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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing excellent work.
feelng bd fr riya.
watng fr nxt prt update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update... poor riya.. she is soo confused.. hope arjun comes..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor RIYA i hope ARJUN does come and get her before that obnoxious karan
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi! everyone…. back with another part………………

Hope u can enjoy it.

PART—13b

Riya ro parti hai or bar bar jaha arjun sir likha thaw aha chu rahe the.phir wo aapna mobile leti hai or arjun ko message kar deta hai

"aapko ana hi hoga sir,main aapka intezar karungi"

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Kuch waqt ki baad shree haste hue waha ataahai.

Shree:riya…. Wo aagaya.

Riya[haske…]:arjun sir aagaye?????

Shree[hasi band karke…]:arjun sir kuyn aayenge!main to karan ki baat kar raha tha.

Riya ki muskurahat ekhi paal kho jati hai.tab kuch ladki waha ati hai or riya ko waha se lekar jaati hai.riya dekhti hai ki karan mandap ki saamne betha hai.lekin uski nazar bar bar darwaze par ja rahi hai.wo mandap pe ake karan ke sath beth jati hai.karan ne use kuch pucha lekin wo sun nehi payi.kyun ki uski nazar tabhi darwaze per thi.pandit ji mantra parna shuru kar deta hai.tabhi koi karan ki kan main kuch bolkar jati hai or karan waha se uth jata hai.sab log chawk jate hai.

Karan[gusse se]:mujhe nehi karna ye shadi.

Riya bhi utjati hai.uski maa karan se puchti hai

Riya ki maa:yeh sab kya kehrahe ho beta?

Karan:main thik hi kehraha hoon aunty.jo ladki shadi se pehle kisi or ke sath sammand rakhta hai mujhe aysi characterless ladki se shadi nehi karna!

Rathod:zubaan samhalke baat karo karan.tumhe pata bhi hai ke tum kiski bareme yeh sab kehrahe ho?

Karan:ha,mujhe pata hai.mujhe to pehlehi samajjana chahiye tha.

Riya:tum tumhare kehneka matlab kya hai karan?

Karan:sunneki himmat hai tumhe?tumhe kya lagta hai tum uss arjun ki lodge mai bar bar ana jana karogi or mujhe kuch pata nehi chalega?

Sob log shock ho jate hai or apas mai batey karrna shuru kardeta hai.

Riya[chillake kehta hai]:tum abhi mere ghar se nikal jao.isse pehle main tumhe dhakke marke gharse nikal doon.

Karan:mujhe bhi koi interest nehi hai tum jayse ladki ko shadi karne ke liye.tum jaysi ladki iss society mein rehneki layek nehi hai.tumhe to waha hona chahiye jaha ………………

Yeh sunke riya karan ko thappar marti hai or aapni maa ko kehti hai

Riya:maa,usse abhi yaha se janeke liye kaho varna main use….

Karan ka mom:tumhari itni himmat?!accha hua kit um jaysi ladki meri ghar ki bahu nehi hue.

Rathod:nehi,accha ye hua ki riya jaysi ladki aapki ghar ki bahu nehi bani.

Karan[gusse se]: mom chalo yeha se.. main bhi dekhta hoon ki wo ayse kis kis ko chup karati hai.

Or ha riya,tumhari arjun sir ko keh dena aab use acchai ka naqab pehenke ghumne ki jarurat nehi hai.

Riya:karan!... darwaza udhar hai.

Phir karan or uska family waha se chale jate hai.or dhire dhire sare mehman bhi.

Kuch awrate to abhi se hi arjun or riya ke bareme baate banana suru kar dete hai.sirf rathod ,shree or chotu rehjate hai.riya ki papa to pehle se hi shock hoke sofe pe behtehue hai.aab usski maa bhi waha jake beth jati hai.riya uski maa ki paas jati hai.

Riya: maa,meri bishwas karo meri or arjun sir ki beech aysa koi rista nehi hai.

Riya ki maa: meri bishwas karne se kya fayda?duniya to chup nehi rahegina.aab badnami to teri hogi……

Riya usski papa ki paas bhi jati hai.or uski papa ko bhi samjhane ki koushis karti hai lekin uski papa kuch nehi kehte.

Phir shree or chotu riya ki paas jati hai

Shree:aab kuch maat kehna riya.

Riya ro parti hai uski maa or papa ko ayse dekh ke.

Rathod:riya, samhalo aapne aapko.hamein aab yaha se chale jana chahiye.mujhe rawte se baat karna hoga.

Riya:nehi sir,iss me arjun sir ki koi galti nehi hai.arjun sir aysa nehi hai.

Rathod:pata hai mujhe.wo kaysa insaan hai ye mujse behter or koi nehi janta……………

Phir rathod,shree,or chotu waha se chale jate hai sirf rathod hi aapne car lekar arjun ki waha jate hai.

[to be continue]

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Posted: 12 years ago
bahat achhha hua ke karan ne riya se shaadi nahi ki.hamari riya bach gayyi.par poor riya😭.koi usski baat nahi sun raha.very nice update.cont. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update... its good that Riya dnt get married to dat idot Karan... hw dare he call Riya characterless... Poor Riya no one is listening to her... update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor riya but lucky also atlast us stupid karan say to bach gayi.
continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
HOW DARE HE?? IDIOT KARN!!! Riya se acchi ladki ose mil hi nahi sakti!! Pachtayega Karan!!!
Bt the gud thing is that atleast now Ariya will meet!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
it's great that idiot karan can't get riya.
for riya's slap to karan👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
he deserves it😡😡😡.
nice update dear,continue soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update :) loved it
so happy that riya didn't get married to that loser arjun
how dare he insult riya like that and call her characterless
riya slapped him :) awesome
feeling bad for riya no one is listening to her
continue soon
Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago

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