--FAKE FIANCE-ss(virman) - Note 136 !!!

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NourinNiShal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#531

Res..and a big hug for continuing 🤗

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-GayathriK-

@-GayathriK-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#532

🤗 Lina!! Thank you soo much for updating!! You nearly gav me a heart attack with your last note! 😒 Now after reading i have this long and wide smile on my face 😃 :P

Ok now Maanvi and Virat are finally married! And i loved how Virat was patiently making maanvi understand the situation and trying to convince her. Whereas Maanvi, even though her heart is in love with virat, is scared deep under due to what her mother went through many years back. She has lost her hopes and is infact kind of scared to open up much in front of Virat. Aww I loved the last part where virat was naughty! 😉

Continue soon because i am just too excited to read further!

And thnx for the pm!

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Sumana123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#533

LOL your Update has one line from Viraat ...where he says .."Protect yourself from me...cause I m hopelessly romantic" ...Well that is something I want to say for this story and each update of yours ..."I m hopelessly in love with the story ." As I said several times that I love the narration style which is like perfect and crisp...And Viraat is the Awesomest person on this earth...Again this a superd updated with cute and simple moments which all can enjoy ...most importantly it a story of how two people are so close yet so far...each time Maanvi falls weak for him , I wish that she say those golden words but fate (or rather say the Writer has different plans) ...I m thoroughly enjoying the ride ...Now they are married so beginning of a new journey ...I loved how Viraat said "Try finding your father in me" ...and also " Marriage is the bridge I wanted to build between us" ...I must say your are one great dialogue writer ...Loved the update

Next point ...I was very hurt when I read your note on Discontinuing the story..Yeah I didnt send any PM to you but I was hurt ...All I can say stick to this brilliant story and let your fans enjoy ...it ..:) :) : )

Once again you are one amazing writer ...:)

Love Sumana

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vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#534

thank u for continuing it lina!!!!

update was awsome and well written at the same time

the way u describe the situation is really worthy of being praised..

thank u soo much for the pm

update soon

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#535

uff finaly they got married. Hayee u may kiss the bride wala scene toh just superb. Thanks for continuing

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#536

So finally they got married...wowww...loved virat optimistic nature...positive thoughts leads to achive ur goal..superb...manvi should to give a chance to her n virats relationship...he deserves that...loved their convo...cont soon

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bluebolt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#537

Hey gal. So, I had started reading this amazing ff of urs a bit too late, but now I am all caught up and you made me wait for such a long time for an update. Firstly, I just appreciate how well you write, you characterization is just out of the world. And, your writing has so many layers - there were so many times that I read a line and re-read it and didn't want to move forward from it - there is a strange magical lingering effect in them. Amazing flow and amazing choice of words - My very own philosophical queen. :-)

Coming to the story, I love Virat more than Manvi. He is so sincere, loyal and sweet - how I wish guys like that existed, but he is what he is -too good to be real. There were so many times in the story where I felt how impossible it is for a girl to resist such a crazily-in-love guy, but every time we see Manvi falling weak for him, you make her character stronger. The whole ff is like a conversation of love, life and trust - it is one of the most beautiful things that I have ever read and I really thank Afshan/mamain to have told me about this sweet ff - it is amazing and u r amazing. Please do update more often - Anu❤️

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Nandita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#538

Hey read this story of yours!!!!
Its just amazing & out of the world!!!!!😃

One word...FABULOUS!!!!!!😃

Do update soon & add me in your PM list!!!!!!😊

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#539

Breath in breath out! Oh my it was soooi cute updateee n once again u did not miss to give amazing dialogs... Gosh I'm so addicted to fake fianc I want that virat to come aliveee .. His answers n each encounter Haiii KILL MEEE!!! Throughout the part I was doing "awww" "oh god bring him alive.." "Lina u r killing me " hahah LOVE will be an understatement ur story rocksss ;)
His confidence determination n positive attitude ufff maar dalooo ... Y u write so good man????? BRING him alive let me marry him.. Oh how I wish this story was played on the show... :(

"save urself from loving me" haiii GOD bless my heart! I can sense a lot of good stuff cominggg up #u better give us one :p

She was abt to kiss him :O haiii n I love this dialog alotttrt "If you stop manipulating your heart, you will find a way to accept your forbidden love" gosh he is hurt but it's ok! Love is not a choice n he will make sure she change wohooo !!!

NOT TO MENTIon he kissed on her cheek!!!! Doing Shinkansen chikaaa hahah I was about to say y no Christian marriage hahahahahhahahahahaah "you may kiss the bride" rofl!!!! Give us one hehe As always I will have complain for Short chapter! >.< u r such a k
aminiii u write sooo small but pataka hai boss heheeh...

N for not continuing hell No if u stop thn it will be a sin! U have to continue no choice left babes! N there is writer corner where u can post ur stories so yaaa don't u dare to think about ending!!!!

Plz plz plzzzx UPDATE SOOON like ASAP

Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago