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Posted: 12 years ago
Aah.. so this happens to be your birthday! I have this habit of navigating to the last page of the thread before posting my reply and came to know form the post above..

Wishing you a very happy birthday!! Hope you have a great one with lots of celebrations! 🄳

May all your wishes come true

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Posted: 12 years ago
Now coming to the story - again a great work by you! šŸ‘

It was kind of depressing in the beginning and I am glad I did not have too much time to ponder over it since I pretty much read all of it in a day! And I eventually had a smile on my face. 😊

That's the beauty of this story.

I am glad Arnav did suffer and redeemed himself at least in this story. We got some glipmse of what could be shown in the show. Glad everybody came to know what Shyam did to Shashi Gupta.. and the truth about marriage came in much earlier..

I knew what was coming as I started reading part 2 of the epilogue and I have read that in many ArShi stories earlier, but still eventually it didn't seem cliched. And credit goes to your style of writing!


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Posted: 12 years ago
Looking forward to reading this..SS...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg while reading this story I experienced every emotion I have every felt in my whole life it was lie a whirl whole of emotions but the one that stood out the most was sadness fear and anxious to know what will happen further damn it was so scary while Shyam was about to rape her and then the pain she went through when the officers in a way blamed her for Shyam's misdeed and the pain Arnav felt when he saw her numb and the fear he felt of losing her to nk or when she leaves and the insecurity Arnav felt when she left and last the happiness he felt when he saw her after a year felt so real it caught me in to it and I been reading this story from the past 2 hours couldn't stop damn I think u should be a writer and write books because u know how to keep readers in to it and also know how to use all emotions in the right way and right time with out exaggerating anyways loved it and plzzz writing something new soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
I dont think i hv read anything better than this. EVER!! :-)
Bass!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just read your story and kudos to your story telling creativity. Of course it was sad in the beginning, and even towards the end I still felt a bit melancholy and I do not know why. May be because of all the pain that could have been avoided. But I guess that pain is part of living and sometimes they say they it builds character. So I guess that pain made arnav a better human being and khushi more worldly and confident.
I loved reading your story. I hope that we will get more from your imagination...
Thank you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey ...
I'm just done reading this SS and you've no clue that I actually cried buckets !!! :'(

Arnav and khushi literally went through hell ... <\3
It was just heartbreaking to read the suffering and pain khushi went through ... :(

My heart literally constricted when Khushi was actually scared of Arnav ...

But I'm so glad that they made through it ... :D
And the best part is that Khushi is just back to being her normal self ... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
OH
MY
GODDD

THIS IS JST TOOO BEAAAUUTIFULL.DAMMIT EVRY DAMMIT TOUCHD MY HEAAART..IF I STRT COMMNTIN ON EACH ND EVRY UPDATE..ILL END UP COMPLETIN UR THREAD :P BT HONESTLY..I LOVED EVRY BIT OF IT..THE NAFRATION WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAAAZING ! THE EMOTIONS..THE PAIN..THE HURT..THE LOVE :')
*STANDING OVAAATION*
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Posted: 12 years ago
Guess what I have been doing on a Sunday morning?
Reading Sins. The only time I cry is when I read masam's works or hosseini's and my Old love letters. I cried after reading every chapter of Sins. I cried the way your story depicted the pain , anguish , torture, nightmares the assault victims go through and especially what Jyoti went through. I admire how you have made khushi a woman who fought till the end.
This story is a tribute to women power. Aapko salaam juhiji.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Juhi,

So I have been dying to catch up all your stories but unfortunately due to time constraints I am not able to. I Saw "SINS" being nominated for FF Awards so I had to read it!! And what do I say? You always leave be spellbound.

I have to read this story again and I know if I read it 100 times I will feel the emotions as if I am reading for the first time.

No body can give words to pain, turmoil and anguish better than you!!


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