ARSHI SS: ~PAWN cr~(BFTW3)#3 ch 08 pg 93 25/01 EXT - Page 84

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --MISHTEE--

Loved d update
pls dont make khushi suffer more
for d mistakes committed by her mother
I know its a dark story but pls bring
Arshi together ASAP


mishti i understand what you must be going through but they will not come together (literal meaning) anytime soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum update loved ot feels really sad for khushi i wish armav can see her innocemse n fall in love woth her she really deseerve it uuugggtrrr ankili is soo evil n nani mani supports her i jate her n gazal possesdive ness for arnav really worry me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor poor poor khushi...
Bichari...
Anjali is right one in this... 😡
Anyway, good she has payal and akash...
Also, my eyes proper teared up when i read the ending bit especially just before khushi runs on, when he sees how pale she looked and all that...
Hope arnav realises soon and things get better for khushi... As well as the person whos going through this in reality..:(
Great chapter... Cant wait for more
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Amiarisme




plzzz plzzz dont change the plot of the story nor cut any arnav and ghazal scene. i want to face the hard core reality of this truth and bitterness.

yes rgt..im with her... dont dare to chnge ur plot fr anyone's sake... its the writer's mind tat brng out originality... i knw u muct hv been chnging a little to present us and ths is nt gonna be the real scenario happeng wit that poor grl...yes readers wil ask ofcourse... but plz... dnt chnge ur writings..i wanna read it the original way it turned up in ur mind..i knw u r a fab writer...bring it up the way it originates in u... im wit u... 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update!!
Poor khushii being treated like dirt but akash did prove to be human in that house filled with selfish ppl!
Hope arnav softeneds a bit towards khushi if not loyal
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saranyaaa

yes rgt..im with her... dont dare to chnge ur plot fr anyone's sake... its the writer's mind tat brng out originality... i knw u muct hv been chnging a little to present us and ths is nt gonna be the real scenario happeng wit that poor grl...yes readers wil ask ofcourse... but plz... dnt chnge ur writings..i wanna read it the original way it turned up in ur mind..i knw u r a fab writer...bring it up the way it originates in u... im wit u... 👍🏼



yes ma'am plz stick to d writings...i know r demands can be irrational 2 tyms due to d fact we think so highly for our arnav but dis FF is real in all possible sense nd i wud really appreciate it to get more darker so dat it knocks some sense in us dat life is not bed of roses for most of d Ppl...nd if u relate dis story to princess den we shud get an inspiration from her who has faced do much hardshiups in lyf...plz ma'am dn't fall under d charm of our irrational demands..just stick to plan...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmm, ami etar prothom 2/3ta ch porechilam, valo legechilo. aj etar latest ch porlam. onekkhani egie gieche dekha jai. tobe jehetu amar blog access nai tai besi bolte pari na (BTW ami obosso sevabe chai o ni, tai tomar dosh nei). kintu shikar kori, dark story hisebe plotta khubi chomotkar.

emon ghotona reality teo thake sotti. bastobe khushir jibone ondhokar e shavabik kintu tumi asa kori khusi k justice diba...never mind tumi bolchi, karon ami tomar boroi hobo. tarthekeo beshi ami bisshash kori respect apni ba tumi te na, seta ridoyer govir theke aste hoi. baapre, bishal comment likhe fellam :)

have a gr8 day
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update
Poir khushi being treated like dirt, atleast akash shows to he the human he is in house full of selfish ppl!!
Arnav should atleast softened towards khushi it bout loyal!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update
Poor khushi being treated like dirt, atleast akash shows to be the human he is in house full of selfish ppl!!
Arnav should atleast softened towards khushi if not loyal!
Edited by robinhood008 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing update appy...
Poor khushi...she is so naive...jus pity her...she is crying because she is hungry...oh god...
Loved akash in this update and hated anji...
Thanks for the pm

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