arshi ss:and the devil returns(banner updated)

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PROLOGUE

"I love you, khushi"

"What nonsense, Shyam!!!! if u love me, why didn't you leave anjali!!!!!!"

His face paled with fury!!!! How can she???? His hands clenched and fury spread through him like poison.

Arnav singh raizada never made such mistake. But today he felt helpless and lost.

She played him. That two timer, that cheat.

"How can she????"

The girl who occupied his dreams was after his sister's happiness. She was the one who bought back the lost life in him. He felt shattered as if history was repeating itself'. Reality really hurts. With a force that can break anyone into pieces.

Life had taught him well. He had to do something fast. She was a hurricane that can ruin anyone's life. And right now she was after his sister'. His sweet baby sister'..

But he was the GREAT ASR. His mind was as sharp as a weapon and with the addition of rage, it became a deadly combination.

"khushi Kumari gupta, you have made a very big mistake" sneered the devil.

"Kitty, It is payback time."

And ASR was back and this time for a payback!

'''''''''''''..

Alone

By

Edgar Allan Poe

From childhood's hour I have not been
As others were; I have not seen
As others saw; I could not bring
My passions from a common spring.
From the same source I have not taken
My sorrow; I could not awaken
My heart to joy at the same tone;
And all I loved, I loved alone.
Then- in my childhood, in the dawn
Of a most stormy life- was drawn
From every depth of good and ill
The mystery which binds me still:
From the torrent, or the fountain,
From the red cliff of the mountain,
From the sun that round me rolled
In its autumn tint of gold,
From the lightning in the sky
As it passed me flying by,
From the thunder and the storm,
And the cloud that took the form
(When the rest of Heaven was blue)
Of a demon in my view.




INDEX

PROLOGUE:- ABOVE

TEASER:- BELOW😆

CHAPTER 1:- PG 2

NOTE 1 :- PG 5

NOTE 2 :- PG 8

BANNER:- PG 13

CHAPTER 2:-


PLEASE GIVE YOUR VIEWS AND PRESS LIKE AND CRITICISM IS WELCOME

THIS IS A DARK STORY. THE BACKGROUND MIGHT BE SAME BUT THE STORY WILL EVENTUALLY BECOME DARK. I'LL TRY TO GIVE A TEASER TOO..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ooh so this has the same background as the show
wonder what arnav will do
force marry her?
have budddy you,,please accept so i can get pms for future update=]
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting wonder what will Arnav do to Khushi now please pm me thanks
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I HOPE YOU'LL LIKE IT. BUT NONETHELESS PLZ LIKE AND COMMENT. SOME INSPIRATION HAS BEEN TAKEN FROM "THE DREAMLESS ETERNITY".

TEASER 1

Many emotions played across his face as he looked on lost as far as the eye can see - a vast horizon f shattered hope and broken trust. Every face was mocking at him as if telling "YOU ARE THE BIGGEST LOSER.".

His face twisted in fury, and his fists clenched in agitation and his eyes reddened with tears of helplessness.

His feeling was not of rage, but of pity, helplessness and frustration . The same feeling that he had felt 15 years ago. When fate had played him'..

ARNAV''S POV

For as long as I remember, I have never felt this loss after that incident. 15 years of suffering had made me the great ASR. But that girl had ruined everything. First my well-settled life and now my younger sister's happiness'.

Was it all a dream???

Unknowingly I had slept through my own reality. I had incessantly lived through my own world, my own universe...

But why did it feel as my soul had been toured and the reality laughed at me????

And while I stood in the suffocating darkness, fragments of my torn, treacherous memory haunted me... Reminiscing the days when I still had something to dream for... the time when I still had something to look up to... someone to hold on to...when i looked on, to meet her, to hear her chatter...

But she left me...

And now it was punishment time for her...

...

NO ONE'S POV

"BUT, the guilty shall be punished and justice will be done" sneered the devil, with an evil smirk and a horrific glint in his eyes.

Suddenly his cell rang

"WHAT???" Arnav barked

"Sir, everything has been done as u had told", Aman mumbled from the other side.

"This girl is in big trouble" Aman thought.

The thoughts of his boss menacing and horrific ways of taking revenge sent shivers down his spine.

"VERY GOOD, MR MATHUR", smiled the devil

"Now Ms gupta, the game has just begun. No one messes with THE ASR, And gets away"

And a booming, ferocious laughter filled the entire place...

...

"Bitterness is like cancer. It eats upon the host. But anger is like fire. It burns it all clean."
Maya Angelou

PLEASE COMMENT AND LIKE. CRITICISM IS WELCOMED. IT REALLY ENCOURAGES ME TO WRITE MORE


Edited by .crazzy4arshi. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Looks to be interesting. Do continue and only then we'll be able to comment properly!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😊nice start plz pm me when u update😆
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nice start !!! do update soon will be looking forward for it... thanks for pm 😊
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lovely post dr.. Update nxt part son... Wil b eagrly waitin
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Chapter 1

Payal: wake up khushi!!! It's time for your office. RISE AND SHINE!!!!!

Khushi's POV

I woke up in my nice cozy bed at about seven in the morning with a tingly feeling of excitement passing through my veins. I got up and looked outside my window, astounded at the colour of the sunrise sending rays of light which were hitting me in the eyes, knocking me back almost blinding me.

"ji, jiji ..."

Another day with that Laad governor!!! 'hmph', it was a living nightmare. But lately, he had been so kind, so generous.

Hey devi mayya!!!!! Please protect me from that rakshas...

"Sanka devi!!! Jaldi karo. Office nahi jana hai ka???? (sanka devi, come fast. Don't you have to go to the office??)

Haan haan, buaji!!! Aate hain... (yes yes, buaji!!! Coming...)

Oof! Buaji bhi naa...

Buaji: parmeshwari, mandir chali jana, aaj somwar hai naaa. (parmeshwari, go to the temple too. Today is Monday na)

"theek hai, buaji"

IN THE TEMPLE

Hey devi mayya, please keep My family happy and safe. And also protect me from that laad governor, Arnav Singh Raizada. But these days, i think, he has changed.

Oh ho!!! Tu bhi naa, khushi, that rakshas can never change.

'chalo mayya ke bhavan...'(her mobile rings)

"Hello, kaun" (Hello, who's there)

"MS GUPTA!!!!!"

UH OH!!!!!

Laad governor's danger siren!!! Hey devi mayya raksha karna...

"ji"

"Report to the office in 10 min"

"Ok sir!!!!"

Time to go; we'll talk later, devi mayya...

...

IN THE OFFICE

RECEPTIONIST: MS GUPTA!!!

UH!!! THIS MAKE-UP KI DUKAN!!!! KITNA MAKE-UP KARTI HAI, ONLY DEVI MAYYA KNOWS!!! ( THIS MAKE-UP SHOWROOM!!!! HOW MUCH MAKE-UP DOES SHE APPLY, ONLY DEVI MAYYA KNOWS!!!)

"JI"

"ASR HAS CALLED YOU IN HIS CABIN."

HEY DEVI MAYYA!!! PLEASE PROTECT ME FROM HIS ANGER, LAAD GOVERNOR KAHIN KE!!!

...

IN THE CABIN

NO ONE'S POV

"Ms gupta"

"ji, sir"

"You have to sign this agreement."

"What agreement???"

"No questions, Ms gupta."

"But..."

"I said NO QUESTION" ASR barked

Khushi cringed at his tone. Tears were blurring her eyes.

"khushi, sign it. Otherwise you'll lose your job and i'll make sure that no one employs you. So if you are smart, then sign it and no questions, I repeat."

Khushi reluctantly signed. She could sense that something bad was coming, really bad!!!!

His eyes had a strange glint, actually a terrifying glint. And his stance was that of a predator, a hungry predator, analysing his prey.

"So Miss gupta, I would like to state some conditions and it is mandatory for you to follow them."

"What conditions???"

"Just a second, Miss gupta. And please relax. This might be the last chance for you to relax..."

"What do you mean?"

AND SHE HEARD THAT MENACING LAUGHTER OF THE DEVIL, BOOM IN HIS CAVE!!!!!!!

Little did she realize that the wonderful, sunny morning was the beginning of her worst nightmare.

PRECAP

"I WON'T DO IT."

"THEN I THINK IT IS PUNISHMENT TIME FOR YOU, DEAR."

...

PLEASE LIKE AND COMMENT. OR ELSE I HAVE TO STOP MY SS.

IT IS MY FIRST STORY, IT REALLY ENCOURAGES ME.

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Edited by bhatnagar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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short update...
but loved the chapter...
nd update next one asap...

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