VIRMAN FF*ek mein aur ek tu*PART 14* NEW UPDATE - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey...silpa...update was nice...sisters bond was good...manvi is so loving..you portrayed her love and care for her sister nicely...virman's mantra's were funny...someone is falling...isn't it? virat's support for both the sister's was awesome...thanks for the update and for the pm...take care...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi dearies... howz u all...
i know u all might be waiting for next part eagerly... sorry for being late this time...
but coming update may bring smile on ur faces...😉😆😃
this for u keertu... love u dear:)😳
i'll update in few minutes... hope u all enjoy it:)😊
till then...bye... take care:):):)🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys... hi:)
missed me???... hope u all would have😉
now coming to update... it's gonna be a lovely, romantic ride for u all:)
the song for this update is...
its song from movie paathshala; aye khuda... its a new song hope u all like it:)
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Part 4

Days were going on… everything was going normal. Ayesha was getting to know her di more and even Virat. Manvi and Virat still played pranks on each other and sometimes they used to get into huge fights like husband and wife and Ayesha controlled the situation. They were now like a family for each other.

Manvi returned from her office early as she didn't have much work today.

Virat:- u r early today….!!

Manvi:- do u have problem with that….

Virat:- I have so many problem regarding u… but I don't have whole day to tell u….

Manvi:- where is Ayesha?...

Just then Ayesha came downstairs hearing their verbal fight….

Ayesha:- di… u r back home early…. Wow!!

Manvi:- yes angel…. and now we both r going out to have some fun…. So get ready!!!

Ayesha:- (looking towards Virat) and Virat??

Manvi:- I said we going to have some fun… not to get boar!!!!

Virat:- don't worry… I won't like to go out with a witch….

Ayesha:- hey guys stop it. Now please don't start fighting again…. Virat u r coming with us… and di he will join us too. Now no more arguments on this topic or else I'll make u both go on date with each other!!!! (Threatening them)

Manvi and Virat: - (in union) NO!!!!

Ayesha: - that's like good kids…. Now we should go get ready…. Fun is waiting for us….

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Virat, manvi and Ayesha were enjoying their time together. Even though Virat and manvi fought for every silly things but still they all were having a memorable time with each other….

They were at mall when Ayesha dragged them to games section…..

Ayesha:- wow di…. New York is not that bad as I thought…..

Manvi:- hmm….

Ayesha was having ball playing the games and winning each of them…..

Ayesha:- di, Virat …. Let's play bike racing game…. It's my favorite….

Manvi:- no Ayesha I don't want to play…. U go on….

Ayesha:- please di…. Chalo na…. it's so much fun….

Manvi:- please angel….

Virat:- leave it Ayesha…. Ur di is scared that she will lose the game….

Manvi:- (pointing finger towards Virat) hey…. I m not scared of anything…..

Virat:- really!!!! Then take this coin and start playing…..

Manvi:- k….. (Taking coin from his hand)

Ayesha took her coin and sat on the bike and started playing but manvi was bit hesitating as she never played these kinds of games in her life…

Virat:- dar gayi kya???

Manvi:- NO!!!!...

Manvi immediately sat on bike fuming in anger and inserted coin…. She looked at screen in front of her which indicated that game was about to begin…. Manvi looked at left side of her where Virat was standing looking at her smirking…..

Manvi again moved her eyes on screen and game started…. Manvi tightly shut her eyes fearing of falling off from bike as it started to swing…. Manvi thought of giving up and was about to get down from bike when she felt a warm body leaning on her and hot breathes against her neck… manvi turned her face and her eyes suddenly got wide seeing Virat…..

Virat:- kaha ja rahi ho…. Game abhi shuru ho gaya hai….. keep ur eyes on screen…. Or else we will lose…

Virat placed his hand over Manvi's on handle of bike… he brought his face next to her cheeks touching… manvi found her senses going numb. She found hard to concentrate on game as well as on breathing…. Virat's eyes were glued to the screen and the moment he saw the turn he moved the bike right side making her jerk in his arms…there was no distance between them. Manvi wasn't able to understand why she wasn't able to speak a word. She felt as if she forgot all the words seeing his magical green eyes. But Virat was still focused on game…. Manvi's trail of thoughts broke as soon as she heard him yelling…

Virat:- yayy….. We won first lap…. (Looking at manvi)

Just then he saw Manvi's dazed face and realized their proximity. He was totally frozen seeing her looking at him with those deep brown beautiful eyes. He never noticed that she had such beautiful eyes. Her just one simple glare was now making his heart run like 100 miles per second. They were so involved in each other that they didn't even realize that they lost the game…. And they still were in same position staring at each other…. when suddenly they both were brought back from their dreamland by Ayesha's voice….

Ayesha:- I think u both r lost!!!! (Grinning)

They both looked at Ayesha standing beside them folding her hands….

Manvi:- woh..Hum…. (Stammering)

Ayesha:- I mean…. U both lost the game!!!

And they turned their faces towards screen which showed how pathetically they lost the game….. Virat moved down from bike avoiding making eye contact with manvi as well as with Ayesha…. Because he himself didn't knew why he was so affected by her.

They both were silent all along the way home. Ayesha kept looking at both of their faces which were totally flushed….

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Manvi was not able to sleep soundly as she her mind was occupied by Virat's thoughts. She wanted to get rid of these random thoughts out of her mind, even the mantra was not working today. Hence she moved downstairs towards kitchen. She took the wine bottle and poured the wine in glass and was about to drink when suddenly she felt her heart beats getting fast again. She saw Virat standing in front of her. Her grip on glass got loose and it fell down making a breaking sound of glass…. Manvi was about to move from her spot when Virat spoke suddenly…

Virat:- wait….. Don't move…. Kaanch ke tukde lag jayenge. Be careful….

Manvi looked at ground where pieces of glass were scattered all around. He came near her and moved his hand forward…

Virat:- mera haath pakado…..

Manvi looked at him making her eyes smaller…

Virat:- don't worry… kahin bhagake nahi le ja raha hoon…. I m just trying to help u….. So just hold my hand

Manvi:- (making angry face) no…. I don't need ur help….

Virat:- don't act like a stubborn child k… u r on bare legs. Glass pieces can hurt u…..

Manvi ignored him and walked two steps when a glass piece pricked her leg and she winced in pain….

Virat moved forward and surrounded his arm around her waist lifting her and moved her towards dining table…. She sat on chair and started crying in pain…..

Virat:- see I told u… u will hurt urself…..

Manvi:- (wincing in pain) u idiot get first aid box immediately. U can give me a lecture afterwards….

Virat moved towards shelf and took the medicine box. He kneeled on his knees and held her leg and gently removed glass piece. Manvi screamed in pain. Tears were running down her eyes…. Virat tried concentrating on dressing her wound avoiding her cries. As he finished his work he stood up and smiled looking at her….her eyes were still shut tight and tears were running down her eyes. Virat leaned forward on her bending and unknowingly his hand moved near her cheeks to wipe the tears which were all over her rosy cheeks….but suddenly he moved his hand back as soon as he heard his name….

Manvi:- Virat… ho gaya….

Virat:- (taking a step back) haan ho gaya…

Manvi tried standing up on her legs but it was paining badly.

Virat:- do u want help…..

Manvi:- (smiling) no…. I m absolutely fine….. I can walk by my own….

Virat:- (smirking) k…. then good night…

Virat started walking towards his room when….

Manvi:- hey listen… I think….

Manvi looked elsewhere but not at Virat….

Virat:- (turning around) u think what??? (Raising brows)

Manvi:- k…. fine…. I can't walk and I need Ur help…..

Virat moved near her and surrounded his one arm on her shoulder and in other he held her hand. They walked together till her room and he helped her sit on her bed.

Virat:- I m surprised today!!!

Manvi:- why?

Virat:- u remember once in the college u were badly hurt on ur knees while running behind me and that time u didn't even let a tear come out ur eye even though blood was flowing down… but today u cried like a little child just for a small cut…..

Manvi:- u don't know how much I wanted to cry that time but I maintained myself calm just because I didn't wanted to look like a cry baby in front of everyone. (Laughing) u know what, after I was brought back to hostel I cried whole day…..

Virat:- I too felt bad after u left…. For first time I felt like apologizing u…..

Manvi:- then why didn't u?

Virat:- because u were a witch…..

Manvi:- (opening her mouth wide) u pervert….

Virat:- please don't start again. We can continue our fight tomorrow, it's quite late now. Good night!!!

Manvi:- bad night!!!

Virat left from there smiling after seeing her back to her previous mode….. He found himself in so ease, as after that mall incident he felt very odd around manvi. The effects he felt on that terrace incident he was feeling them again. But now everything seemed to be back to normal…..

Next morning Ayesha came down towards kitchen to talk with Virat about yesterday's game incident. She was so happy to see something clicking in between them. It was like her wish coming true. But as she moved in… smile on her face faded away. She saw them again arguing on something.

Ayesha:- (in low voice to herself) Ayesha, ye lo sab kuch back to normal. Yeh log kab samjhenge ki they r made for each other….. Hey bhagwan please kuch chamatkaar kijiye ki yeh dono kabhi alag na ho…. (Joining hands)

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Days were passing on and manvi, Ayesha and Virat created a special bond in between each other. They were like a family now…… one crazy hot family.

Virat was making dinner and Ayesha was helping him, when manvi entered in singing song…. Waving hands in air and dancing….

Manvi:- pehla nasha pehla khumaar. Naya pyaar hai naya intazaar….. Hmmm…

Virat and Ayesha looked at her making their eyes wide in shock. They both looked at each other and Virat made a ewww face signaling that her sister has gone mad!!!!

Manvi:- hey guys… today I m on top of world….

Manvi came behind them and put her both arms around them…

Manvi:- Virat this world is so beautiful….. I feel like dancing!!!!!

Virat moved her hand from his shoulder and checked whether she is in fever….

Virat:- (patting cheeks) manvi r u alright?

Ayesha:- di app aise kyu behave kar rahi ho??

Manvi:- (pulling Ayesha's cheeks)my sweet little angle and (pulling Virat's cheeks too) my sweet pervert nanny vadhera… today Charles came to meet me…..

Virat:- what!!! Prince Charles came to meet u!!! (Getting excited)

Manvi:- no..no..no… Charles Dawson!!! U know he is so handsome… dashing and se…

Virat suddenly kept his palm on her mouth….

Virat:- (whispering near her ear) manvi… yahan bache bhi rahte hai…. unke samne aise words bolna nahi chahiye…..

Ayesha:- Virat… it ok…. (Looking at manvi) di is he HOT??

Manvi moved his palm from her mouth and nodded yes dreamingly….

Virat slapped his forehead…..

Manvi:- u know he is managing director of Stimson's company. I met him in a conference few days ago…. and today he asked me for a date…. I m so excited!!!!

Virat:- what!... and u said yes?

Manvi:- obviously…. And we r going out tomorrow…. So please u both don't wait for me tomorrow night…. maybe I will be late!!!! (Winking)

Virat:- r u mad manvi…. I mean u both met just once… how can u go on date with him?

Manvi:- no… I met him many times…. And I very well know him….. So I m going tomorrow….

Ayesha:- di…. Is he going to pick u up from home or from Ur office?

Manvi:- why r u asking this?

Virat:- I want to see him di….. Please tell him to pick u from home.

Manvi:- yes he is coming here. So now u both enjoy Ur dinner as I have lost my appetite… good night my dear lovelies… (And she left for her room)

Virat made a disgusting face and stared at manvi and her pagalpan….

Virat:- ur di has gone nuts again!!!

Ayesha:- don't worry… she will be back to normal in few days…..

Virat:- no… I mean I have seen her going on dates but this time she is special happy…. (Making suspicious face)

Ayesha:- than that's good na…. shouldn't u be happy for her??

Virat kept mum. He didn't actually like her going on date with a handsome hot sexy Charles….. He hated this Charles before knowing about him….

Ayesha:- hey don't worry…(rubbing his back) I said na…. she will get over him in few days…. all u have to do is get a new wine bottle for her.

Virat:- I think u r right….

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Next day at evening manvi got ready for her date. She was super excited and happy. Suddenly a door bell rang and Virat came out to open door when he saw manvi coming downstairs. She was looking drop dead gorgeous. Just then a door bell rang again bringing Virat back to earth….. He snapped his thoughts and opened door… he saw a handsome young British guy standing with a sweet smile.

*charles dawson*

Charles:- is this manvi Sharma's house?

Virat:- (suspiciously) yes!!

Charles:- oh… hi I m Charles… and u..??

Virat:- I m Virat her… her…..(he was hesitating to tell him that he was her nanny….)

Manvi:- (from behind) he is my friend Charles!!

Virat turned around to see manvi genuinely smiling at him and most shocking part she called him friend….

Manvi:- hoon na mein?... (Making innocent face)

Virat:- (smiling) kyu? Tired of fighting with me?

Manvi:- no… just giving a try to do friendship with u. I mean let's see how bad u could be…. So what say?

Virat:- (dramatically) let me think….

Manvi:- tum soch kar kal batana mein abhi ja rahi hoon. Mera prince wait kar raha hai mere liye…. Bye!

Virat:- but Ayesha wanted to meet him…. why don't u wait for her. She will be back in few minutes….

Manvi:- its k… she can meet him anytime, and actually we are getting late. It's not that Charles is not going to come here again…. chalo now… bye!!!!

Virat:- bye!!! Hey ghar jaldi ana… mujhe iss gore bhoot pe bharosa nahi hai. And if there is any problem call me...K??

Manvi:- k mere nanny…. Aab mein jau?

Virat:- k… go…..

Something pricked in Virat's heart. He didn't like her going out with Charles, but then he told himself that it's her life and he has no right to take any decision for her.

***********************************************actually guys... i m not feeling well so the next part might get delayed... i m not sure..but might be...hope u all can understand!!!!i want to thank u all guys... mentioned below for liking and commenting for the previous part...
criticism is most welcomed... i would love to know what's lacking in my story... so that i could make it more better:)
till then bye... take care... and god bless u all:):):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unres...
Yayy...first to comment... 😊
Fabulous update shilpa...
It was so good yaar...
Finally virman falling for each other...
N jealous virat...wow...great.. 😉 ...i m sure this Charles will make virman closer...
Loved the romantic scene on the bike...
Ayesha is such a sweetheart...she noes virman are made for each other... 😊 ...loved her for tat...will be waiting for next part...thank u so much for the pm...
...Get well soon...take care yaar...hope u get well soon... 😊
Edited by yaminnthida - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowowowowowowo it was awesome! First of all thnx for a long update which you always give hehehe
Such a cute and romantic update you gave!
Luv you for this shilpa!
Coming to the update...
I loved every part of it!
That small video game incident took away my breath too along with their's.
Ayesha rocksss!
Truly her role is rocking! And when she threatened them on sending a date i was holding my stomach and laughing!!!
I am so happy that now all are like a family!
Ooo manvi is going on a date...
I sense a jealousy track!! Hehehehe
would be awesome if i sensed it right!
Would love to see jealous virat!
Charles is looking hawt!
Awww was drooling over his pic for nearly 5 minutes!
Ayesha's dialouge that he should get a new wine bottle for her as she will be over charles in a few days was hilarious!
virat is feeling embaressed on calling him nanny he is so awww!!! I am in love with this TRIO!
They are awesome threesome!
I hope virman unite soon!
Would love to see some romance blooming between them soon!
Continue soon and please pm me! And thnx for this pm! And get well soon! Speedy recovery! Muaaa!
Edited by ..nikki_vijay.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Health comes first
take care of ur self
Coming back to the update
Brilliant update shilpa...
Ooh...so virman feeling sth fr each other...
Luved the bike scene between virman
Luved ayesha...fr noeing virman fr made fr each other
Luved the jealous virat...
Hope virman realises soon
Update soon
Thnks fr the pm
Edited by princesshelen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
GREAT DEAR. NOW VIRAT IS JEOLOUS. WHEN HE UNDERSTAND HIS LOVE FOR HER.😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awwee jealous virat.. i love this jealous virat... nd i loved aisha too.. totally update ws fab👍🏼... thanks fr such cute update.. flying kisses to u... nd take of ur health...
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Posted: 12 years ago
loving this new story...loving their chemistry in this ff...pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb part..👏..Loved it...especially the bike game scene and the glass breaking scene...you just write the VirMan scenes so very well..⭐️...Just when something was going to start between them this Charles dropped down I hope he goes away from the scene soon.😛.and take your time dear and take care of yourself...Thanks a lot for the pm...😊

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