|ArHi|Shoreline Ch10 pg. 24 |DISCONTD| NOTE p.26 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.
Naina, u made a good observation. The car journey was cute. Khushi welcomed him home 4 coffee. And Mr. & Mrs. Gupta gave a surprise to khushi. Wonder wat happens now. Pls continue soon.
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ah! I surely did miss this story!

Oh god, poor Khushi, she's so mature, and she has so much to grow, but her parents have her caged up inside. I hope Arnav can be that wings for her to fly off.

I am sure the Guptas will accept Arnav's presence in Khushi's life, after all they're both from a well established families, but I get that Khushi still wants him to be a secret. They have just begun their closeness, and I am afraid the Guptas would push too far!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Baji!
An update finally! Hehehehe...
This was short and sweet. To be honest...I like shorter chapters better. They are precise and crisp keeping the reader's interest hooked in place.
Now to the chapter...I love it! The slightest of touch sets sparks between these two. There is something so innocent and pure in their feelings.
Ooops. Looks like the Guptas are here for Arnav's perfect welcome. Hehehehe...I cannot wait to read what happens next.

Thanks for the PM.
Lots of love.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unique concept.. cute story... loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Someone's gonna get a surprise for life 🤣
Cant wait to see AK's reaction

It was a cute chapter

U covered the intricate details

Waiting for more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was really short one so please update soon.
so excited.. for next update.
Arnav came to knew its just a building not a home...
Thanks for pm.
sorry for late
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really nice. Its written is such a simple way that anyone will love it. Nice yaar. Sorry 4 the late comments.
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Posted: 12 years ago
love the update waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you everyone for the encouraging comments😳

My exam is on the 18th and I've got 4-5 projects due before that so there is no way I will be able to write an update before that
So I'm extremely sorry to inform you this but I have no other choice.

If some of you lose interest and don't want to follow this story anymore due to late updates then I understand that, and my apologies in advance if anyone is disappointed or anything.


Thanks again!

I promise to post an update after 18th and before 25th for sure😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 8|Doomed

"Shit"

"what happened?" he whispered as he tried to get the same view as her.

"Mr and Mrs Hitler are here"

He couldn't help but chuckle.

"you mean your dear parents?"

"sshh"

She quickly took out her phone and recklessly typed, nearly cracking the screen.

Taking a sigh of relief she looked at him to find him smiling like a goofball.

"What?"

"You are maniac"

"Oh shut up" she said rolling her eyes as she checked once more for the intruders.

"Its an emergency man"

When she was confirmed that they were left alone she got up and straightened her dress.

"Relax what's the worst that can happen?"

"that's what I don't know" she said gesturing with her shoulders.

She quickly grabbed the cups of coffee and handing him one she sipped on hers while she lazily rested on the counter.

"Won't you say hi to them?"

He said in a playful tone with a spark in his eyes, making the most innocent face as possible, failing miserably.

"I live with them in case you have forgotten" she said with a lazy, matter-of-factly voice.

"Khushi darling sahib and madam sahiba are calling you"

Ramu kaka said hesitatingly exchanging looks between Arnav and Khushi.

"and their mood is not too pleasant"

Uh-Oh

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And so the bomb had dropped and Mr and Mrs Gupta had found out about their daughter's little plan.

Amber stood in silence beside the bed fidgeting with her duppatta looking at the ceiling, admiring the wooden floor, everywhere except at the face that were now releasing steam, steam before the volcanic eruption.

Khushi and Arnav hurriedly came to her room leaving their unfinished coffee in the kitchen. She could feel the tension near the staircase.

Not good.

Seeing the unfamiliar face Mr and Mrs Gupta's attention was diverted from taking Khushi's class to who is this lower class fellow?

To lighten up the atmosphere Khushi introduced Arnav to her parents, they faked smiles which didn't go unnoticed by Arnav and in return he faked a bigger one.

Khushi had insisted that Arnav stay for the dinner but he refused as the promise was for a coffee only and Mr and Mrs Gupta didn't seem too pleased.

Arnav left the Villa to get some fresh air and much needed oxygen as he took a sigh of relief, leaving Khushi inside to get court marshaled.

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Will see her later if she is alive

He thought without any pity.

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Hello Lovelies!😳

Im extremely sorry for the late update but hey! this time the gap was less than the last time😆


Anyway, I have explained my reasons in the previous post so check that out if you haven't.

And i felt really bad for delaying so much so I thought if not a proper update the least I can do is post a small update right?😳

Again I am really with school until 18th so I didnt even proof read this so ignore any mistakes😆


Thank You!

For PMs Add me to your buddy list😉


EDIT: some readers had some confusions about this update and the plot so I posted a note on page 21 so check that out for clarifications :)

Edited by -Grace- - 12 years ago

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