u belong to me..a kr ff #2(CHAP 20 UPDATED) - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
res...:D

unres...😊

First congrats fr ur new thread...i read ur stories in one go...and dey r awesome!!...

I loved kria nd her mom's convo in d first part...😃

I seriously hate taani!!...shez urgh!!...😡

Yash and kria ki friendship is soo cute bt yash likes her nt fair...*pout*...bt chalo isshi kaaran rey toh jealous ho raha hain,,,,😉

Overall pura ff mast hain!!...bt yeh rey kaha gayad hogaya!!...😕

Update soon...
Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Woww awsome update di. . . . . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
awesome update...
kriya finally said that she loves rey...
yash bekaar mein hi pit gya...lol..
rey ka gussa...
waiting for d nxt update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
loved d update..
it was awesome...
yash proposed n kria s shocked but yash knows abt rey n kria...
now he s soothin kria so she stops cryin n tel him wat actually happened but rey came down boilin in anger n punched yash without lettin him talk idiot...
n kria got angry n left wit yash from there...
rey in ful anger wat ll he do... somethin stupid r somethin to scare kria...
accordin to precap he s no wher to b found
now waitin for d next update pm me wen u update..
Edited by vaishu88 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
hayyyeee... nhiii... aisa kyu kiya...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
congo for new thread...
update was superb...
finally yash confessed...
rey punced yash n then kr part.
loved it...
precap seems interesting ..
thnx for pm..update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
awesome ff...cant wait to read further...
Rey deserved all what hpned in the beginning but ab toh its out of control...love it totally...
Im afraid Rey khud ko kuch kr hee na le...
pls contine asap nd do pme me! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Superb update 😊
Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
arggg...ye kya ho rha h
kriya ne kha ki she likes rey 2 yash
bt mis understandings...urggg😭😭
n rey kaha chala gya
cnt wait 2 read
jldi update plzzz😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
😛chapter 17😛

kria took yash from the garden...to yash's room...

IN GARDEn...

rey was looking at kria still she disapperead...

rey:(murmer) mai uski zindagi mai kuch myne nahi rakta...(he closed his eyes n fists tight as tears made their
way...n he walked (like a lifeless body...he didnt knw were he was goin...)

IN YASH ROOM

kria was cleanin his cut near his lips...

ya: aisa kyun kaha kria??

kr: kya kaha??(still focusing on cleanin)

ya: vo rey se... u love him rite...??

kr: yash plz i dont want to talk abt him...

ya: kria??

kr: yash fr god sake please(shouted)

yash didnt utter a word...she finished cleanin n applied ointment n left frm their not talking to him...

she entered her room but girls were still gossiping...

sh: kr yash ne kya kaha..??

kr: ha...vo kuch nahi kuch arrangements ke baare mai baat karna tha usse...

sharon was nt convinced by her answer...

sh: accha ok...

kria moved to her washroom n closed the door...she stood in frnt of the mirror...as tear rolled down her
cheeks...she closed her mouth tightly to control her voice...she fell on her knees cryin hard closin her
mouth...

sim: sharon chalo na bahar chalte hai...

girls: haan its borin chalo chalte hai...

sh: ok...

girls left frm their...shar knocked the washroom door...

sh: kria...kria ??

kr: haa..haan sharon..

sh: itni der kya kar rahi ho andhar...? r u alright..??

kr: haan m fine..mai naha rahi hoon...

sh: ab(confused)

kr: haan sharon m stinking issiliye socha nahalu...kyu? kya hua??

sh: kuch nahi hum sab bahar jaa rahe hai...jaldi ajao...ok

kr: haan ok tum jao..door close karke jana...

sh: ok...(sayin dis sharon left frm their...still nw kria controlled som hw...cause fooling sharon is nxt to
impossible...when she heared the door close sound...she cried even more harder...

kr: kyun rey humesha aap mujhe majboor karthe ho...jo baathe mai apni zindagi mai aapko kabi nahi kehna
chahti hoon aap zabardasti mujhe kehellwathe ho...kyun ??kyu???(crying)

IN GARDEN...

boys were already their...the girls joined them...

sh: swayam rey kahan hai??

sw: pata nahi yahi kahi hoga...aur kria...??

sh: haan vo aathi hi hogi...

sw: ok...

they talked played...n enjoyed finally kria came to garden looking pale...she was in this...


sw: kria r u alright...??(concerned)

kr: she just nodded sayin a yes...after sometime yash also joined them...

nil: bro wat happed yeh chot...??

ya: ha..kuch nahi jab shave kar raha tha cut hogaya...

everybody was convinced...

after sometime...

vi: hum sab yaha hai...yeh rey kaha chala gaya dude..??

sw: mai bi wahi soch rahi hoon...ek minute let me call...(he called rey...but their was no response)guys
vo uta nahi raha...

sh: phir ek baar try karo????

sw: yup(again he tried...the number u have been dailled is currently switched off)wat?? its switch off...

sh: mujhe dar lag raha hai...

sw: donty worry sharon hum hum sab iss ghar mai doondlenge...wat say guys...

all: yes(except kriyash)

all move inside the house and start searching him..but their was no clue of rey...nw even kriyash were
searching him but all in vain...all were tensed to hell...karan seeing them

ka: swy..swaym kya hua itna tension mai kyun ho...??

sw: sir rey kahi dikh nahi raha...

kr: wat??(shocked)

sw: haan sir...(all gatherred near karan...)

sh: swayam hum har jagah usse doond liya but vo kahi nai hai...

tani ki magarmach ki aasoon behne lage...kria looked at her...but she was nt interested in it...😡

kr: kahan jaa sakta hai vo...??

ek servent fellow was just passing them...

kr: kaka rukiye..aap rey ko kahi dekha hai...??

kak: kaun sab...??

kr: vo ladka jo bahut handsome hai...swayum wat was he wearing...??

sw: ha..haan sir vo white shirt n a jeans...

kak: vo ladka...jungle ke taraf ja raha tha...

all: wat...??

kria was sacred to hell...

kr: oh god ab shaam bi hogayi hai...kaha doonde usse...(but kria already left everybody was unaware of
it)...after sometime around 6 pm

swaym was walkin to n fro...karan was talking to someone to find out rey.n girls were crying.swaym looked at
everyone...

sw:kr...kria kahan hai??(he almost shouted)

all: kria??they looked eachother but they didnt find her...

swayam caught hold of his head n sat on the couch...

ka: kya hua??

sh: sir vo kria kahi nahi dikh rahi...

nw karan was also tensed...coz it was dark helll...

sw:(murmuring) zaroor vo rey ko doondne chali gayi hogi...(crying)

girls ka haal toh they were crying...

swaym got up frm the couch n was abt to move...

ka: kahan jaaa rahe ho swayam...??

sw: rey aur kria ko doondne...

ka:swayam tum nahi jaasakte...its night...n again ull b lost hum kuch karthe hai...

sw: kya kare sir??...aapko pata hai kria ko andere se bahut dar lagtha hai...kahan hogi vo??
...(he fell on his knees)

sh: swayam (she hugged him n they both cried)

HERE iN JUNGLE...



rey was so lost..he never had any idea of where was he going????? he went n sat under a tree lifeless...

HERE KRIA...

when she came to knw that rey was in this jungle...she came running...but later reality dawned her she
looked around it was hell dark...the creepy noises scared her to death...she closed her eyes tight n shouted
"rey"...

guys n girls were constantly trying rey's number.but no use...karan as sent some people in search of
kriyaansh...

boys insisted karan sir that they will also find them,,but karan didnt allow them...

yash was standing as a statue of wat to do n wat not...he blamed himself n th gang never payed interest to
him...

KRIA IN JUNGLE...

kria opened her eyes...to find again all alone in the middle of the jungle...

kr: (thinkin)mai kamzor nahi pad sakti mujhe rey ko doondna hai...she took a deep breadth n walked calling
out his name...

after around 11 pm...🤣

bharat taught of trying again...so he took his cell n dailled rey's number...and yes rey picked it...

bh: rey bharat bol raha hoon...(hearing this swaym grabbed his phone frm him)

sw: rey were the hell r u??(shouted)

rey: kyun kya hua??(annoyed)

sw: kya hua?? rey hum tumhe yaha doond rahe hai...kahan ho tum...??

rey: kisi ko kya farak padtha hai...mai kaha bi jao...kuch log kush honge na...

sw: rey bakwaas bandh karo...bolo where r u??

rey: pata nahi mai kahan hoon...mujhe kuch der akela rehna tha...issiliye...

sw: rey hv u lost it...kria tumhe doondkar akele jungle chali hayi hai...

rey got a jakta of his life...

rey stood up...:kya?????(shocked)😲😲😆

sw: haan rey kria jungle mai hi hai...(sobbing)

rey: wat ???tum usse yaha aane kaise diya,,,,,,,,,,,oh shit!!!!!!! usse andere se dar lagtha hai...(he gripped
his hair lookin around)swayam mai phone rakti hoon ill find kria...

sw: ok...

rey cut the call...

rey: kria kahan ho.tum teek hona its hell dark...kitna dar gayi hogi...kria(shouted)

HERE KRIA...

kr: rey(shouting n sobbing)

dono sun nahi sakte ok...😉😆😆

rey: battcutter(shouting )

kr: rey kahan ho tum m sorry(crying)

rey: kria kahan ho tum m soory(crying)

kr: rey!!!!!!!(shouting)

rey felt like he heard something...n he raised his voise...

rey: kria(shouted as much as he can)

but kria didnt hear him...😆😆

the weather was freezing ...n kria voice was chokin due to cold n ...she was shiverring

kr: rey!!(slowly)

their was a huge thunder...

kria closed her ears she was frightened...n shouted rey's name on top of her voice...

dis time rey heard her😉 n came running the direction frm were the sound came...n fr his luck he saw her she
was in the same position...she had closed her ears n eyes...

he came n touched her...she flinched back still closing her eyes n ears...

kr: rey...(n started crying...)

rey: kria???

kria slowly opened her eyes n the sight which she saw...

kR: rey(she ran to him n hugged him tight n cried in his shoulders)

rey: shhh!!! daro maat mai hoon na...

kr: (still hugging)kaha chale gaye teh aap.mai kitni dar gayi thi...(crying)

rey hugged her more tight...

rey(stiil hugging)tumhe kyun farak padtha hai mai zinda ho ya nahi...

kr: bcoz i...love love u...(she said crying)

rey was on cloud 9...he broke the hug...n cupped her face...

rey: tu..tum sach bol rahi ho...

she came to senses n moved back...

kr: vo sorry i just came in search of u...(lookin down)

rey: kria yeh drama baadh karo...(annoyed)

kr: mai kuch drama nahi kar raha hoon...(lookin the other way...)

rey pulled her towards him...

rey: toh kyun yaha hahi mujhe doondte hue...(gritin his teeth)

kr: vo..vo mai...

rey: kyun hahi...??(in anger)

kr: mai...

rey: kyun??(caught hold of her shoulders...)

kr:(shouted) kyun ki mai tumhe pyaar karthi hoon...mai aapke jaise apne pyarr ko bool nahi payi...do u get
that...

rey: kria m sorry...

but she started moving...

rey: kria??

she walked fastly...the reasult was she slipped n fell in a small pond...

rey offered her help but she rejected...n got up she was drenched

they both were shivering...they had a small llhh...

rey saw a hut...

imagine karo at night...😆😆😆

rey: kria dekho waha koi hut lagtha hai...chalo(n caught hold of her wrist)

kr: (she pulled his hand) mai nahi hahoongi...

rey: tumhe aana padega...(n he dragged her to the hut n they went in...it was dark but rey found some dried
leaves n put it in the centre n lit it up(pata nahi kaise😆😆) ...kria was just standing hugging her shoulders...she was fully
drenched...he removed his shirt n handed to her...she looked at him confused

rey: tum beeg gayi ho so change warna bihmaar pad jaoge...

kr: mujhe nahi chahiye...n she was abut to sit but he pulled her up...

rey: tumhe ek baar samaj nahi aati...(grittin his teeth)

kr: vo..vo mai kaha change karo??

rey loosened his grip...

rey: oh mai ??uss taraf turn karoonga...so u can change...(sayin this he turned the other side...)

she moved to a corner n looked at rey...he was facing the other side...she slowly removed her top...n she
removed her shorts n wore his shirt...n kept her dress aside to dry...

kr: hogaya...😳

rey tuned n looked at her...she was lookin down n was pullin his shirt as it reached oly till her mid thigh...she
was looking sensous in his shirt...after some secs she looked at him n was lost in his chocolate brown eyes...llhh sab slow motion chal raha tha...😆🤣{mai aur meri imagination🤣)

Jaadu hai nasha hai madhoshiyan hai
Tujhko bhulake aab jaao kahan
Jaadu hai nasha hai madhoshiyan hai
Tujhko bhulake aab jaao kahan

he slowly walked to her but she never moved a inch...she was just lookin at him...he took hold of her
hand...n pulled her sh ebanged on him her hands on his bare chest...he caressed her cheek with his as she
dug her nails on his chest...he moved to her ear...

rey: mai tumhe kabi bool nahi paahunga kria...

Dekhti hai jis tarah se teri nazrein mujhe
Main khud ko chupaao kahan
Jaadu hai nasha hai madhoshiyan hai
Tujhko bhulake aab jaao kahan

she looked at him...as their eyes met...he inched forward as she closed her eyes...he took her lips frst she didnt respond but he pulled her more closer n squeezed her waist...she parted her lips n took his upper lip...they sucked eachother lips as their was no tomorrow...they slid down slowly still kissing

Yeh pal hai apna to is pal ko jee le
Shwalo ki tarha zarah chal ke jee le
Pal jhapakte kho na jana

he made her lay down still kissing...they broke the kiss kria was about to get up but he blocked her...

rey: i love u...n will always love u...only u...

Chuke karlo yakin na jane yeh pal paaye kahan
Jaadu hai nasha hai madhoshiyan hai
Tujhko bhulake aab jaao kahan

he kissed her eyes...

kr: rey...!!!

but rey moved down n nuzzled in the crook of her neck n bit their...she whimped in pain but he licked their n kissed the place...he sucked the water drops on her neck...to which she moaned his name high...but he had already lost it...he opened the top two buttons of his shirt...n kissed her sensitive part...nw kria also lost her senses..

she came upon him n kissed his cheeks n moved to jawline...he groaned she came down n kissed his bare chest...he moaned her name...n she moved down n kiised his abs...

thats it...he twirled her n nw he was on top of her...he removed all the butttons till her waist...she was in her straps...she had closed her eyes...he moved back n looked at the beauty,,,,,n again came on top of her n took her lips it was a wildd one...he moved down n kissed her navel...

Baahon mein teri yun kho gaye hai
Armaan dabe se jagne lage hai
Jo mile ho aaj hum ko door jana nahin
Mitado saari yeh duriyan

he placed wet kisses all over her waist...n she was moving rythmitacally...

due to the thunder sound he came to senses n buttoned the shirt...

she opened her eyes n saw him sitting looking at the bonfire...she felt uncomfortable n got up moved a littl far frm him...but he pulled her n she landed on his lap...he pulled the shirt frm her shoulder n bit her shoulder blade...making a mark...

rey: ur always mine only mine...

she rested her head on his chest...he encircled his arms around her n kissed her forehead...after sometime

rey slowly rested on the ground...n kria on top of him hugging him...he smiled at her n he dozed of...

hogaya...
kaisa tha plz bolo guys...
love ya...😳

Edited by only_kriyansh - 12 years ago

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