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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maha update! Now that's my girl...šŸ˜†

Part 1:
Family outing! Reminded me of Hum Saath saath haišŸ˜‰ Payal is one smart girl, even if she suggested the idea unknowingly.

And poor Shyaam...I wonder how long he'll have to bear the consequences of a romantically challenged Saale sahabšŸ˜†

One question though; will the author please let us know how Arnav was going to manage the Supreme court judge?šŸ˜‰

Part 2:

I'm glad you brought out the NK jealousy at play. And who else than Anjali to fan the flames of envy?šŸ˜†

"Yes of course, as it is Khushi is half crazy and when another cartoon would join her , it will be our customized Disney world of craziness."

Waah Arnav bitwa...kya dialogue maara hai...maan gaye!

That Arnav stepped in to save his lady love was commendable but i liked the fact that you didn't just make Khushi stand there helpless...chat ka paani hi sahi par Khushi ne kuch toh kiya!😊
And what followed was just

"Har kam nafa ya nukasan ke liye nahi kiya jata. Usake age bhi kuch hota hai, Khushi Kumari Gupta!"

Yeh main kya sun rahi hoon...ASR ke muh se aisa dialogue😳

He held her hand and led her towards his car...now I don't know what you have in store for us...kuch khaas jaroor hoga; but I'm looking forward to a blood-simmering, knee weakening, toe curling lamba waala kiss...pretty please?ā˜ŗļø
Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome ...loved the updates

so they went to lucknow ...nice arnav fighting ...anrav jealous...liked it !! ...and anjali also helping more to make him jealous ..šŸ˜†arnav has only a sharp brain in bussiness matters kya ? he couldn't understands shyam's clue..šŸ˜†poor shyam had to find an excuse for his winking at arnav 🤣
i loved the last line ..šŸ˜†
His last visit to Lukhnow had started a new life changing journey for him and with this visit ,it seemed to come near an end reaching at a beautiful destination. ...
yes a very beautiful destination ...šŸ˜†
really enjoyed reading this updte 😊
continue soon
and thank's for mentioning me ..😃
Edited by fan123GUNJ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i know right she can make you do things no one else has though of
and thats what makes her KKG
which is why he has fallen for her
praj.shrish thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Eccentrica

res

Edited:
Maha update! Now that's my girl...šŸ˜†

Part 1:
Family outing! Reminded me of Hum Saath saath haišŸ˜‰ Payal is one smart girl, even if she suggested the idea unknowingly.

And poor Shyaam...I wonder how long he'll have to bear the consequences of a romantically challenged Saale sahabšŸ˜†

One question though; will the author please let us know how Arnav was going to manage the Supreme court judge?šŸ˜‰

Part 2:

I'm glad you brought out the NK jealousy at play. And who else than Anjali to fan the flames of envy?šŸ˜†

"Yes of course, as it is Khushi is half crazy and when another cartoon would join her , it will be our customized Disney world of craziness."

Waah Arnav bitwa...kya dialogue maara hai...maan gaye!

That Arnav stepped in to save his lady love was commendable but i liked the fact that you didn't just make Khushi stand there helpless...chat ka paani hi sahi par Khushi ne kuch toh kiya!😊
And what followed was just

"Har kam nafa ya nukasan ke liye nahi kiya jata. Usake age bhi kuch hota hai, Khushi Kumari Gupta!"

Yeh main kya sun rahi hoon...ASR ke muh se aisa dialogue😳

He held her hand and led her towards his car...now I don't know what you have in store for us...kuch khaas jaroor hoga; but I'm looking forward to a blood-simmering, knee weakening, toe curling lamba waala kiss...pretty please?ā˜ŗļø


I could not control myself from replying to this lovely comment instantly...😊

"Hum saath saath hai"...hmmm...That was not on my mind when I wrote but as now you have mentioned...yes I remember that scene...was cute one..

poor Payal...no one take her intelligence into his account...she always follows Neki kar our Darya mein Dal...😭..but worry not Payaliya..ab tumhari Masiha aa gayi hai..šŸ˜†

And about Shyam? Can't help ...he only started the whole cupidifying act ...Aaa Bail Muze Maar..šŸ˜‰

romantically challenged Saale sahab ???????? 🤣🤣

And even I was doubting over his suggestion...you know I dared to ask ASR..just imagine...ASR...but could not get anything else in reply than narrowed eyes in anger...šŸ˜• but koi nahi...abhi 3 sadasyiy samiti banayi gayi hai, jo pura janch karake apko report degi...ā­ļø


Arnav had to understand that there are different angles too like possessiveness, protectiveness rather than dominance to any relationship..

Are apani Kusiii bitiya is 21st century girl...koi use chede n wo ghabarake chup jaye???? how is that even possible? Unfortunately she didn't get chance to show her martial art skills this time..but no worries some other time...šŸ˜Ž

See daring of ASR's heart...he managed to manipulate his mouth and made it speak something so taboo 😲

And about your demand???????? My heart and brain having a detailed discussion over it...Let's see what comes out of it šŸ˜‰

Edited by praj.shrish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow great update
Loved it canf wait for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you for the PM dear...
Loved your update...
Payal, so sweet of her to think about the familyy also... typical sister of KHushiii... loved it...
and Shyam, I am loving this shyam, who is trying to make his saale saahab win his challenge...and our Arnav is really zero in understanding indirect thingss...
When he asked Shaym, why are you winking, lol... Loved that scene... and then comes our Anjalii,typical wife... sooo caring..
Today got to see jealous arnav... šŸ˜‰... Beautiful update yaar...
But, I want more...šŸ˜”...
please update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Atlast an update !!
After long tym..
Thanq for d maha update..
It was beautiful nd m surprised how arnav couldnt speak anythng in his buisnes language..:D
poor shyam had 2 make an excuse for winking..
Dat was lovely..
D mela scene awwie
i wished arnav chala gaya hota khushi ke saath jhula mein baithne :P
got smal doubt
is shyam good in ur story??( sry read so many stories everyday i get confused abt it :P
shama kara thoda..:D)
nd next update thoda jaldi..
Vaat pahnar miii..:D
forgot 2 mentin panipuri water eh??
New weapon for self protection..:D
nice idea re...hahaha
i gues il edit it till ur next update dis is d 5th tym im doing it..:P
Edited by Cute6 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Amti4u

Thank you for the PM dear...

Loved your update...
Payal, so sweet of her to think about the familyy also... typical sister of KHushiii... loved it...
and Shyam, I am loving this shyam, who is trying to make his saale saahab win his challenge...and our Arnav is really zero in understanding indirect thingss...
When he asked Shaym, why are you winking, lol... Loved that scene... and then comes our Anjalii,typical wife... sooo caring..
Today got to see jealous arnav... šŸ˜‰... Beautiful update yaar...
But, I want more...šŸ˜”...
please update soon...


Payal being matured , understanding daughter-in -law..well said typical sister of Khushiii..

Poor Shyam's hard works showing no effects...I pity him..šŸ˜†
And Anjali...she threatened me to leave my SS if I didn't give any chance to her for showcasing her care so that was kind of repay...šŸ˜‰

Arnav has a long way to go in LoVe...

Will try to update soon šŸ˜›
Edited by praj.shrish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Cute6

Atlast an update !!
After long tym..
Thanq for d maha update..
It was beautiful nd m surprised how arnav couldnt speak anythng in his buisnes language..:D
poor shyam had 2 make an excuse for winking..
Dat was lovely..
D mela scene awwie
i wished arnav chala gaya hota khushi ke saath jhula mein baithne :P
got smal doubt
is shyam good in ur story??( sry read so many stories everyday i get confused abt it :P
shama kara thoda..:D)
nd next update thoda jaldi..
Vaat pahnar miii..:D
forgot 2 mentin panipuri water eh??
New weapon for self protection..:D
nice idea re...hahaha
i gues il edit it till ur next update dis is d 5th tym im doing it..:P


Poor Arnav his brain is not working to think about anything in business language

And about the mela scene ...NK was fast for Arnav when it comes to pataofying girl šŸ˜‰

Ouuch ..it hurt very bad.. Your question made my Shyam babua upset. Here he is working hard for Arnav n u take doubts about his intentions..???...😲

of course Panipuri water can be a great weapon but then you must to eating panipuri whenever you are being attacked..

Why are you updating it ??

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