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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful and Lovely story
I read all in one go
Loved it too much 🤗
Must say very well written
The journal entries were the most realistic way of expressing Arnav's thoughts
NK's character is described very well here
And their pain and after that happiness were very well written
Their way to find each other again was mind blowing
Really loved to read it


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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi !!!!!!!!!
Loved this story... u r a wonderful writer...
perfect ending 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Juhi, I am not sure how I missed this...this is so perfect!..you have closed to many un answered questions, so beautifully written!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my! What a beautiful tale, Its just Awesome!
I truly have no words to explain.

You writing has such magic!
Edited by ...Ashley - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read it in a go..
Awesome story.
Must say brilliantly written... 👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Juhi, I have read this from start to finish in a couple of nights. I have left likes, wishing they were loves if that makes sense? The first couple of chapters, brought me back to my thoughts on the serial itself. The poolside always seemed to morph from being outside Arnavs room upstairs, to being outside the main living room downstairs, and occaisionally it seemed to be outside Di room too. But where did those stairs come from...or go to, anyone could appear, (ok getting side tracked from but wait, you'll see the point ) yet Arnav made her sleep outside. Didnt he ever think she could escape to her lover from there?, or worse for us and khushi herself, wasnt she afraid that someone would find her there, by herself.. someone like Shyam?
yes she was in danger by the poolside. I realise that he did it to stop himself for following through with the suhag rath... your story obviously followed my thoughts. Im glad im not alone!

I loved your take on Arnavs thoughts, and you are right, he had no buddies he could call and talk to, so the best he could do was to write his thoughts in his journal. Well done, your depiction of a victim correct, they must have some sense of bravery to be able to live with the abuse, and then come through I all. I loved the fact that she went away and became her ownself, ok still in Arnavs circle but that is love. She went away knowing that they had something special, so she found a way to be with him. I LOVED her remark about the male models! Ingenious first words for her. Then his reply got me just as bad. I hope she continued to help the centre, maybe its easier to talk to another victim to help heal her own.

THANK YOU amazing story. Thanks for the effort, the writing spreading your words. Muuwh
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a painful, heart wrenching, depthful ff...in fact I am lost for words...👏great job!
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Posted: 10 years ago
I don't why I read it again but I did. May be because I haven't forgotten the event that triggered you to write this, may be that even when such incidents haven't stopped happening - this story makes me believe that not everyone is same, that people get over the cruelest incidents when they have support of their loved ones and because
I like Arnav absolutely love the spunky Khushi and I loved that she fought over all the pain and nightmare.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I was determined to doze off just reading the prologue n start this story tomorrow but once started every other thought was out of the wibdow till I actually completed the whole story. Its a wonderful journey of arshi...emerging victorioys from the cruelties of life, Wonderfull
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is amazing !!! <3
Such a heart wrenching ff... :(
Well written ^_^

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