VIRMAN FF*ek mein aur ek tu*PART 14* NEW UPDATE

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keerthana

@keerthu27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

hey shilpa thank you so much for dedicating tis to me.so sweet of u.

sry i was not able to comment before becoz i read ur story in my phone.i can't rply long comment in my phone.now my parents are sleeping i am giving comment without making noise.

the update was freaking awesome.the way manvi called virat "MY SWEET PERVERT VADHERA🤣"tat was hilarious.

so virat is going to fall for manvi first.aww virat is getting jealous.😆

loved ayesha she is such a sweet heart.

now who is tat charlie hope he helps virman to understand their feelings for eachother.the bike game was cool😳.

thank you once again for dedicating me.love you.

and take care of your health.take medicines properly and take rest.you should not update till you are fully recovered.it's keertu nanny's order.🤓.

bye see ya.love you 🤗

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saemeen

@shabsem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Lovely update...loved d bike scene so aftr so much of fighting they are falling for each other. .its so sweet of ayesha she know virman feelings even b4 they knew it...n loved jealous virat thanks to charles 4 dat. .thanks 4 pm n get well soon dear

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Fab Update..! VirMan attracted to each other..n 3rd angle was needed so they could understand wht they actually feel...nicly written...Continue sooon!

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Anjali

@cutiepie2244

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Awww awww awww awww awww that was really really really awesome👏👏... i read this part almost 4 tyms... i can't beleive that it was that awesome...
iIt was super duper, fantastic, fabulous, fantabulous, awesome threesome... i don't have more words to say that how much i loved it...👍🏼👍🏼
Virat manvi scene at game session was super...ufff ufff ufff they were really close 2 each other i was really imagining that scene... really too good...😛😛...
As usuall tuning of virat n Aisha was really too good... Virat understands both the girls sooo much... he is really a great friend...
The scene when the bottle broke was great too awesome as well...👏👏... that scene was sooo cute where virat said (wait don't move... kaanch k tukrey lag jaenge) i was like awww...
Loved the jealous side of virat when manvi said that she is going to a date with Charles Dawson... plz make them realize their feelings sooon... m eagely waiting 4 it... plz make it sooon😛😛...
In the end... in short i will say that it was really a great update... continue ASAP...
LOVED IT 2 THE CORE👍🏼👍🏼...

thanxxx 4 the pm sweety...

Edited by cutiepie2244 - 12 years ago

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Ashvi

@_Virman_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

awesome update dear

sorry for late comment

but part 3 and 4 were awesome

you rock

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AKSH

@LV88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

again lovely update, love their bonding with each other.. loved game part. ayesha is really cute and waiting for the virman to fall for each other, really awesome...seems like perfect family..

and take care dear.. health always comes first. we will wait for the next update :)

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keetha...

@keetha...

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

shilpa...!!! yar awesome update tha...
full of emotions...
u have united the sisters i loved that part especially manvi's expression kwning the truth of her sisters hate
and i really liked their manthras...;)

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ramanirani

@ramanirani

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

heY shilpa sorry for the delay dear
just now read all the 4 parts
it was an amazing ff dear
the story line is much more interesting
looking forward for the future parts
really a very nice job shilpa
a big thanks for the pm dear..

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deepika03

@deepika03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

i wanna see virat evn more jealous! lolz

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MadhuChowdary

@MadhuChowdary

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

hey silpa...update was awesome...so someone is ready to fall i guess...i m waiting for their love story...virat's possessiveness was good...i liked it...i like jealousy in a relation ship...virman's conversation was funny...you didn't miss the funny part...what happened to you silpa...i hope you are doing well...take proper care...thanks for the pm...