Troubled love...a KR ff THREAD 3 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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congratulation for the new thread ... update res of the chapter soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congo yaar thread three ...!!! Abb update bhi de de ...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😊chapter 13😊

ta: swayam tumhari...rey!!!(shocked)

rey was standin with blood shud eyes he was hell hell angry...beyond limits...

swayam left frm their n moved to his room followed by viky...

ta: rey vo??

again a slap...

ta: rey??

(again a slap)

rey: (with teary eyes... he caught hld of her hand n twisted it her back was facin him)how dare u...hw could u do
this??(shouted)

ta: becoz i love u... n i want u...(sobbin n shouted)

rey: (he pushed her the result was she fell on the ground)(pointin his finger to her) shut up..!! just shut up tani..!!!
aisa kabi nahi hoga(shouted)tumhari wajah se mai swayam aur kr kria ko hw can i...mujhe apne aap par gin
araha hai...yeh sab kuch tumhari wajah se tani(pointing his finger towards her)(full on angry)

ta: (cryin she got up n cupped his face) dekho rey mai tumse bahot pyaar kartha hoon issiliye maine yeh sab
kiya... tu..tum usse bool jao mai hoon tumhare saath hamesha...

rey:(he pushed her)tani stop it bahut hogaya... mai tumse pyaar nahi kartha kabi nahi...yeh baat apna dimaag
mai dal do warna (shouted n went out)

ta: warna kya haan tum yeh sab uss kria keliye kar rahe ho na agar vo hamare beech mai hayi toh mai usse maar daloongi...(shouted at him)

rey who was goin out heard this...came towards her n caught hold of her neck...

ta: (tryin to remove his hand)rey yeh kya kar rahe ho...??

rey:(griitin his teeth) mai tumhe issiliye tolarate kar raha hoon kyun ki tum swayam ki behen ho...n abi jo tumhne
bola that ur kill kria...usse pehle mai tumhe maar doonga...yeh baat acchi tarah yaad rakna kria keliye mai hoon agar tumhe marna hai...pehle tum mujhe marna hoga...(he removed his
hands n went out..)

he went to his room n fell on his knees n cried...

rey:(cryin)m sorry kria mujhe maaf kardo...he remembered wat all he said to kria that day...

u just stay away...ur so disgusting...tum itna cheap kaise hosakte ho kria...??(he caught his head n cried hard)

tani ko beech mai mat lao...tumse kaafi acchi hai vo...

apni gandi zubaan se mera naam mat lo...n nw get out from my house...n dubara tumhari shakal maat dikhao
mujhe...

he closed his ears n cried cried cried loud...

rey: wat hv i done...kya kardiya maine...mai kria ko itna sab kuch kaise??kaise??(shouted)mai...mai apne pyaar
par vishwas nahi kiya hw can i...aur swayam swayam...

rey moved to swayam room...

swayam was staring out of the window..

rey: swa...swayam (swayam turned towards him)

they had tears...both walked towards eachother slowly...

rey: (cryin)m sorry swayam...

swayam hugged him tight...

rey:(huggin n cryin n sobbin) swayam m sorry mujhe maaf kardo...mai tumpar barosa nahi kiya m sorry swayam
plz mujhe maaf kardo m sorry swayam...

sw:(hugging n cryin)its ok rey...

vi: bhai(came jumpin n hugged) all had a tight hug...

they broke the hug...

rey: m sorry swayam...

sw: its ok rey...

n rey sat on the bed...

sw: kya hua rey??

rey: (started cryin) mai apni kria par shak kardi...i didnt trust my love...mai usse kohdia humesha humesha keliye

sw: haan tunhe bahut badi galti kardiya...u knw wat rey she loves u alot rey but...

rey: ab mai kya karoon swayam agar vo mujhe tappad maregi na phir bi mai kushi kushi leloonga mujhe usse
dekhna hai...(n he got up from bed)

sw: where r u goin??

rey: kria ke ghar...mujhe usse maafi maangni hai i want my kria back...

sw: kria ghar mai nahi hai...

rey-(swiftly turned towards swayu) nahi hai matlab kaha hai vo...??(panikin)

sw: arre uski hospital se camp gayi hai...sharon ne bola vo log kal ajayenge...

rey: oh ok...(n he left fr his room)

rey in his room...

rey sleepin n was thinkin abt kria...

rey: kria m soory ull forgive me na...we ll again be together na...i love u baby...(n dozed)

NXT MORNING...

rey woke up early...sn got ready n moved to parkin lot he was abt to start his bike...

rey:(thinkin) ghar jao ya hospital??nahi hospital jata hoon ghar mai agar mujhe ignore kardiya toh...nahi hospital
hi sahi...)he started his bike n in minutes he reached...

he went to her cabin n saw the sweeping lady was sweeping the floor so he sat out on the couch in frnt of her
cabin...

5 minutes passed no sign of kria he stood up n started walking to n fro...after whole 20 minutes...she arrived...

he was just starin at her as tear made its way...he touched the tear n wiped it off..she walking gracefully as
ever...adjusting the strands of hair...n wishing people with a smile...

when she saw rey she just frozed...but she ignored him n went inside her cabin...

he took a deep breadth n went in...

kria kept her handbag aside n was abt to move out..but he caught hold of her wrist,

rey: kkr..kria vo mai...

she pulled her hand from him...

rey: kria m sorry...

meantime a sister enterrred...

sis: dr sab tayyar hai...

kr: ok chaliye...(sayin this she moved out)

rey: kria...

kria went in the operation theatre...

v: phirse kyun aayi ho??

rey: sharon vo...

sh: ek kaam karo usse bool jao...

rey: wat???

sh- haan usse bool jao...u dont desreve her...(smirkin)

rey: sharon plz dont say like that i love her...

sh: oh really...!!!

rey: i knw sharon jo maine kiya vo galat hai mujhe kal hi pata chala tani ne...

sh: wow tumhe tani ke baat par barosa hai kria ki baat par nahi...

rey looked dwn...sharon was just lookin at him...

after 20 minutes..the operation gt over n kria came out..

kr: sharon chalo...(kria n shar started walkin)

rey: (walkin with dem)kria meri baat suno m sorry...mujhse baat karo mujhe gaali do,mujhe tappad maro but plz
forgive me...plz i love u...

kria stopped in her tracks...

kr: wat did u just say...i love u...tumhe uska meaning pata hai...??(a slight laugh)

rey: kria plz mujhe maaf kardo...

kr: waise tumhne kaha tha na mai apni shakal tumhe na dikao...toh kyu yaha aahi ho??

rey: kria plz mujhe hurt maat karo...(crying)

kr: jo tumhe mujhe hurt kiya tha uska kya(as a tear rolled down her cheek)

rey: baby plz dont cry...i cant see u cryin..(tryin to cup her face bt she flinched back)

kr: leave rey...(shouted)

rey: kria plz m sorry mai dobara aise nahi karoonga...

kr: (she caught hold of her collar) mai tumhe itna pyaar kiya tha but u didnt trust me kyu??mai mai aur swayam tum aisa soch bi kaise sakthe ho(shouted n crying)mai tumhe kabi
maaaf nahi karoonga kabi nahi...

all the people were lookin at them...

she pushed him n walked away crying...

rey fell on his knees crying...

rey: m sorry kria plz mujhe maaf kardo mai tumhare bina nahi rahsakta...kria dont leave me plz...

here kria heard everythin n was crying badly...so she went away crying...

Edited by kreya_pearl - 12 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread 🥳...
Sorry couldn't comment on the earlier parts 😳...
They were Amazing 😃...
Loved them ❤️...
But kahan par la ke end kar diya 🤔...
Plz continue soon 😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riyaluvka2s

Di update? Apne aaj kha tha 😭

haan aaj hi karoongi😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kreya_pearl

haan aaj hi karoongi😃<div></div>

yeah..jldi karo me dying to read how they clear mu's
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Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kreya_pearl

haan aaj hi karoongi😃



kab tak update milega
9 bje se pehle pehle de do yr

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