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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Just find out and read it in a go...and i want to tell u I love ur Khushi with so many layers...rarely gt to read this type Khushi... Arnav Singh Raizada, well a man with his own ego n pride with a mission... Devyani a dejected soul become a pure evil... U introduced almost all character with different shade... Shyam boy he want to talk instead of touch... Is Akash starting a liking towards Khushi... Poor La bt she will heal too...nd Khushi had an accident bt why oh why daddy don't want to do anything about it...i'm curious and wish to read more...but i guess luck is nt in my side...i hardly open my mail box...u r gng to shift this in to ur blog right..untill then i'll stalk...

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

Just read chapter 5...Devyani Kumar is a character...and the irony. I guess she lives vicariously through her 'employees'?

Poor Lavanya...and Anjali is getting the classic "Can we talk?" guy who really just wants a sounding board...

Can't wait to see where you're going with this! And what happened to Khushi...

Edited by moomin4455 - 12 years ago

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ankii543

@ankii543

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Hey...

I just started reading this.story...

I find it really gripping n its a new concept...

I luved it...

Ive sent u an email...plz send me notifications for ur further updates...

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ankii543

@ankii543

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Im so sry...but i comment afyer every chapter...

This was a new n bold khushi who is witty n stands up to arnav...

It was a lovely update...

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9424976

@9424976

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#285

oh gosh what a story! This is one filled with mystery and thrill!! I love how your characters are very different, and that they dont just have this one characteristic about them but many layers...I am wondering as to what will happen to Khushi, what is Arnav's plan? How will he get through to her...so many questions!!Great update! Cant wait to see more.

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ankii543

@ankii543

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Sorry i must be irritating u...but i cant help.it...

U write sooo welll...i luved ch 3 as well...

She is dam carefree n bindas...luved it...

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ankii543

@ankii543

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#287

I too love multi layered characters instead of predictable ones...

I love this khushi...how her character is outlined...

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ankii543

@ankii543

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#288

This time i controlled on ch 4 n here is the comment for both ch 4&5...

This is all we hear of the so called high profile parties...

Poor anjali n lavanya...there r so much such dfeated souls out in the world...

Aweee akash is feeling n at the same time hating khushi...

The ferrari is indeed ment for the ASR...but asr is much better...lol

y did sashi not let akash find abt the accident...smells fishy...will know in further updates...

Lets see how these poles come together...

This story is very intresting...i luved it...

Plz email me for further updates...i have already mailed u my id but in case needed...anky.aa11@gmail.com...

N also plz add me to the blog when u post there...id love to be a part of this piece of urs...

Rest is up to u...