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Posted: 12 years ago
It's a wonderful story hence we love commenting and asking for reactions šŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
Looking forward for d next update
Update soon yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
All this appreciation is well deserved..
Love this story
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Posted: 12 years ago
My Likke button is not working... How bad na... Anyways SUPER DUPER LIKES for one of my favr8 chapters... I loved it...loved it...loved it... Emotional,,,touchy,,,naughty,,,memorable...everything was there... N Ring selection scene was cute... My special favr8 was When Khushi refused to have a Grand Traditional Wedding...her logc to do was soo real...Arnav's way of consoling her was tooo good... O yesss i want to ask dat D Kiss scene was also recorded in Handy Cam...*winks* yeeesss Akash Man u lost it... U were in against ASR... Update soonish... Thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update!!
The whole engagement scene with the kids was so beautifully explained.
Khushi is in for many surprises now as Arnav will make her fall in love with him which btw she already must be feeling with the daily dose of kisses :)
Poor Akash will be shocked & heart broken to see Arhi engaged.
Thanks for the PM!
Pls update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome update & thanks for the PM šŸ¤—


A knock to get his marriage form filled @ 7 in the morning was unbelievable………...woah Arnav proved that he meant whatever he said : 'Khushi, the thing is, now that you've agreed, I will not.LET.you change your mind' I didn't even imagine that the fear of losing his love would make him act sooo fast


Arnav shocked at Khushi's decision of not wanting a traditional wedding but then understanding her reason behind her thought was appreciative. Khushi's thought was framed in a different way apart from the normal happenings…… it was nice


His thought of placing the kids in the position of all the family members for his marriage once they are able to stand on their feet, thus bringing a smile on her face & his hidden plan for a honeymoon-cum-vacation were lovely


Arnav terrified on recalling his sisters perfect shopping style was funny


It was sweet of Arnav to give the ring which Khushi liked on their engagement day


Arnav surprising Khushi with the ring of her choice, stunning her by placing a kiss near her lips & saying that the kids didn't mind his lovey dovey act and moreover naughtily asking her for a kiss under the mask of a tradition were adorable


Loved the Raizada tradition…………………. Hmmm……wonder what more so-called Raizada traditions Arnav's got in his mind šŸ˜‰


The parallel description of Akash's arrival & Arshi's marriage application in process was well-written


Waiting to see Akash's reaction to the news of Arshi's engagement – will he accept it (though with a broken heart) or decide to fight & win his love against ASR?????


Quoted the best lines :

  • 'At 7 in the morning? I don't exactly sleep with my birth certificate and photos'

Her sleepy brain did not register much details other then how happy he was looking, so she just nodded.

  • 'I am NOT having second thoughts Arnavji. What am I? Five? You think I'll flip on such a big decision every other day?'
  • 'Khushi you remember right? This is not just some legal formality. It's a REAL wedding ' he said in a grave tone.
'With a real me and a real you. I know Arnavji. But we don't have a family to enjoy a traditional wedding with. Who will stand in the place of mother , father, sister, brother in our wedding? It's just us Arnavji, us and the kids'
  • And smile she did, making his heart light.……………………..Arnav then and there decided to throw a grand reception after Khushi's exams and have a honeymoon cum vacation for his wife and kids after that, but kept it to himself as a surprise.
  • 'DI? You are following HER style of shopping? You do realize that we will grow roots sitting here if we shop at HER pace?'
  • By simply accepting him just as he is, she makes him crazily want to change for her.
  • But very next second her eyes blew out of proportion, when Arnav slowly leaned forward and kissed her firmly near her lips, without warning! ………………..While he was devilishly taking his sweet time to relish the feel of her velvety skin under his lips, she had to put in a mammoth effort to stop herself from grabbing the devil's shoulder for much needed urgent support.
  • 'See, they don't mind. In fact they approve'
  • 'Ji. Raizada tradition you see. Kissing after exchanging rings' he informed with mirth dancing in his eyes.
Edited by fleurs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely updates.. waiting to read..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anony_mous


Thank you guys for such wonderful comments you have posted :)

And I can't thank you enough for the love and appreciation you are giving to Making Khushi Mine, my first baby ā¤ļø

Please keep the love coming its way. And the comments too. I just love to read them over and over again, and get clues from them as to how to proceed with the story.

Just for example, many readers want to know Akash's reaction to the engagement. As I have many times said that MKM has a pre-planned story line, I have already sketched out when and how to break this news to Akash (which just might surprise you all)
But right now, I could have gone some other way, and reading your comments made it my priority to deal with that question first in the next update :)

So guys you are helping me present this story through your comments, and I really appreciate all the help I can get :)

Love ya all!!

U knw it's so simple story yet it's so attractive
The love is pure n caring
U won't believe I check 10 times in day for an update
& wait eagerly for e dry chapter!
Plz keep ur story different till u did now don't create any MU btw Arnav n khushi
šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
Keep writing as long as you can! I totally adore this story, hopefully u won't be ending this any time sooner 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww i wanna scream n dance
it was so romantic n beautiful...sad that threr is no one to celebrate with them...bt their comfort zone is increasing...that was a fantastic updatešŸ‘šŸ¼.i loved it very muchā¤ļø...thanks for the pm

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