ArHi FF: Can You Forget The Past... #10 Last Ch 53 - Page 49

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..i'm so glad that i caught time up with ur story again after a long time,it was fantabulous..it's 4:30AM now here.
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Posted: 12 years ago
@shraddska: Nyc story!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
jus came across this story a few days ago...n it kept me hooked to it...:)

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Posted: 12 years ago
Conpleted the whole story in.just one day
loved it..
Awesome story
loved each and every part...
From.the start to end...
Liked the way u portrayed the entire story...

Awesome story...
Loved it.


Can u forhet the past
the question to this answer is yes ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello :)

I know it is me again :) Actually I am reading completed works these days and I had heard a lot about this story so decided to read this one too :)


I liked the whole tables turning in the second half of this story. All throughout the readers thought that it is Khushi who cannot forget the past but later it turned out that even Arnav couldn't.


Khushi managed to come out of it thanks to all the love and care showered on her by Arnav. Arnav took a little more time as Khushi needed some time to understand her feelings towards Arnav and also understand Arnav's feelings.


And when she did, he started opening up. Of course these two had their ups and downs in their relationship but finally love won and past remained a past covered by a thick shield of their love, never to be opened, hopefully :)


I noticed how you preferred to stick to only ArHi keeping the parts of other IPK characters to the minimum except for PaYash who were needed to bring these two closer.


You have done a fab job with this FF :) Good luck for your other works :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read the whole story .
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
@shraddska: Nyc story!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome FF I loved each and every update. I felt bad that you have ended it but loved the ending Left happy for ARSHI they let go their past and lived happily for ever 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG what a beautiful story this was:*
r u d same gal who hv written MPC? A cute si love story?:o
no doubt m getting addicted t o ur stories like anything.

Very touvhy realistic story this is!
When i started reading this i tohught there is something happened bet Arhi that khushi is this shaken up... Some serious fight but when i read d real reason behind dere differences it shocked beyond anything... I mean i cant believe he tried to rape her(atm it looked like that).
No doubt khush is in big trauma.
I was il scared as to how u gonna make them together coz d line ''UR TOUCH DISGUIST ME'' stuck in my mind all d time , i knew that there wl bv a happily ever aftr.
I never really hated arnav when i read initial chtr donno why he was stil l good man and hero for me:(
wid d rohans entry i tohught there wl b a jealousy track or something but then slowly realized d obsessiion for khushi by arnav and to d extent he went to keep her near him wid him.
And d marriage
it was awkward u know to see d person who apperently forced u got married to u.
Nightmare in first nite and how arnav cried seeing his khushi on that state, my heart went for him.
U know i shud hv disliked him for sorcing him to marry her but i found myself crying when he cried . Not just a moist in d eyes but aftr that chptr onwards i cried alot and my mom started wondering why my eyes r read
it shocked me to no end that i am crying this much for a STORY?
Arnavs insecurities, his fear to loss her , his LOVe?, his obsssesion
but my eyes wud welled up whener i wud read he thinking about khushi caring abvout her and saying sorry and ILY to her begging her to not leave him.
Chandigarh trip was one memorable one coz khushi started thinking about diff side of arnav, knowing he had feeling b4 that horrible incident too.
Most vulnerable part was when she witnessed his nightmare, i didn got that much affected by her dream coz that was quite obvious but his nightmare?
She was right beside him near him bbut wid NOT him
i cried each time he begged , u realyl wont believe gal i had to keep napkin wid me to wipe my tears i still wonder what made me involve so much in this story i still cant find ans sometimes i wonder was i in sad mood and started reaading?
His control over himself not to get intimate wid her lest touch her was just...
He was happpy that she was wid him nothing else mattered.
When dolly masi came that was turning point real side of arnav's story that khushi saw, that she realzied he is dying 1000 deaths every moment seeing her suffer, d terror in his eyes at d thought of touching her was... No doubt he was totally obsessed but in a unharmful way and d guilt he had been going since that day was evident all d timethen d chamdigarh trip 2
diff side of there relationship , caring for each other unintetionally by khushi but he was happy just seeing her caring for him.
D line '' i forgive u arnav'' can any line sooths ur heart this much?
But then his guilt hadnt ended fully. They became frn and when finally khushi realized that she loved this crazy man tooo.
Poor guy fainted hearing ILY:(
my most fav part of this story is aftr khushi's confession coz d title of d story then shifted frm khushi to arnav.
He was yet to get over d fact. To get over d guitl , s most scariest part to see him struggle when she tried to intimate wid him his fear ,his guilt had been eating him up inside:(
and how de got over ti was wonderful.
Can epilouge get any better? De were together like NORMAN married couple, no guilt, no fear no hesitation only love.

I donno why i typed this much,
just wanted to tell u that each and EVERY SCENE of arnav ,each dialouge made me sob literally, i cudnt sleep that nite, i hv read so many ffs hv cried but not this tears falling down type.
This story made do such things
but i dont regret reading so late coz m too impatient to wait for updates.
its owrth 4500 words almost and m typing on fone i wud hv typed more but word capasity ending.
Its LONGEST CMNT I did on IF till date and i dont think i wud do again
and plz plz update MPC sooon coz i love Arhi in it way beyond description
now runs to read My imperfect husband. Plz accpet my buddy request.
I hope u didn get bored
let me know what do u think about my reply:)


Edited by -aparna- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
missing this ff like anything

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