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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
hmmm,, mai bus wale scene se start kr ri hu,
bus wala scene bahut hi achha tha raj k liye, bechara etne mushkil se utha tha, or lgbhg galiya hi de raha tha but naina se milne k bad use ye urgent meeting etni buri b ni lg rahi thi,,

dusra scene jo bhut achha tha jb dono ne un budhe logo ko apne ma- baba ka darza diya,, tumne ek taraf ye b dikhya ki jaha hm apne budhe parents ko ghar se nikal dete h apne selfish motive k liye or ye b ni sochte ki unhone kitna kuch saha hota h humare liye, or dusri taraf ye b dikhya ki achhe logo ki kami b ni hoti jo unhe apna bana lete hain,

fir ye b dikhya ki parents manane or wakai hone fark hota h ni to raj bina soche smjhe un logo ko daatata ni, but wo ek achha ensaan b h jise apni galati ka ehsaas ho to tahe dil se mafi b magta h,,

ye story na sirf happy ending wali thi balki esme ek message bhi tha,, jo hm sbko apni zindagi me sabak k taur per shamil kerna chahiye,,

good 9t n Happy Lohari!!!!...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
The way you use pictures to support the dialogues and situations is amazing Ria👏
I'm sure that takes a lot of work.. and of course and most important your writing and the story must be beautiful too!😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
superb update with pics 😊
thanku do the pm 😃


Edited by sajan_kash01 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Hey ria ur inbox was full i send u so many pms but all invain.

anyways coming to d upd. & d summary its really helpful for d new readers.

Glad u gave it & i really can't wait for raj-naina's marriage ceremonies.

i was really busy yaar isiliye lambu comment nhi kr paai.

but here it is for u.

Tfd pm dear.⭐️

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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Great goging dear...i read only 9 part till now


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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Congratulations Ria!!

for 4th Thread...!!



Your Intro OS was really good. I love this 'Super Fast' speed 😆.Sab kuchh fast-forward mein ho gaya.😳 Raj-Naina meeting was cute... n thereafter all progress in story was damn interesting. but,main point was climax... Its really touchy n sweet. Thanks for posting this small story.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
ab bus Bundhan ki story bhi update ker dalo, we are waiting,, wo kya hai na, bahut dino se koi RN fic update hi ni ho rahi, so plz update soon yar..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
congrats for the new thread Ria..good update..interesting...well written... please do update soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww! That was so sweet Ria jaani! :D Tumhara writing style tou bohot accha hai! :) I am impressed! :D RN meeting was so cute...the story was really sweet :)
Congracts on ur new thread :) Update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
congrats for new thread ... n also wish u n ur family a very happy new year. wish u have a sizzling year ahed.

this os was sooo good, very nice like always. actuallly your writing is very nice, toh os to nice hoga hi ;)

like raj, bechare need abhi ne tor dia ... ab usse meeting khatam hone k baad phone karna chiye tha ... :P

par abhi k bajah se raj ko need k badle naina mil gayi ... ab shayad wo abhi ko beautiful galiya dena bandh kar sakta hai ...lol

like mr. n mrs.jaisawal ... they are too good for raj. without knowing the truth raj shoulnt have behabe like that. par sab kuch thik hogya finally.

actually iss os me itna sab kuch ek sath ho gya ... you wrote a whole stoy in one os ... nicely written dear.

loved it ... waiting for more os like this.

waiting for bandhan.

continue soon.

thanks for the pm.

ps: pix wr too good n perfect like always.


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