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Posted: 12 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: toeditor
Waiting for 98 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊

W...a...i...t...i...n...g!!!!!!!!!

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Rhysenn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#582

Seriously, what does this Coco think of herself!? We need more Arnav and Khushi scenes please! Loved it!

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#583

another masterly rendition from the pen of Smita!

I could actually picture for myself mami and buaji doing the various latkhas and jhatkas to that highly irreverent but foot-tapping number... mamaji's comments and akash's replies were a bonus

coco really takes the cake... her futile attempts to catch arnav's eye are bound to be abysmal failures as he doesn't even know she exists... I could just picture his dreamy look juxtaposed to her fuming face! that image of arnav was damn appropriate: his softened expression and smile [while looking at khushi] and the light bouncing off his collar besides lighting up the background made me heave a sigh !

coco is such a spoilt brat! her temper tantrum and then having to limp off is such a come down for her from the heights of conceited self-absorption she seems to be suffering from! this description just floored me: Coco grabbed the back of a chair nearby to avoid measuring her length on the floor, and managed to save herself from paying for new teeth at the dentists by a hair's breadth. As she hung over the back of the chair like a limp rag... can't wait for more such updates as am eager to know what more surprises coco has in store for an unaware arnav... just hope she doesn't do anything to khushi!

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arshi21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#584

Good. THAT's EXACTLY what should happen to someone like Coco. Stupid woman.

But Smita, honestly..I am loving this track. And I am so thankful to you and so glad that you are so prompt with updates..or else I would have died only..out of impatience :P

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casker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#585

loved the update.

coco's scene was epic😆

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Sana Sultana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#586

read the last two updates i had missed ...it was fabulous👏...coco has lost her nut😆 she s forgetting she s dealing with Arnav Singh Raizada..😉😃update the next soon dear😃

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IPKlover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#587

Part 98?????????? 😳😳😳😳

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rini_kat

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#588

Lovely update.This Coco is really an item...perfect entertainer

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smitar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#589

Originally posted by: IPKlover
Part 98?????????? 😳

Updated in Blog.

Hope u ENJOY it!!!😆

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dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#590

what the 😭 i checked not updated in blog loved the update coco is such a brat her parent spoiled her she need got woop ass loved how asr have no time for any one but his khushi loved the update beautifully done

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago