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Chapter 2

Had she made a mistake by accepting his proposal? She didn't think so. There had been rightness to that decision, something she was convinced of even at this point in time.

Could you be molding the plot to echo the following quote "Grief walks upon the heels of pleasure; married in haste, we repent at leisure"? Because given your love for mystery and cliffhangers, I believe you wouldn't get these two lovebirds married off that easily without them growing as a character and so far all we have is Arnav in his blissful mood tying the knot with Khushi who seems to just go along with everything. Too surreal and hard to believe but I shall let you take the plot.

I must say I LOVE NK's character. Although pre-nuptial agreements are seen in a bad light, it's for both parties protection and Arnav being SO IN LOVE WITH KHUSHI, will resent such an act. I think he is definitely a good support for Arnav, even if Arnav doesn't see it now.

Chapter 3

She turned to face him, and he was surprised to see the slight hint of fear in her expression. Surely she could not be afraid of him!

Oh, no you didn't! You wouldn't put that line just to assay the role of a shy bride by Khushi. There is a hesitation, reluctance, shyness… NEVER FEAR for someone who readily accepted to marry this eager lover. What the hell did Arnav do? THE PLOT THICKENS.

"Because an emergency meeting of this sort cannot be held in the absence of the majority stakeholders..."

"He's talking about me."

Okay, there is absolutely no doubt in my mind that this is KHUSHI! Could she be working undercover for the hostile takeover? If so, then WHY??? OMG! Khushi assaying the role of a VILLAIN! I LOVE IT.

Chapter 4

Because he deserved this, and more. And she had waited a long time to deal this blow.

So, this is hinting towards Revenge best served Cold tangent! Oh man, you blew me away by leaving us with PAYAL GUPTA! Freaking, this is REVENGE!

Chapter 5

"Once I've made up my mind, I never change it, Khushi. And I will do my best to make sure that you don't either." (Arnav from Chapter 2)

"If you think that I am going to file for divorce, then you are sorely mistaken."

I love how you reversed the role of betrayal. Arnav is betrayed by Khushi because SHE ACTUALLY DID SOMETHING WRONG. And, Khushi in her vengeance, without stepping back to think the plan through, unleashed her wrath on Arnav (and, herself coincidently) and now she is thinking she can walk off from this marriage. Khushi Raizada, Arnav is a man of his words. I have yet to see what you are going to do repent your sins. Should Arnav Singh Raizada from SINS give you his input on SINS and how to repent? Again, I can't help but feel that Arnav definitely has some more SECRETS too up his sleeves that is yet to be revealed, leading to both individuals repenting the words I DO.