TaaRey & Others FF: Forever & Always (on hold)

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dh19

@dh19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

am bit confused with character's relationship but

i think as story developed will know more about them.
but hey you didnt mention anything about rey.

pls. continue soon.

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PreciousHeart

@PreciousHeart

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Hey dear firstly welcome to the forum 🤗! U did a gr8 job I have watched PYKEK it was one of my fab but I seriously have forgotten many characters😆 ! But some some I remember ! I really liked the concept although confusing but will get cleared! Do continue n pm me ! N if possible give Character Sketch ! Which will make it easier! 😊

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Neha

@miss_neha

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Ok interesting concept.. but im really cobfused about the characters.. omg.. since there r soo many loll.. im guessing it'll clear up once u start writing thestory.. one question.. is the whole d3 gang the same.. r swayam n taani still bro-sis

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Suhaima Kazi

@.wanderlust.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Hey is a lil too confusing :S
neways nice concept :)

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TOOBA

@arina23

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

hey..!

i am confused...!

but i want u to continue soo update sooonn

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aditi

@adi.cutiepie

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

little confusing but still interesting do update soon dear dieing to read!

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Diya

@DazzlingDiya

Dazzler

+ 24

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Guys, you have no idea how much these comments mean to me! Thank you so much!😊

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Diya

@DazzlingDiya

Dazzler

+ 24

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Guys, thank you all so much for the comments! Here's Part 1:

The guys won match, Sharon came back and Aashi and Bharat like each other. And for the record, Vishaka is not going to be mentioned in this. 😭

St.Louis College

Vicky: Guys, we won!

Rey: All because of Swayam.

Swayam: Nehi yaar, it was a team effort.

Sharon:Oh god Swayam! Itna bhi modest mat bano. Vaise, Taani kaha hain?

Other Girls: Haan! Taani kaha hai?

Swayam: Voh actually guys-

VP Sir: Mr. Shekhawat, I think I can answer that question. First of all, congratulations. Aap logo ki vajay se dance ban hat gaya (the gang cheers). Second of all, welcome back Sharon, I hope you're feeling better. And finally, Ms. Taani won't be coming back. Usne mujse baat kiya tha aur voh wapas Dehradun gayi hai. 😭 And, mujhe kuch zaruri kaam hai so, college ek mahine ke liye band rahe ga.

(VP sir walks away)

Nilesh: So, road trip?

Rey: Road trip!

Everyone stars to leave but Vicky stops them: Guys, wait! Mere pas tum sab ki liye ek kush khabri hai. Meri kagu phirse meri Kagu ban gayi hair aur Kagu, I'm sorry. Mene tumhe bohot rulaya.

Neha: It's okay Babu. Kagu also not being fair.

Swayam: Haan, par phirse agar Babu ne Kagu ko rulaya na, to Babu mere haato se marega.

Bharat & Amar: Haan!

Rey: (gets irritated but keeps his cool) Okay, agar sab ka good news hogaya hai, to ek ghante mei, tum sab mere ghar ke samne mera wait karoge. So guys, Mission Taani?!

Everyone else: Mission Taani!

Dehradun

Nanaji: Taani beta, tum mere decision se tikh ho na?

Taani: Nanaji, aap jo bhi decision lenge, meri bhalayi ke liye hi lenge and I respect that.

Okay, I know, not a great start but it'll get better. Pakka promise guys!