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vgedin thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
What! Arnav doesn't remember what he did to her ? He is being such a prized bas***d at the moment, I could wring his neck with my bare hands. Unless there is more to this that you plan to reveal, I don't trust my instincts with your stories any more. :D

I love Payal-Aakash, really. Payal is the heroine of this story. Period.

I like this Sheetal person, she is like one of those caring yet stern nannies.

"baby pink short sleeves pajamas with small red hearts and white teddies" Really? 😳

Also, how is Khushi okay with waking up and eating at Arnav's place? How come she hasn't asked for her Sister or her father yet ?

And why are you ending this in just 12 chapters? :(

Zeee, I want more! And congratulations for the new thread :)

Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
awesome update, the highlight of this story is every character apart from the leads are strong and determined, unlike the show where they were shown as dumbos including khushi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Payal-Aakash scenes were really nice...
It was really breathtaking when she said it was 'YOU' that hurt me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
wow yaha shaadi ki news ka itna bada bomb phat gaya aur arnav is asking khushi about marks on her body. arnav bitwa ko luvariya ho gaya hai. now arnav will start singing the below song😆

Zor ka jhatka haye zoron se laga, haan laga
shaadi ban gayi umrqaid ki saza, haan saza
ye hai udasi, jaan ki pyaasi,
shaadi se achcha tum le lo faansi
laakhon dukhon ki hoti hai ye wajah, haan wajah
Zor ka jhatka haye zoron se laga, haan laga
shaadi ban gayi umrqaid ki saza, haan saza..

jiski shaadi par jaana usko itna samjhana
na kar shaadi, ye barbadi, phir na pachhtana
haan mauka hai pagle, shaadi se bachle,
samjha le dil jo ye ko machle
shaadi ke mandap se khud ko tu bhaga
Zor ka jhatka haye zoron se laga, haan laga
shaadi ban gayi umar kaid ki saza, haan saza..

sabse pehle shadi thi, yaaron jahan mein jisne ki
usko dhoondho, pakdo peeto, galti usne ki
wo tha saudai, banke kasai,
usne to sabki lutiya dubayi
paani mile na maaro aisi jagah
Zor ka jhatka haye zoron se laga, haan laga
shaadi ban gayi umarqaid ki saza, haan saza..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Congratulations Zehra for new thread. Thanks for mail.

I don't know what to say. Actually Khushi seems too cold. First time got Khush's pov . She called him monster . Why just monster . She went there for what. She was too cold. Didn't respond. Just Kya? She was planning to go. Get out from there as soon as possible. Means she is not ready for marriage.
La.. Don't know what to say about her too. She got a hope when his response was shocked. But no idea when she her Khush's sound.
Payal and Akash reminds me Arshi in our show. Angry grabbing by waist role reversal here Desert rose ff. Change is always welcome. And its good too.
Arnav really wants to know who did this. Any kind of memory problem . Talk La very casually forgetting about her sobs. Now asking Khushi this. I bit concerned.
He don't have any idea of what happened outside the world. A storm is on the way...
Thanks for mail Zehra.
Edited by riafna - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Congrats!!!!! for the new thread dear!! This story is very interesting . After each update I'm desperate for the next one...Akash and Payal interactions are good to read...u 've balanced all ur characters in such a small update..if the ph had atleast borrowed a little bit from this forum writers, show must not ended in such a mess...good going dear!!!!

Edited by sandhya-sp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
thanks for the mail...btw amazing update...i liked it when khushi said "YOU"!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
I knew she would not jump! I had that much of faith in you, Zehra! :D
Loved Sheetal!!😆
I meant, loved Akash-Payal's lil tiff and loved Arnav's concern even more so! Did he really do all the wounds on Khushi?? -__-
I would love to see how bad he would feel about it..

Thanks for the email! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
good one... plz update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
I can't tell you how much i love your payal and akash pair... they are like ice and fire together.. oh loved it.. specially when Akash said 'don't jump on my brother either'.. i was like this guy knows Payal so well in such a short span.

Anjali as usual is dumb.. hahaha..

Poor Lavanya.. but Arnav is brutal.. after all that has happened and all that is on media (i know he is not aware of Akash's announcement).. he is expecting Lavanya to be calm and collected and not hurt.. that is just inhumane..well he is ASR for no reason.

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