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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks 4 updting mpk😊
now please updt dis also😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
katti 😡

😭 u didnt updt till now
🥺

update

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
Loved it ...
I read all the parts and. Its just mind blowing...
Waiting for next part update soon and do pm me pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
please
update
sweet-heart
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Posted: 11 years ago
update now pleazzz

and congo 4 ur gallery
gallery is awesome

but something is incomplete that is ...
updates not on time

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello friends...okay no bakwas direct topic pe aaungi aaj...thank you all for such a encouraging response..love you all...here is the next part...
Recap :

kriya who was numb when shivam was comparing what he did to the current situation between rey and her, stops shivam by putting a hand on his shoulder...shivam turns to her with a winning smile...but next thing what kriya did made every one shocked...

"SLAP" kriya slaps on shivam's cheek right in front of all the students...

"ye muje ussi din karna chaie tha..." saying this she leave the place..followed by her gang with winning grin...

shivam stud there holding his cheek unable to digest what just happened...all the student left the place happily gossiping this new turn...

Part 16 :

Kriya goes to rehearsal hall followed by her gang...she was frustrated..totally shocked..though she acted bravely in front of the college few minutes back but she was totally shaken...but the gang was struggling to understand how to interact with her...because only they know how much that incident had affected kriya's life...suddenly everyone;s attention turns towards rey when he plays "Dil se" song...within no time once again kriya and rey starts to dance on it..the gang gave them the space as they know they both needed to sort out their differences..

this time kriya didn't look at rey in the mirror...she was looking at herself...rey was trying a lot to get her attention like last time but he fails in that...their steps were different this time...last time they danced as if it'z some sweet and passionate song...where as this time also they were dancing passionately but the difference was there was hurt visible in their steps and expressions clearly...they were half way through with the song, kriya stops dancing...which made rey too stop...he stops the music...by that time all the gang goes near kriya who was standing bending her upper body, sweating badly and panting for air...

sharon : kriya ?? you alright?

kriya just nods her head...once she stands properly, she looks at her friends worried faces...

"guys i am alright...no need to worry" assures kriya to her friends...

rey : kriya?

"please rey(without looking at him)...not now" replies kriya in a very low tone...

bharat : kriya yar ek baar sun tho le..please...mere lie...

kriya : kya sunu?? chod na bharat...aap dono ko jo karna hai karo aaj se main aap dono ke maamlo mein nahi padungi...hoti kaun hoon main aapke lie...saying this she starts to leave the place...

vicky : kahan ja rahi hai tu kriya?? sun na

kriya : vicky please i want to be alone for some time..please...will meet you once i am back to normal...

"par kriya" says helpless vicky who never says "no" to her..

"i am fine vicky...i am really...fine...itz just that some old incidents came back to memory...i need to push them away...for that i need some time alone.." says hurt kriya...

"akele mein jada yaad ayenge old memories...friends ke sath rahoge tho you will feel better" says rey trying for the last time to stop her..

"friends?? rehne do rey...aaj jo kuch bhi hua sab tumhare waje se hua...i had already forgot all those bitter memories..shivam reminded me of them because you gave him a opportunity...and yeah muje second time bakra nahi banna hai as he said" says kriya who was hurt remembering all those past incidents...

"what do you mean by second time bakra nahi banna?? haan?? listen kriya i dont know what he has done in the past (all try to stop rey but he didn't listen to any of them this time) but aap sab ke reactions aur tumhare reactions uss shivam ko dekh kar, i can understand that he has done something hurtful to you..may be behaved cheap but you really think i will do the same to you/..?/ muje tum usse compare karoge kriya??(pause for few seconds) you know what??forget it...agar tum muje uske jaise samajte ho tho teek hai...do as you wish..muje bhi abb tumhare kisi bhi mamle mein nahi padna...thanks" saying rey leaves the place...kriya stands their numb..unable to understand what just happened..what she said and how rey reacted to it...it all looks like a blurred image for her...as everything stopped around her in that moment...

swayam went behind rey...other gang members try to bring back kriya to the present...they understood her situation...after couple of minutes, "guys will meet you in vicky's place after some time..bye" saying this kriya too leave the place as if she didn;t felt her friends efforts to bring her back to current situation...she was totally blank...

once she left, "guys aap log vicky ke yahan kriya ki wait karo, main aata hoon todi der mein" says bharat and leave the place with neha..no one stops them because they knew where neha and bharat will go...

it's 4 hours since that incident happened in the rehearsal hall...all are waiting for kriya in vicky's place...rey was also locked himself in his room...no one dared to disturb him as he was very hurt and had become very aggressive...and when rey becomes aggressive like this, he always does one thing and that's venting his exhaustion on his punching bag...he was doing that since he came from college and the way he was doing it scared everyone to go to him or talk to him...

bharat nad neha came back in 2 hours...no one asked them anything as everyone knew that they will not tell anything to them...

kriya enters vicky's house finally after 4.30 hrs..."hey guys" says as if nothing had happened...all were shocked to see her so relaxed...because they knew it will take days to make her normal..but she has already become normal...all felt relieved...she was about to sit next to swayam, she hears sound from rey's room in first floor...

"yeh kaisa awaaz hai??what is he doing?" asks kriya to swayam

"aahh...thats nothing..leave it...usse aadat hai wo boxing ki taki he can feel better" says swayam not getting how to react in such situation...

"shit...idiot...kab se kar raha hai aise?? college se aate hi??" asks kriya shocking her friends once again as they thought kriya will really not talk to rey and interfere in his matter now on wards...

"haan" says vicky unsure to feel happy or scared by kriya's coolness..

"huh...main dekhti hoon" says kriya and starts go there...

"no no kriya..he reacts very aggressively in such situation...dont try to talk to him now..give him some time he will become alright" says vicky knowing rey's reactions in such situations very well..

"pagal ho kya? 4 gante se wo aise kar raha hai and tum bol rahe ho chod doon...itz not good yar...i am going to stop him..agar aap logo ko aana hai tho aao nahi tho baito yahi pe...main tho rokhungi usse" saying this she leaves towards stairs to rey's room...

all were confused like hell..because everyone knows that rey is acting like this because of kriya's words and kriya was also hurt because of rey but now kriya is acting as if nothing has happened...they silently go upstairs to see what's gonna happen now..

rey was punching the bag very aggressively...he was totally sweaty..his eyes have become red due to frustration...his fingers have become red, the portion which is continuously hitting the bag..it looked as if anytime it would start bleeding...kriya goes and taps on his shoulder...rey stops for a moment but again resumes without looking at her...kriya goes and stands in front of him..between the bag and him... rey stares at her for few seconds and goes and stands near the window..without uttering a word...kriya too goes near him "gussa ho?"..rey chose to keep quite...because he was not in a state to act straight or decent at this moment..that was the main reason his friends dont go near him when he is in such condition...

"shivam ne jo kiya hai...(pause for a minute) jaanna nahi chahoge?" asks kriya...this time rey looks at her...the gang was once again shocked because kriya never talk about that incident to anyone..here she wants to share the matter with rey...they were unable to feel anything...of course they were happy to see the change in kriya and the closeness between rey and kriya but all happening in very short span of time that it was hard to digest for them...

Doneee🥱
sorry if it looks a short update to some of you...the content i am gonna write in next needs a separate and full update...cant write half in this update and stop and write the other half in next update...it will loose its effect in the story..so sorry...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Re
wil unres in an hr or two
unres

arre wah next week aaya and u updated...standing on ur words ha! :p

that was a fabulous update
nt long nt short normal size... :D

loved it

baapre kria and rey dono ka gussa khatarnaak hai
bhagwan bachaye logo ko inse

poor punching bag
i pity on that thing

bharat and neha kaha gaye the??


kria ko mood swings ki beemari hai kya lol...even am shocked to see her behaviour...pehle khud gussa hoti hai and khud hi shant karwane ati hai
bygod

but i loved the way u wrote it

Waiting to know the story of shivam continue soon


ps - am really very sorry
i know i always res first...but unres late...will try avoid this nxt time
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
katam kyu kiya
acha bla kriya sach bolne vali thi 😭

bt its amazing update
loved it

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_luvkreya

katam kyu kiya

acha bla kriya sach bolne vali thi 😭

bt its amazing update
loved it


read the lines written after the update😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Agressive Rey. .
Cool Kriya. . .
INTERESTING. . . .
Waiting 4 d nxt part. .update soon. .:-D

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