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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
RV wannna kill him... Hate himmm... 😡
Kriya suffered alottt...
Update soon next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
god
kria had gone through so much
i love rey ka reaction in last
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Posted: 11 years ago
dii... aapne to senti kar diyaa
poor K... man... Rv to muje kisis angle se insaan nhi lagta
how rude... bt last main... REy awww girte padte...
apne room tak gaya...
plzzz update sooon... i'll be waiting fr dis one...

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Posted: 11 years ago
aww poor kriya
Hope rey remembers everything
Thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super duper update mannu 👏
Poor kriya
And d ending was niceee 😊
Waiting for the next part 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
my god in all your updates..
jhatka hi laga hain
kriya told rey everything...
😲😲😲

ab kya hoga
i simply hope ht rey doesn;t forget everything in the morning
due to the alcohol...
update soon na
mereko ab aur wait nahi ho raha hain

thanks for the PM
and do PM me soon
i'm waiting

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Posted: 11 years ago
So yahan par bhi Suspense out ho gaya , bohat acha kiya...
Saare log Kameene , Khud Garz Aur ek no. k lalchi hote hain 😡...
Katil bhi - Paison keliye kissi ki jan le li...
N uske baad Kria k saath inna bura behave kiya ...
Ab Kria ki saari hesitaions and problems clear ho gai hain...

Buss ab Rey ko yeh sab yaad rahe...
Mast part that 😃...
Loved it ❤️...
N Shu-Kriya for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello guys, I'm back with the update.

Chapter 13:


Kriya was pacing to and fro in the living room. She tried to divert her mind by engaging herself in some work. But the reality is that she's super tensed and nervous. Yesterday night she revealed her past to the person she loves the most who was drunk completely. Now the reason for her worry is whether he'd remember or not. If he remembers then it's a trouble as to how would he react. In case if he doesn't remember even then it's a trouble as he would accuse her for breaking his heart.

"Gosh, it's seriously not me. I never get tensed for such trivial matters. Okay on a second note it isn't a trivial matter. But still it's not the way I behave. Oh gosh what's wrong with me? Why am I so tensed. Rather than behaving so immaturely and making a joke of myself in front of Payal aunt I should be composed. Argh, Rey it's all your fault. You've made me act so naive rather than handling things prudently."

"Kriya can you get the fruit juice from the refrigerator?" Payal asked her interrupting her contemplation's.

"Huh, yeah sure."

"Aaah!" They heard Rey wincing in pain from upstairs. Understanding the reason behind it, Payal proceeded to his room with a glass of concentrated lemonade without any sugar. Kriya just hope he'd be fine.

"How are you feeling now?" Payal asked once he finished gulping down that liquid.

"Yeah, feeling a bit better."

"Good. Now hurry up and meet us at breakfast." Saying this Payal left his room.

Once Payal left the room, Rey again caught his head in his hand as he felt heavy. He tried to remember what happened yesterday but all his attempts were futile. He could hardly remember anything. He got flashback of the events completely jumbled up. Deliberating over his thoughts he proceeded towards the washroom.

"Good morning mom."

"Good morning son."

As his eyes lay upon her, the events of yesterday's party flooded in his mind. Anger empowered his eyes. But the next second the conversation that he had with her late at night struck in his head. He couldn't remember the exact thing. Everything was so blurred. Kriya avoided his sight. She had decided that if he remembers everything then he would surely approach her.

Rey was having hard time concentrating on anything. He tried to pressurize his brain to remember things but all in vain. Kriya had been observing from the corner of her eyes but all she could do was sigh in defeat. Neither she could help him nor could she see him in trouble. She let the things be them on their own.

As both Rey and Kriya entered the rehearsal hall at once coincidentally, the gang looked at them with tensed faces. All they knew was Rey was angry on Kriya for rejecting her. They did not have the slightest idea about their conversation last night and also about Rey's hard time.

"Guys, what? Why are you people staring at me as if I'm going to eat you people alive?"

"Uh, nothing buddy. Let's start the rehearsals." Swayam said.

"Cool." The gang agreed.

"Just a minute guys. I've made a slight change."

"What?" Kriya blurted out immediately. She immediately shut herself realizing that they weren't on good terms.

Giving Kirya a glare, he spoke "Sharon from today, you'll be my dance partner." Well he hadn't decided it earlier. It was just a nick of the moment decision taken out of anger.

"What? Why? Kriya's your partner and you guys really make a good pair."

"She was my partner. And for your information even we make a good pair. So you have no other option rather than agreeing to it."

"And why do you thing I would abide this decision of yours?"

"Because I'm the captain. And no one objects the captain." Came a sharp response from his surprising everyone though not in a positive sense. He was never this rude to them. At times he was a bit harsh but then it was fine. Today he was behaving completely not the way him. This wasn't him speaking, it was his frustration.

"Aap mera gussa sab par kyu nikal rahe ho?" Kriya interfered.

"Mein kisi ka bhi gussa nahi nikal raha hu."

"Oh really? Then why are you hell bent on changing partners? Are you scared to dance to with me?" It was the same condition here as well. Kriya's aggravation was making her snap at him.

"You really think I am? Well, if you think I am, then it isn't my problem. I don't need to prove a bloody damn thing."

"Oh yeah? Now this proves that my rejection affects you." She said annoyed due to this irate behavior of his.

He pulled her closer to him clutching her arms so tight that she almost winced due to pain. "I don't give a damn to bloody wannabes like you." Saying this he left her almost thrusting her towards the ground and left.

She stabled herself and left that place feeling kind of embarrassed though there wasn't any need for her to feel such. She rushed towards the locker room. No matter how hard she tried her tears wouldn't stop gushing down.

"Why is he behaving so rudely? Rather than blaming me for the things, he should have tried to remember everything. I shouldn't have told him anything because it hurts when someone blames you for their pain though they know the reason behind it."

On the other hand, Rey entered the fire exit. He was angry, aggravated and what not.

"Gosh, why am I not able to remember anything? All I know is she revealed something related to her past but why the hell I can't remember even the gist of it. It's so dam infuriating." Saying this he punched his fist on the wall. He sat there compelling and pressurizing his mind. Finally after an hour or so he remembered everything.

On realizing the mess he had created he blighted himself "Gosh, I'm just a dumbass"


So how's it??


Hope you guys liked it...


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Posted: 11 years ago
res..
unres...

yupieee...!!!
me 1st...!!
yayayayyaya...
mast update tha di..
loved it..
haye rey kitna rudely behave kar raha tha kriya ke saat..
poor kriya wo bichari kuch kar bhi nhi sakti hai..😭
haye rey ne apni dance partner change kardi..
haye esa nhi hosakta hai..
atlast use sab yaad aagya..wow ab sab thik hoga..*i guess*😊
update choto tha..
nxt tym bada wala chaiye..
update soon..
thnxx fr PM..😊
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
itna chotu update par koi baat nahi
awesome update

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