Vignettes -12. From ... , with love - Page 11

Can't wait for the next update!

Very well written with Khushi and Arnav's relationship finding cementing in the eyes of all and specially the new entrant.

Fabulous piece of work!!!

omg!! the update was brilliant!! im damn curious to know what happened!

Was waiting for ur update since morning(no no...the last time u updated..hehe).

arnav and khushi's compatibility is heart-warming.. eager to know the reason behind dhruv and arnav's rift.

Okay. My comment is only one line

"I want more and I want the next update NOW".

Lovely update. Loved the way you showed the way Arnav tackled things after Khushi came in his life. The contrast between an earlier Arnav and the somber Arnav now is very good in this OS. Loved the family's reaction to Dhruv coming back. Now I am intrigued as to what had caused the rift between Arnav and Dhruv. Waiting for the next update. Thanks for the pm.

I am such an Arnav-Khushi junkie. This whole MS is about Dhruv and how he will find out how much his brother has changed after marriage, and still, I find myself grinning silly or having "Awww" marathons when I read about Arnav calling out to Khushi first thing after returning from his jog, or when Khushi drops a kiss on his shoulder and stands by him silently without probing 'cause that's what he needs at that moment, or when she realizes he is back from his trip down memory lane just because his frown line relaxed. So yeah, I am a sucker for Arnav-Khushi. Rabba Vey FTW!

Moving on, Dhruv, I like him! Someone who looks like Akash but is like Arnav in demeanor, he is intriguing. It was so amusing to see him sympathizing with Khushi thinking his bhabi faced his bhaiyaa's anger. He will catch up soon enough, he saw the little PDA by the door, he is on his way to realize ASR has been mushified, and how! 😆

You know, you should really start thinking about writing more short stories, along with your vignettes, do give it a thought :)

Loved the understanding between Arnav and Khushi..
Arnav seems to be deeply hurt by Dhruv..
Waiting for next part..