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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
riya getting married??? in 3 days!!!

update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nyc update luvd it...me not bengali but can understand as i am an odiya:)* wen arjun was playing violin i felt like he was playing d song''chirodini ame je tomar yuge yuge ame je...'' so beautful description* i got lost in some dream land...:) sry cudnt coment earlier was lil bsy with studies but eagerly waitin to know wat will hapen in these 3 days that will change Ariya's life:) pls pm me wen u update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update
riya had dream about arjun great
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
nice update :)
so riya i getting married :) and she doesn't even love karan
loved riya's dream :) very well written
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Hello everyone! Back with another part……. Hope u like it.

So sorry if I make any mistake

PART—10

Riya:[thodi uchi awaz may…..] sir,aaj aap iss shirt may……

Arjun:[riya ki taraf thoda gusse se dekhke..] kyun?accha nehi dikh raha hoon?abhi badal ke ana parega??

Riya[sar jhukakar,dhirese]: nehi sir, maine aisa kab kaha………

Shree or chotu hass rahe the,lekin jab arjun un logo ko gusse se dekhte hai tab wo log chup ho jati hay………

Arjun:commissioner sir ne hamain do cases de issliye hum do team may divide hoke kam karenge.shree, chotu tum log rathod ke paas jau bo niche tumlogo ki wait karraha hay. Or riya tum meri sath chalo.

Shree & chotu rathod ke sath chale jate hay.kuch der baad arjun or riya vi chale jate hay.

[arjun or riya in the car]

Riya : sir, ek baat puchu?

Arjun: ha , pucho.

Riya: sir mujhe pata hai ki aapko shadi main jana pasand nehi… lekin sir,kya aap meri shadi may vi nehi ayenge?

Arjun: kab hai tumhari shadi?

Riya :3 din baad…

Arjun: koushish karunga.by the way ,congratulation.

Riya : thank u,sir………

Wo log saradin investigation main busy rehte or phir rat ko riya office ake rathod ko uski shadi ki bareme bata ti hay.

Rathod: congratulation riya.kab hai shadi tuhari?

Riya: sir 3 din baad[phir arjun ki taraf dekh kar]aap sabko aana parega.

Rathod: of course riya,hum sab log ayenge.

Riya: sir mujhe kuch dino ki chutti chahiye.

Rathod: oh, sure.why not?tum srif ek application de dena.

Riya:ok,sir.

Phir sab log apne apne ghar chale jate hay.

[2 days later]

[arjun& riya in office]

Arjun: riya, hamain abhi site pe jana hoga.hamain unlogoko range hat pakarna hoga.

Riya:thik hay sir,chaliye.

Arjun or riya site chalte hay or waha unlogo par kuch gunde attack kar leta hai…jab ek gunde arjun ko churi se marne aarahe the tab riya ne use pakar leta hay or ayse me churi se uski hath kat jati hay.lekin arjun ko yeh nehi dikhta.arjun or riya ne milke sabkuch handle kar lete hai or kuch der baad local police ake subko arrest kar leta hai.phir arjun& riya car se office ja rahey the tab hi arjun ko riya ki hath pe nazar ata hai.

Arjun:riya tumhari hath se to khun nikal rahe hay!

Arjun car rokh leta hai..

Riya:ha,sir…thodisi lag gayi.

Arjun[gusse se]:thodisi lag gayi matlab?iss liye main kehta hoon tum abhi bhi field job ke liyetayer nehi ho.tum research desk may hi thik ho.

Yeh sunke riya thodi dukhi ho jati hai.

Arjun first aid box nikal ta hai or riya ki left hand par bandage karna suru kar deta hay.lekin riya ki ring ki wajayse arjun bandage nehi kar pa rahai the.issliye arjun riya ki ring khol deta hay or samne rakh deta hay.

Riya: sir,yeh meri engagement ring hay…aap iski upar hi bandage kar dete.

Arjun: riya…aab ye mat kehna ise kholne se bohot bara aapshagun ho gaya.

Riya chup ho jati hai. Phir bandage karne ke baad wo dono office jati hay or arjun rathod ko case ki report karta hay.

Rathod: good job…ok,aab sab chalte hai…kal milte hai.

Riya: sir,kal nehi.parso.kal to maine chutti le hayna?

Rathod: oh,ha!tumne bataya tha.[thoda haske]thik hay parso hum sab milte hay……tumhari shadi may……

Phir sab log office se chale jate hay or hamesha ki tarha iss bar vi arjun or riya ekhi car may jarahe hay.thode der baad karan riya ko call karta hai lekin riya bar bar cut deta hai.itne bar katne ki baad vi jab karan phirse call karta hay tab riya gusse se phone bandh kardeti hay.aaj riya kuch keh nehi rahi hay.usski chehreme ek mayusi aagayi hai.arjun yeh sab kuch dekh raha tha.or iss bar bo pehle bat shuru karta hai.

Arjun: ek baat puchu riya?

Riya: ha sir puchiye.

Arjun: kyat um kisi baat le kar pereshan ho?

Riya: sir aapko kyse pata?

Arjun: tumhari chehre pe saaf dikhai de rahi hay..agar tum chaho to mujse share kar sakti ho.

Riya: nehi sir…actually sir mujhe bohot ajeeb lagraha hay.aap to bohot samajdar ho na?kya aap mujhe kuch bata sakte hai?

Arjun car rokh deta hai or riya ko kehte hai bahar aneke liye.phir wo dono raste ke sath ek side bench pe beth te hai

Riya[sar jhuka kar]: pata nehi sir aap mere bareme kya soch rahey hay..or may vi pata nehi kyun aapse yeh sab keh ri hoon!sir mujhe kisise baat karni hay…

Arjun:tum batao may sun raha hoon…

Riya:mujhe sir kuch accha nehi lagta..hamesha aysa lagta hay ke mera sab kuch chut raha hey.kahin to kuch thik nehi ho rahi hay,kavi kavi aysehi ankhome asu ajate hay[riya ki ankhome asu ajati hay]pehli ki tara has nehi pati.logose baat nehi kar pati,aysa lagta hai ki main iss duniya may nehi hoon…

Arjun dikhraha tha riya ki ankhose asu nikal rahi hay lekin jayse use iss baat ki pata hi nehi.arjun riya ki kandhepe hat rakhta hay.

Arjun: riya main tumhe jitna janta hoon iss se kahi jiyada tum aapne aapko janti ho.aapne liye thoda waqt nikalo phir aapne dilse pucho ki use kya chahiye.

Riya:sir ,dilse pucha tha..lekin use bhi kuch nehi pata.

Riya ki ayse kehnese arjun thoda muskurate hay.riya kuch kehnehiwali thi lekin arjun ko muskurata dekhkar bo chup ho jati hai lekin usski ankhe tab bhi naam thi

Arjun: tum betho,main abhi aaraha hoon.

Arjun waha se chale jate hai or thode der baad wo riya ke liye ice cream lekar aata hai.

Riya surprise ho jati hay ki arjun sir ne uske liye ice cream lekar aaya

[ice cream hat pe le kar]

Riya; sir aap!!??ice cream lekar aye??mere liye???

Arjun: issme hayran honeki kya baat hai!actually tum ro rahe the or mujhe yaad agaya ke ekdin tum shree se kehrahi thi ki jab tum roti ho tab tumhari parents tumhare liye ice cream lekar ata hai.

Riya: lekin sir,tab main choti thi…

Arjun:accha?mujhe to hamesa hi aysa lagta hai kit um abhi bhi bare nehi hue ho!

Riya kuch nehi kehte baas ice cream kha rahe the.ice cream khane ki baad arjun riya ko ghar ki bahar drop karta hay.arjun car se bahar nikal ta hay or riya ko kehta hay

Arjun:tumhe to tumhari baghban par pura biswash hai na?to phir jo kuch bhi ho raha hai use hone do..kyun ki tumhi to kahi thin a jo hota hai bhagban ki marji se hi hota hai…

Phir arjun waha se chala jata hay.or riya ko uss din ki yaad ati hai jab usne prashad dete samay arjun ko yeh kahi thi.

Riya[take a deep breath]yeh kavi kuch vulte kyun nehi hay?

Phir riya thodi haske andar chali jati hay.

[arjun in the car]

Arjun car se ghar jar aha tha tabhi usko riya ki ring ki yaad ati hay wo samne dekhta hay lekin use ring nehi dekhay deta.phir wo aapne aapse kehte hay..

Arjun; shayed riya legai hogi……

[to be continue]

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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
great update :) loved it
loved arjun's concern for riya when she injured her end
their conversation was awesome
awww arjun brought icecream for her :) how sweet
continue soon
Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum update...!!
loved it...!!!
ariya convo in the car was nice...!!!
awww arjun bought her ice cream...!!!😳
loved the way arjun was concerned for riya...!!!
continue soon...!!!
cant wait for the next part...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
loved arjun concerns for riya
their car convo was nice
aww arjun bought icecearm for riya
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi!!!

Back with another part of 'dhadkan bani zuban'..

this part..it's really very special for me… Hope u can enjoy it..

PART—11

[arjun in the car]

Arjun car se ghar jar aha tha tabhi usko riya ki ring ki yaad ati hay wo samne dekhta hay lekin use ring nehi dekhay deta.phir wo aapne aapse kehte hay..

Arjun; shayed riya legai hogi……

****

[ riya ki ghar]

Aaj riya ki mehendi hai.sab log aye hue hai.. karan ki ghar se bhi usske kuch ristedar aye hue hai.sab log enjoy kar rahe hai sirf riya hi chup chap bethi hui hai.or kavi kavi jhuti smile de rahi hai……ek ladki usski right hand per mehendi laga rahi thi jab iss hath per mehendi lagana khatam ho gayi to wo ladki riya ki left hand mangi.lekin uss hath per riya ki abhi bhi bandage laga hua tha.jab uss ladki ne riya ko bandage kholne ke liye kaha to riya ko achanak yaad aajati hai ki ussne arjun sir ki car mai aapni ring vulkar aayi.issliye wo sab ke samne bandage na kholke aapna phone le kar bahar aajati hai or arjun ko phone karti hai.

Riya:hello,sir?kaha hai aap?

Arjun:kyun? tumhe koi kaam hai?

Riya:wo……sir……main to aapna ring aapke car me hi vul ayi.kya aap abhi use lekar ayenge please??

Arjun:kya???!!! Tumne ring nehi li thi??

Lekin wo to mera car mai nehi hai…!!

Riya[pareshan ho ke]:nehi sir…maine to nehi le thi………lekin ab kya hoga?bandage ki wajasey abi tak kisi ko ring ki bareme nahi pata..aab jab mehendi lagaungi to saabko pata chal jayega…

Arjun:tum ghar ki bahar mujse milo..main abhi aaraha hoon.

Kuch der baad,arjun waha pohoch ta hai or dekh ta hai ki riya ghar ki bahar khari hui hay…arjun riya ki paas jata hai.

Aaj riya off white or maroon colour ki lehenga pehni hui hai..

Arjun sirf ek bar use niche se upor tak dekhta hai…lekin kuch nehi kehte.

Riya:sir,mila kya????

Arjun;maine bohot dhunda,lekin nehi mila…

Riya:sir….aab kya hoga??karan ki kuch rishtedar bhi aaj yaha aaye hue hai…pata nehi yeh log iss baat ko kaha se kaha leke jayegi!!

Arjun:karan ne ye ring kaha se liya?

Riya:sir,shayed kisi moon jwelary shop se…

Arjun:thik hai.main abhi waha jata hoon or aisa hi ek ring lekar aata hoon.

Riya:sir, main bhi aapke saath chaloon??

Arjun:nehi,agar tum jaogi to saab log tumhe dhundegi.

Riya:koi baat nehi,sir.agar main aapki sath chalongi to ring dhundne mai aasan hoga.

Arjun: thik hai.

Phir wo log uss jwelary shop chale jate hai or waha bohot dhundne ke baad thik waysa hi ek ring milta hai.

Riya:sir,main to paisa le aana vul gayi….

Arjun:thik hai,main pay kar deta hoon.

Phir arjun aapne paiso se riya ko engagement ring kharid k deta hai,phir wo dono ghar jane ke liye nikaltehe.

Riya ko bar bar ghar se call aarahi thi,lekin wo utha nehi rahi thi.

Arjun riya ko ghar dropped kar deta hai jab riya car se nikal kar jaa rahi thi tab arjun use piche se bulata hai

Arjun:riya… aapni ring to leke jao

Riya:wo..sir… main to phir se………

Arjun:vul gayi!! Ye yaha se hi pehen ke jao.phir arjun wo ring box se nikal ta he or riya ki hath mai de deta hai.

Riya:sir… kya aap mere bandage khol denge please….? Wo meri right hand per mehendi hai na…

Arjun riya ki bandage khol raha tha or riya arjun ki taraf dekh rahi thi…………

Riya:sir, aapne mujhe baataya nehi ki main kaisi lag rahi hoon?

Arjun[riya ki taraf bina dekh ke]: acchi lagrahi ho.

Riya:sir…aap bina dekh ke………

Arjun:yeh lo khol diya tumhari bandage.

Phir riya ring pehen ne ki koushish kar rahi thi lekin usse nehi ho rahi thi.phir arjun riya ki hath se wo ring le leta hai or riya ko pehna deta hai..

Riya arjun ki taraf dekh ta hai or arjun bina kuch kahe waha se chala jata hai.lekin car ka darwaja kholne se pehle wo riya ko piche modkar dekhe hi bina kehtahe

Arjun:kuch log hote hai jo acche kapre or gehne pehenne ki baad wo kapre or gehne ki khubsurti or bhi baad jati hai…

Phir arjun waha se chala jata hai.riya ko tab hi wo baate samajme nehi aati..wo waha khari hoke aapni ring ko dekh rahi thi…

Riya [man hi man mai]:yeh wo ring nehi hai jo karan ne mujhe diya tha…yeh arjun sir ne mujhe aapne paiso se kharid ke diya……yeh wo ring nehi hai jo karan ne mujhe pehnaya tha…yeh arjun sir ne mujhe aapne hatho se mujhe pehnaya……to phir ye to meri engagement ring nehi ho sakti…phir ye kya hai??aagar ye bhagban ki marji se hua to phir kyun hua??

Riya ye sab souchte souchte aandar jati hai …sab log use puch rahi thi ki wo itni der tak kaha thi? Wo kuch nehi kehti. Wo sidha ja k beth jati hai or mehendi lagane ki liye kehdeti hay.jab wo ladki usse puch rahi thi ki mehendi mai naam kya likkha jayenge tab wo arjun ki wo last line yaad karti hai…or tab use samaj me aati hai arjun sir ne usse aisa kyun kaha….wo thodi muskurati hai…tab piche se koi kehti hai ''karan" ya ni "k" akshar likhne k liye.

Karan ki naam sunke riya ki dhiyan tut jati hai.wo dekhti hai ki usski hath mai "K" likha gaya.wo bina kuch kahe waha se uth jati hai or aapni room mai chali jati hai…

Wo ayne ki samne jati hai or aapne aap ko goor se dekhne lagti hai…use phirse arjun ki wo baate yaad a jati hai..or wo phirse muskurane lagti hai.kuch der baad wo khayal karti hai ki usski left hand ki mehendi kharab ho gayi…or usmese "k" akshar ekdamse mitgayi.

Riya upar dekhti hai or kehti hai,"kyun?kyun bhagban?kyun?"

[to be continue]

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Posted: 12 years ago
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what did u do dude!!!😆
arjun buy ring for riya!!!!then also help to wear it!!!
😊😊.that means now arjun-riya engaged!!
wow!!!!great job👏
awesome update...love it very much😃

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