Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 3)

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Dalmuthuya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#701

I read this entire story in one go, and I have to say this was just brilliant. I love how you did not rush Arnav's feelings towards Khushi. It was all a slow progression, which beautiful emerged. Every single scene with them makes me smile. Also your word choice is perfect. Talented writer. :) Please could you PM me from now on? I sent you a buddy request.

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maaneet93

@maaneet93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#702

read it in one go
just loved it <3

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silent_whispers

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Posted: 12 years ago

#703

when will you update i m desperately waiting please tell me di

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OmNaMaSteOm

@OmNaMaSteOm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#704

Originally posted by: ssyahoo
When are you updating?

same Q but I think when you update Anonymous it might be night time for me I am from IST

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sugarbird

@sugarbird

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#705

thanks for the long update. that was well written. khushi's thought process. This shows the genuinity about her. Waiting to see how arnav is going to show his love towards khushi

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sarb

@sarb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#706

Its awesum, and slowly slowly intensity is increaseing...

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Tammie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#707

Me? I'm just hanging around in hopes of catching an update. 😆

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OmNaMaSteOm

@OmNaMaSteOm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#708

I hope you do not update when I am sleeping. I am here when it is 8.30 pm isht IST because you said Monday evening or Tues.

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Ashakalyani

@Ashakalyani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#709

wow.great update...the last part ws awesome...khushis turmoil s very well written...loved the way she said yes to arnav...waiting for their romance...