TaaRey FF: 'With you..forever' part 6 updated pg18 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Awsome ff yaar..it's super cute.cant wait for the next chapter so plz update soon and if u have a pm list plz add me.tnanks😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
ohh god it ws awsm dea
such a beautiful concept
ok so 2nd chap ws awsm...thnk god
rey nd taani r classmates😃 nd TR hug
ws so magical i cn imagine all dat...
nd precap arghhh vishakha😡 feeling bad fr taani😭
ohhk so overall its intresting pls update soon nd dun
frgt to pm me😳 thnks fr d pm dea🤗

Edited by patie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: asharani261

hey dr,jst caught up wit d updates of cha 2 & 3.must sy grt wrk. taani & rey in sm clg,such a coincidence.lvd d brewing frndshp bw taarey. rey is so caring,lvd tr hug & convo.precap sounds gd,i hope it leads to smtg gd wit taarey.


thank you dr😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Dipu_taarey

omg...how i dont notice this ff...its too good ...love taarey unique relationship...plz next time pm me...plz plz plz dont forget...


thank you so much😃 will pm you surely😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: bags07

hey !!loved ur concept..all the three updates are awesm ..loved the way rey was smitten by taani n their 1 st meeting n taarey have bcm good friends in such short span of time ...rey cares for taani n feels lonely when she s not around...precap is awesm pls update soon n pm me updates😃


thank you so much dr..will surely pm you😊
Edited by Breeze_13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: shahz

Awsome ff yaar..it's super cute.cant wait for the next chapter so plz update soon and if u have a pm list plz add me.tnanks😛


thank you😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: patie

ohh god it ws awsm dea
such a beautiful concept
ok so 2nd chap ws awsm...thnk god
rey nd taani r classmates😃 nd TR hug
ws so magical i cn imagine all dat...
nd precap arghhh vishakha😡 feeling bad fr taani😭
ohhk so overall its intresting pls update soon nd dun
frgt to pm me😳 thnks fr d pm dea🤗



thanks dr😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

hi everyone..🤗hope ya all are fine...Thank you for your lovely comments guys ..Love you all so much..Here is the next part..enjoy 😃 give your feedbacks..sry for mistakes..

Chap-4


St.Louis' college:

Taani walked through the corridor twirling her bag around in the air ..jumping like a small kid while humming her favourite tunes'her hair playing with air'and OUCH like a coincidence she fall down..😆

"Kabi nahi sudregi"Rey hit his forehead who was watching his angel from a distance came to her rescue putting forward his hand. He gave a " I expected this taani!" look.

Taani clasped his hand and stood right .

"Rey aapko jo kehna hai actually daantna hai na jaldi kijiye!!" she said in a hurry in express speed and her eyes closed.😆

He couldn't help but admire at his miss.cutely weird ' angry face vanished and he smiled now..."She always manages to shoo away his angry in a second."😳

Taani opens her right eye slowly and found him smiling at her.

" aap gusse me nahi ho'"taking a deep breath.." thank you Krishna ji" .she smiled at rey.. Look Look hawa hawa'

Rehearsal Hall: All present except neha and Vicky .Vishaka was also there in RH .she returned just now after a long vacation.

Swayam:Taani pls maan jao na yaar. No one can do better than you.

Taani: No bhai'I cant..mein aur AGS?!

Rey: No Taani you have to means you have to! He said stubbornly..Atleast mere liye...(aww...😳)'His eyes softened'Her eyes widened'Again a Look look hawa hawa..Both were lost in each other.☺️

Taani said ok dreamily.😳

Swayam:"Woah woah sissy meine bola toh na..par rey bola to yes ha.." this is not fair'he said faking angry which left TaaRey blushing.☺️

Taani:Aww my chweetu..taani pulled swayam's cheeks.😆

TaaYam shared a bro-sis bond though they were not blood relations. Somehow they started calling each other bro-sis. Swayam was even ready to kill rey for hurting his sis when there fights between TaaRey even though the fault is both side..😆similarly taani was the intermediator between SwaRon during their fights!😳

Rey Swayam Sharon left since they had some work.

Bye guys..they said this n left

Jaate jaate rey looked at taani with his eyes expressing lots of love which were saying to her" bye will miss you my baby.."❤️

She nodded her head looking deeply into those soft love eyes catching up those words indirectly said by him through his passionate eyes .."will miss you too" Her eyes replied back with the same intensity and passion.😳

He smiled and turned around to leave after receiving the message from his angel ..

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RH:

Everyone(only girls) were chit chatting..

Neha entered all sad..

Neha(talking to herself while entering): Babu why you becoming rude like this.

Taani: neha kya hua.

Neha: Dekho na yaar.,,,babu mujpe shouting for even small mistakes.

Taani: chodo na neha..he will talk soon. Ye dekho kaise hai..rey ne diya tha'she showed a dance banner which was ready for upcoming dace festive with all of the st.louis members postures in it..

Vishaka(angrily): Dude are you serious ? she is worried about her BF mann..But you ..

Taani: What?! Hey neha im sorry seriously I didn't know that you and Vicky are'

Vishaka(cuts her): "Agar tumhe bi family hoti na tab tumhe relationships ke feelings aur values samajh me aayegi! Par tum toh'"

"Enough Vishaka"😡 Rey yelled angrily .The whole gang was totally shocked...ReYam entered in.

"Taani"..he looked at her with painful eyes someone has hurted the most priced possession of his!

Taani couldn't control..tears were forming up in her eyes.she ran away immediately. He gave a burning look to V and ran after taani '"Taani'Taani stop!"

He searches her everywhere but cant find her not even in Fire Escape.That surprised him..She dint want to face me..?..Thats why she is not in Fire escape.Because she very well know I will search her here...oh god'where are you taani'Rey was searching all tensed. Finally He found her sitting in steps out of the BB court sitting with her head resting on her lap..

Rey: Taaniii..

Taani lifted her head to see Rey. She lowered her eyes immediately.A lone tear escaped from her eye.

Rey sat beside her and he wiped those tears .

She kept her hand upon his which where on his face looking into his eyes she started..

"Rey I have never been in a family. Muje bas itna pata hai ki my mom left me in home when I was two years.i never had any chance to be in family but Iska matlab ye to nahi hai na ki me relationships ko nahi samajti hu"...She turned and hugged him .He hugged back.

He was shocked to hear that.." Its ok don't cry taani. Forget those unwanted things..

They remained like that lost in each other. She found peace for herself in his arms.He hugged her protectively.

"Tring tring" they separated by hearing the sound.Taani tugged her hair behind her ear in nervousness..Rey was lost in her.She saw that he is staring at her.Rey wo..phone..☺️""ha'.ya.." He saw the screen.

It was swayam's call.(kabab mein..😆) "Hey swayam.."

"Rey my sis is ok na.."

" ya swayam..I will take care..me use baahar leke jaa rahu hu"

"oh ok thn enjoy " he cut the call.

" Taani chale..?"

"Where Rey?"

"batata hu..first come"

He started his bike'"Kya dekh rahi ho taani? Bait jao na."

"Kya..?nahi im not coming..she turned away her face."

"what?!..Ok fine.then I too wont talk with you" He faked angry and turned away his face.😆

Taani saw him from the corner of the eye.."Oh god he is angry"

"Ok baba im coming.tik hai"

"Ha that's like my taani!" He smiled and pinched her cheeks😳.She sat and held his shoulders for support.

So TaaRey were ready to fly..Udne do in BG.

They reached a place out of the city. He parked his bike on one side.She got down..She was excited..It was a place free of vehicles ..That place was above the city'The scene was magnificient..Trees were on either side of that single road'.Flowers were falling from those trees'A small nursery school at a distance.." She was surprised at the sight in front her.."Rey'Its such a beautiful place..But why are we here?" She was excited looking around..

"Just to show the most beautiful place in the city to my most beautiful friend in the world" He said looking at her . She turned in shock.."what?!" "Ha'I said you're beautiful" He was staring at her lovingly..Taani blushed☺️ "Thank You Rey"'

He showed a paanipuri stall nearby..

"Yayy Rey chaliye na..i love it"

He was jealous on the paanipuri now beause taani loves it hehe'😆

"ya sure..lets go"

"She dragged him.." "Taani ..dheere yaar" He laughed at her..Rey Dont laugh !you are insulting panipuri...😆

He was like"What the?.."😆

She got a plate "Rey aap bi kahyenge na?" '😳

She turned around asking him..He was not there..She got scared..and looked around everywhere..But no he was not there'.😲

"Rey..where are you.?"😭


Precap:none😆 shorry guys😆

Edited by Breeze_13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Our bubbly Taani being all carefree but her Mr Handsome watching her lol. Aww love their intense llhh its so romantic. Taayam bonding is so beautiful, so sweet of Swayam to care for Taani soo much. Omg I had tears in my eyes when Vishaka told Taani about family relationships how dare she, so emotional when she told Rey about her mother leaving her. Love their hug and aww swayam interrupting the love birds to check on his sister lol. Love the place where Rey took Taani but where did he disappear to, its so not fair that u ended it like that and no recap 😭
U did a superb job loveee the update and plzzz continue asap eagerly waiting to read where Rey disappear to
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
loved it dear😊it was awesome n rey jealous from panipuri that's not good😆update soon😊

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