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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow! so Payal noticed?? Finally someone noticed that when Arnav and Khushi are together the very air crackles!

But then Anjali toh Anjali hai. Like the show she is blind to everything... 😃

Arnav and Khushi together in a private trial room about to kiss and phone rings! Why? O why?

Her Kissing Points are so going to be ignored by him 😛
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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another mind blowing update...

the much awaited KP-vey...the whole scenario was so damn cute and romantic...isnt Arnavji having a whale of time doing this teenage rabba-veying with our crazy Kushi...i was imagining the scene on janmashtami in the show when arnav pulled kushi behind a pillar, held her close and scared her with his question "tumhe dar tho nahi lag raha hi na"...but you took it to a whole new level with this cute romance inside the confines of a trial room...and when he said "stop this crazy nonsense and let me kiss you" omg that was so cutely hot :)

so payal got the clue...i knew it and suspected that she would have found it odd to catch them both doing that although it was completely normal and nothing strange about it, the fact that the people doing that were A&K should have told the siblings that all is not what they think it is...so although both of them finally agreed to drop it off i am sure an inkling of doubt has crept in and the family may tune into it soon😊


Edited by asr2kkg - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay! You are on line. Waiting.

First one to read, if that counts. The kissingpoints are a new cocept. Love the idea. Payal is suspicious and loved the fight between the sisters regarding their siblings. When the news breaks there is going to be a mini earthquake. Please start writing the next part as your updates make my day. You know that the precaps are the most awaited part of your updates, and to not get any is equal to a catastrophie.
Edited by 1chilly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor families!wonder kps got utilized or not?waiting for the next.
Edited by 1408 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank You For The PM😊

.. And Thank You Once Again For Answering My Question.
I'm Eagerly Waiting For That Special Update When You Will Go For The Thin Outline Of Arnav's Lips😉😉
Reserved...
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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F*** i wrote my comment n i dont know what i did it just disappeared before me pressing submit...arghh😡
so trying to think what i wrote at first and rewriting it again...
arnav dragging khushi in to trial room and stealing their "private moments" from this double wedding prep and then making a deal about Kissing points...was amazing and soo damn awesome...
why is anjali being all bitchy...i mean i know she meant no harm and she is just concerned about her oh-so innocent chhotte...but then too...she practically badmouthed khushi...the princess gupta for whom no one can hear a word...is it all because along with rohan everyone else give fairly pretty much amount of their attention to this gupta member...well i dont know but she is yet not in my good books...even i think if would have tried then she could have managed to save nikunja...well leave that part...
payal noticed this thing between khushi and arnav and even voiced her doubt but the probability seem to be low...If only she know how much they have met and how much she is correct...
loved the update...thanks for pm :)

Edited by jahnvi.luvs.ASR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Khushi's Laad-Governor aka Devil is giving her a tough time.. But we all know how she loves to love this Devil.. errr.. Hot Devil!!
Arnav's incessant teasing was reminescent of some scenes from the episodes during Payaash's pre-wedding ceremonies in the show!
I love the way how you write about how Arnav's constant heated gazes and brushes burn Khushi up and from there emerges Arnav's Red,who tempts the Hell outta him!!

Anjali went into a daze because she thought that her Chhote was gonna surprise her with Kaaleere! Where there is Anjali, there has to be some emotional atmosphere and an over-usage of lachrymal glands!!
Can't she understand that she makes her already-PDA-shy brother uncomfortable with hugs and tears?
Poor Arnav!

Khushi is quite observant- she understood perfectly how Arnav was feeling about Anjali's reaction to the Kaleere. You indirectly made the readers also aware about how Khushi truly understands Arnav.

Arnav is very much in the Nascent stages of love- poor guy can't resist himself from Kissing Khushi all the time!!
Khushi's sarcasm was hilarious ..and Arnav's crisp reply was very romantic,possesive and 'Junoon' kind of a thing!

The business man in Arnav who makes awesome kissing deals is so,so adorable-what can I say?
I just love,love the way how you Redefine Romance!

But this businessman is unaware that his opponent party is anything but naive!
I thought that he would bite the dust once Khushi clearly explained The Rules Of The KP Game.. But he didn't even bother and was about to start his ministrations..
.. But Alas! Kiss-ke-beech Interfere karne-wali ko tabhi phone Karni thi!

Huh! So Payal is way much more smarter than she was in the show! It is a bliss to read!

Payal will soon get to know that there is a Big Fire and definitely a Smoke too!!

Why does Anjali has to do something or the other to make me dislike her?
"She was always a bit on the wild side".. Huh!
She should go and ask her Chhote how Khushi's "a bit wild" persona makes him go Crazy Like Hell!

Payal's point-blank answers were great! Exactly Spot-on.

Well, after reading the part where Anjali was sad about her Chhote,.. I felt that whatever she was blabbering about Khushi minutes before was just a protective sister speaking.. Sigh.
But whatever, she shouldn't have blamed Khushi for all those childish things..

Payal and Rohan's sibling possessiveness is very heartwarming to read.

It was a real treat to read Arnav's teasing and his apparent innocent way of defending.
The 'Nanand-Bhabi' camaraderie was refreshing. Never read about such a pair who argued about their siblings and in the very next moment, they apologised for their rudeness!

Great update.
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Reserved.
Edited.

Well, I had reserved it for the precap!
.. Okay I feel that sometimes not finding the Precap can also be a Cliff-hanger of sorts, right?
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
This one had me high...

Awesome one yet again...

loved it...

and no precap...god i hv been addicted to reading sneak peak now... and this one felt incomplete...

neways... can manage with it considering the update itself was mind blowing...

please continue soon..

thanks for pm..
Edited by swatim318 - 12 years ago

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