their rudeness!
Great update.
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago
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