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OMG what a beautiful story this was:*
r u d same gal who hv written MPC? A cute si love story?:o
no doubt m getting addicted t o ur stories like anything.
Very touvhy realistic story this is!
When i started reading this i tohught there is something happened bet Arhi that khushi is this shaken up... Some serious fight but when i read d real reason behind dere differences it shocked beyond anything... I mean i cant believe he tried to rape her(atm it looked like that).
No doubt khush is in big trauma.
I was il scared as to how u gonna make them together coz d line ''UR TOUCH DISGUIST ME'' stuck in my mind all d time , i knew that there wl bv a happily ever aftr.
I never really hated arnav when i read initial chtr donno why he was stil l good man and hero for me:(
wid d rohans entry i tohught there wl b a jealousy track or something but then slowly realized d obsessiion for khushi by arnav and to d extent he went to keep her near him wid him.
And d marriage
it was awkward u know to see d person who apperently forced u got married to u.
Nightmare in first nite and how arnav cried seeing his khushi on that state, my heart went for him.
U know i shud hv disliked him for sorcing him to marry her but i found myself crying when he cried . Not just a moist in d eyes but aftr that chptr onwards i cried alot and my mom started wondering why my eyes r read
it shocked me to no end that i am crying this much for a STORY?
Arnavs insecurities, his fear to loss her , his LOVe?, his obsssesion
but my eyes wud welled up whener i wud read he thinking about khushi caring abvout her and saying sorry and ILY to her begging her to not leave him.
Chandigarh trip was one memorable one coz khushi started thinking about diff side of arnav, knowing he had feeling b4 that horrible incident too.
Most vulnerable part was when she witnessed his nightmare, i didn got that much affected by her dream coz that was quite obvious but his nightmare?
She was right beside him near him bbut wid NOT him
i cried each time he begged , u realyl wont believe gal i had to keep napkin wid me to wipe my tears i still wonder what made me involve so much in this story i still cant find ans sometimes i wonder was i in sad mood and started reaading?
His control over himself not to get intimate wid her lest touch her was just...
He was happpy that she was wid him nothing else mattered.
When dolly masi came that was turning point real side of arnav's story that khushi saw, that she realzied he is dying 1000 deaths every moment seeing her suffer, d terror in his eyes at d thought of touching her was... No doubt he was totally obsessed but in a unharmful way and d guilt he had been going since that day was evident all d timethen d chamdigarh trip 2
diff side of there relationship , caring for each other unintetionally by khushi but he was happy just seeing her caring for him.
D line '' i forgive u arnav'' can any line sooths ur heart this much?
But then his guilt hadnt ended fully. They became frn and when finally khushi realized that she loved this crazy man tooo.
Poor guy fainted hearing ILY:(
my most fav part of this story is aftr khushi's confession coz d title of d story then shifted frm khushi to arnav.
He was yet to get over d fact. To get over d guitl , s most scariest part to see him struggle when she tried to intimate wid him his fear ,his guilt had been eating him up inside:(
and how de got over ti was wonderful.
Can epilouge get any better? De were together like NORMAN married couple, no guilt, no fear no hesitation only love.
I donno why i typed this much,
just wanted to tell u that each and EVERY SCENE of arnav ,each dialouge made me sob literally, i cudnt sleep that nite, i hv read so many ffs hv cried but not this tears falling down type.
This story made do such things
but i dont regret reading so late coz m too impatient to wait for updates.
its owrth 4500 words almost and m typing on fone i wud hv typed more but word capasity ending.
Its LONGEST CMNT I did on IF till date and i dont think i wud do again
and plz plz update MPC sooon coz i love Arhi in it way beyond description
now runs to read My imperfect husband. Plz accpet my buddy request.
I hope u didn get bored
let me know what do u think about my reply:)
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