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really nice...loved it and looking forward to the next part

What do I write ? I am totally confused.Seriously farah you weave magic with words.Arnav is in his full charmer mode and khushi can't help but be charmed. The precap is so promising !!

It was perfect. Loved everything in this date from the clothes to the restaurant to the food to the romance and now the drive and the dance. I could imagine Arnav driving fast and then taking a turn and stopping in the park. Can't wait for the next update to read the rest. The precap is awesome.

The whole date was so romantic...Fari tu toh badi chupi rustam nikli. Kitni dates pe gayi hai tu haan? Tells tells


Both were so conscious of their appearance and thought that they don't look good enough for the other - how very wrong they were. They both were completely mesmerized by each others beauty...


My heart was going dhak dhak at the entire sequence and the audio that you have attached just added to my dhak dhaks.


Fari ji you are very cruel, jab mein romantic part aaya tabhi hi update khatam ar diya? wrong wrong wrong - so very wrong... *pouts*

First of all sorry for not commenting on the previous update.Its just that, I get to read two updates and every other thoughts just fly out of mu mind. The date started with a bang and hope will end with a bang. It was just perfect. Thanks for giving such a wonderful update 😉

Sigh! That was beautiful!
A dream date
Great update! Loved it!

Oh you've transported me to a dreamland... This was the most perfect date ever...
And I loved when he said that the date could not end with Salman on her mind... And of course it should be him... Just him...

I'm imagining them dancing to Taylor Swift's fearless now...

It was magical... The whole thing...
And I just can't seem to have enough of it...

Ah... Eagerly waiting for the next bit...

PS: you really are an amazingly talented writer...

It was beautiful..the date nd night...

Beautiful how you keep them in character through out - loved it.

Red wow i like this name. Hope Arnav continues to call her from time to time .. It's cute n utterly romantic.
Arnav can be himself without any pretense or any need to guard around him with only Khusi. I guess he didn't laugh or smile this much in his life like this evening . And Khusi could be the pampered . cute n innocent gal with only Arnav. With all this happening in her life , Arnav is the only person with whom she could be normal with a genuine smile on her face from her heart. Loved the way the whole evening went on.
Thanks for including the dhak dhak tune. I imagine that from both side. 😃
And Trust Khusi wants to pack the Jalebi in the pockets.
Why Arnav will give back that jacket. Hope Khusi tells him how devilish he looks in that and i am sure Arnav will keep that forever with him.. 😆
And now the dance in the rain is just perfect and hopefully the evening will end with a perfect Kiss.. 😳