Rusted Relations thread 2 - Page 70

Awww.

Chapter 16 part A

Omg u r awesome dear ... awesome well I love both ways but a little preference more for this one ehehh... fantastic update

Well shyam is after lavanya n lavanya in contact wid nk hmmm this is real suspence ... is lavanya planning somehing evil I mean planning to get nk here or is she really scared of shyam.. shyam is another always a snake grrr...

Im sorry blabering a lot eheheh bt u knw when u r tensed u tLk a lot eheheh

Arshi now ehehehehe kushi so cute n funny shantivan she ll get peace Hahahahahha doesnt knw watz waiting. Of course her peace her life evryting is in shantivan bt will take some time to knw it darling... I love how she felt jealous ...

Arnav talking to arohi ... nw wat if arjun sees this how will he feel????
Lets say if arnav n arohi sees ku n arjun talking how will they feels???

Ahahahahah datz gna b a fun case if this happens.

N I cant wait to seenkushis reaction at shantivan wih chotte eheheheheheheh

yes i definitely see an improvement in your writing...it's not 100% there but there is definitely more clarity in the story than b4...keep it up!!

Awesome update. Loved it.. Wonder how Khushil stay at Shantivan will be.. Cant wait for the nxt chap.. Continue soon.
And for the writing style, I am comfortable and i like bth the ways so you can caryy on with which you feel easy.. :)

Luv the way gripping of past n present blend
there is so much oxidised here..
Lav mystry shayam devil
wait for nxt one

It was nice update

now she will think the ASR is Arohi brother Rahul and Rahul----chote ... will,,,,,, miss arrogent will get hell of confuse...LOL

This chapter is better in terms of writing than the last.