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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#491

Beautiful Update!!

I literally went back in time that i had visited London, it was really so wonderfully described almost fell like i am there on the streets with Khushi!

Along with khushi i have also developed a massive crush on this "Arnav" , and somehow when ever he calls himself "old man" makes me want to do crazy things😉 to him and squash that stupid notion of his.

Its not like Khushi is Lolita or something !!

Arnav in his tux and Khushi in her fabulous black gown !!!❤️

Now the next update makes me very anxious... she knows of her attraction towards him,she knows he is not seeing Ameen and she is a little high ... so where does this move now ?? I dont wish to see a drunk Khushi getting carried away !! 😕

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#492

Totally, totally worth the wait, K!

This chapter was fabulous. Khushi looked beautiful, might I say. The dress was perfect - just what I would have chosen to dress her in myself - and Arnav gets 10 sainthood points for keeping his sanity :)

I love the way the chapter flows, not to mention the story - it sounds like a dream run - a small town, committed to work girl finding her groove in the world and a man as splendid as Arnav, adding just the right amount of drama and fantasy to keep things in balance.

In the show, I always felt the build up to Diwali and Diwali itself was the best phase and might I say, that I get the feeling that, this is going the same route...from good to greatness!

Great update, Sistah and never worry...your readers are here, waiting as you tell your story, the way you want to!

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#493

Finally!! Thanks a lot! now off to read in a while..

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praseetha

@praseetha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#494

loved the update.
i liked khushi's dress.

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thesis

@thesis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#495

Wow arnav is so protective am glad kushi was able to discover that ameen is gonna be engaged and thanku for the long update though it was late am glad it.was long my favourite part was where arnav thinks to himself about the four days spent with kushi

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vgedin

@vgedin

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#496

Oooh My Gabbar is back! And with a bang. So happy :)

These two in spite of their opposite natures create a perfect picture, don't they? Warm and comforting and lovely, like they complete each other, just perfect. Both besotted by the other too, physically and emotionally. He notices everything about her and nothing about him misses her eyes. He even senses her presence!

The night is young and I am so excited to know what lies ahead. She does look wonderful tonight and to top that she is high and aware that this Ameen business is nothing.. ooh ab kya hoga ?

Welcome back dear, I'm already waiting for the next update :)

PS - Now I want to buy Shalimar!

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citi

@citi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#497

Beautiful dress. You have created the atmosphere so well...the manner in which this trip, the experiences, getting to know Arnav, all have been magical for her...like a dream, comes across. A young intelligent girl venturing out of her comfort zone and experiencing different facets of life and gaining in the process...nicely built up.

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Arati

@RTlicious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#498

Oooh...loved the dress! and I simply can't wait for the next chapter...why do i have a feeling that something BIG is gonna happen...Raat baki...baat baki...ladki talli n ladka fida! hayye! waiting eagerly for sunday!! :)

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inajnar

@inajnar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#499

NB,

Super update !!

Interesting point I noted was Khushi didnt get any present for NK though she got something for Arnav...

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#500

I am so so glad that you have updated..was really missing this gem

Back to the update I just love your attention to detail style of writing...you really make it seem so real as if the readers are watching it all happening in front of them...

As for Arnav and Khushi all I can hope that they both listen to their heart soon...and go along with it..looking forward to the night...

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