Hola !!!
So today i finally caught up with all the updates ! U say this is your first FF ? Goodness , i wonder how the 2nd , 3rd or 10th would be ! U are a talented writer NB ! I won't say Amazing becoz u have to try harder to reach there , plz don't mind ! I am not a writer , but , after reading some fantastic stories on this forum the level has been set too high . I know u will reach there very soon !
I love N Kay , he is really cute and as assumed by khushi , he is all what every girl wants in her life partner ! If Khushi goes with Arnav in the end , i hope u have something better planned out for him ! Heartbreak would not be easy for him .
Arnav is again , Wonderful . Not the arrogant type from the show . He is calm , composed , charming and his straight-forwardness is what i love the most ! He knows what he want from life which is highly appreciable ! The fact that he is trying to maintain his distance from khushi is really sensible , he is aware of his limits and this makes him more lovable !
Khushi - well she is something we all can relate to ! She is just like us , me , she is from a small town , loves her parents and friends , is passionate about her work and knows her limits ! Her Mantra -'have fun , without crossing the line' is realistic , its what we say to ourselves , everyday . The respect with which she treats every individual is commendable ! I just don't understand , why she is so attracted towards Arnav ? Just because of his looks and personality ? That is so unlike her ! I mean Arnav doesn't have the qualities which she would have wanted in her partner ! Or is it the pull which is felt by soulmates ?
I'm waiting for the story to unfold . How did the entire scenario change ? How did khushi reach the hospital for an abortion , what happened ? And ofcourse , who is the father of the child ?
So many questions ! And only u can answer them ! So keep writing ! Can't wait for the London trip now !
P.S. What do i call u ? Basanti or NB just doesn't seem right ? If u could plz tell ur name ?
Thanks, for your honest feedback. I'm just an amateur writer. There are some seriously good writers in this forum. Im writing as I have some time in hand at the moment, given a choice Id rather spend all my time reading than writing.
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