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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing updates & thanks for the PMs 😊


Chapter 19

Arnav confused of whether to open up his love to Khushi & then convincing that he should stick to what he is good at – his legally laid out plan after Akash's call indicates his fear of losing his love


Khushi sad on the thought of moving away from Arnav's life after hearing his decision to marry shows the love sprouting unknowingly within herself


Khushi accepting the reality that she will have to leave after Arnav's marriage shows her maturity

Loved & admired Arnav telling Khushi that they will continue to be friends & that the marriage wouldn't be just a facade


Quoted the best part of chapter 19:

  • 'Someone who can love Adit Adya like a mother and can be my companion as in true sense as well' he spoke, liking the direction of her question.
  • 'Khushi ... Will YOU marry me?' he came to the point.
  • 'Jii? ME?' she gasped.
  • 'Yeah. Why else am I discussing all this with you?'
  • 'And I am here to clear your doubts. Ask me' he offered.
  • 'Sure. But I want you to remember two things. First, I am and will stay your friend. You're not moving out in ANY case. Second, if we marry, the marriage will be real in ALL senses'


Chapter 20

The magic mirror for advice was lovely


I thought Khushi's monologue stole the show today…………..but I was wrong, the line where it says that the man who started the turmoil was sleeping on a cloud of feathers after dropping it off on his lady's lap actually won the trophy


Khushi in a quandary about why she was Arnav's choice for marriage, sleepless nights……...tiresome days, wondering whether she was missing something important between the lines, trying to draw a conclusion based on the fact of how close they have come due to their friendship breaking all the tiff of coldness they maintined as relatives earlier, was constructed impeccably


Khushi liking the idea of feeling wanted by Adya, the thought of sugar-free striking her mind insisting on the urge to take care of Arnav, leaving the worry of social standing to Arnav indicated the warmth slowly spreading in her mind on the thought of becoming a member of the Raizada family


The talk between Arnav & Khushi was framed beautifully


Arnav taken back by Khushi's quick "YES" & he repeatedly asking her to think over her decision clearly was admirable


Loved both Arnav's sarcasm as well as honesty in his replies to Khushi


It was appreciative of Arnav that he atleast told her that the reason for choosing her was coz he liked her though he didn't openly lay out his love infront of her


'Arnavji, you cannot LEARN to love. You just FALL in love. And out of us two, we should worry about YOU. I'll manage just fine on that front but a cynic like YOU will not realize love even if it hits you in the face you know'

I couldn't stop laughing when Khushi said the above because she'll be shocked to life to know that it was his love for her & the fear of losing her that made him plan out such an arrangement

The last statement of Arnav sounds a bit mysterious to me……..I wonder if it has a hidden meaning to it & if it is going to bring a twist in the story???? Akash's return after 10 days & his reaction to Arshi's marriage decision is another ????


Waiting to see how the story progresses & how Arnav expresses his love to Khushi


Quoted the lines that were amazing :


  • 'Then why me? I am a normal girl, normal face, nothing extraordinary'.
  • 'Should I try and talk him out of his stupid plan of marrying me. After all I am his friend. I should look out for him. Right?'
  • 'ARGHHH ... Why can't he sort out custody issue without giving me a heart attack and ruining his own life?'
  • 'You catch on real fast girl. HUH'
  • And Khushi started thinking, curled up in her bed, about the man who last night knocked on the door of her life and was waiting for her to answer it now.
  • …….So Adit Adya's upbringing could not be the issue. Is she missing something?
  • Did that count for nothing? Adit Adya look up to them as their parents. Can that be belittled?... The understanding that they've developed, does that count for nothing? They care for each other unconditionally. Does that not mean anything?
  • From that-snob-brother-of-Anjali-bhabhi to Arnavji. From scaring her wits by icy cold glares to reassuring her with his honey brown eyes. From avoiding him royally to hugging him close when sick. From throwing money in her face for taking care of HIS niece and nephew to today asking her to be their co-guardian. YEAH, they have come a long way.
  • n the other part of the house, the man who started it all was amazingly asleep with peace written all over his face. And why not, he had unloaded a huge burden he was carrying around off his chest on to the pretty mind of his lady love.
  • 'Of course not. I love to propose marriage to a woman I absolutely hate, so that we can mutually ruin our lives and drag two innocent toddlers into hell along with us. SERIOUSLY Khushi? You think I don't like you?' he sarcastically replied.
  • 'Ummm.. about LOVE in the marriage ... or maybe about our age difference ... I don't know. Girls are pretty stubborn about all this stuff, aren't they?' he supplied.


Edited by fleurs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am in love wth this story wowww now tht both agreed to get marry what lies ahead..., plzz cont...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow she agreed for marriage!.They are getting MARRIED!!!.amazing update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am afraid that the chapter ended too early for my comfort😆
you are doing every update flawlessly...
now that arnav will make her legally his cant wait for the heart and soul part...i have a feeling that the story is beginning to start just now!
how will arnav make khushi his...
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Posted: 12 years ago
bless he has gone and gotten her confused
aww she cant believe he proposed marriage to her
well the answer to all your questions is that he love ya and wants to marry ya
but he didnt have enough courage to tell you of his feelings so chose this way
ufff kya karen inn dono ka bhai
awww she thinks he is ruining his life by marrying her well nothing could be further from the truth there dear but you dont know that
and am afraid he wont like it if you try to dissuade him from marrying you dear
he really has her freaked out for sure
gosh her reactions were funny to see man
haila this is getting better and better with each passing sentence
trust me dear there will be no shortchanging for arnie for sure
he will be so estatic that you have consented to be his wife god knows how he would react
so she did feel attracted to him but didnt wanna delude herself uff delude all you want with him as he wants you just as much if not more khushi
i know right there he is sleeping peacefully making the poor girl sleepless
but then he has finally gotten what he had hoped for and dreamed of in a way
dont even go to akash or he shall flip for sure trust me he would
ahhh she is realsing not only they have some bond between them but also chemistry meaning this can work out for them in the end
hey dude give her some space yaar ek toh apne inka bheja fry karr diya hai pichle do dino mein due to this proposal of your cut her some slack mate
oh dear you dont know he does know about love considering he has been in love with you for a while now and why are we telling her to re think this you idiot
ahhh so he wants to be 100% sure she will marry him as no way in hell he is gonna LET HER CHANGE HER MIND on this later on which she wont anyway
cheers for pm
so we have a wedding to plan now
ahhh cant wait when akash knows of it bless
Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super Duper Awesome! So much tension! So much chemistry! Loved it! Finally she said YES!! Thank God Khushi didn't ask Akash's advice..And man the last line sent shivers down my spine! Thank u for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG OH WOW AMAZING!!!

Idk how what else to say of how i feel after reading this amazingly wonderful update

I loved the way he proposed, using his brain!

Then gave her time, Khushi thought of everything &

Now their conversation was just perfect!!

The last dialogue held such intensity that i can't wait to read the next chapter

I LOVED READING ALL THIS & Congratulations on the new thread!!

On the side note, Poor Akash 😆
Edited by LyssaPie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow khushi say's yes finally
302 like Mashallah 👏 party time 🥳
waiting for some cute , sweet,naughty and romantic scenes 😳
continue soon please and thank u for pm me 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg yayayayay yayayayya she accepted :D sooo happy loved the way she asked why her and his answer and then the sarcastic response was hilarious :) great Uodate thanks god thyre gunner get married :) thanks or the pm can't wait for the next part :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was very cute update...

Can't wait for their marriage...

Do continue soon...if time permits do send me a PM...

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