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asrcraze thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Can we get an early update this week, please ??


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Posted: 12 years ago
Removed.

No. I do not have a blog.
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Awww !! Arya is possessive !
Of course she is...Aakhir beti kiski hai... Like father like daughter...

Love Arya...Arya's feelings are so justified But I really like Payal and want to see Arya bonding with her too...
Arya is used to sleeping with Khushi but how would Payal feel if she is left alone in a house full of strangers ..They had accepted Payal for Khushi...And Payal had accepted to live here for Khushi too... If I were Payal I would feel terribly bad :( Not about Arya's closeness to her but about not having my sister with me...!!
But I'm liking this Akash- Payal angle ! A flirty Akash and an annoyed Payal sounds good !!

And Khushi !! This girl from your story will never cease to surprise me I tell you ! So different from the one we've known... She actually asked him when they would be doing it ?? She wants to do it more than Arnav !

But Arnav ! Darling...!! You know what the way you introduced his character...The way he behaved in the beginning is so much different from what he's become now! He was all dark and twisted in the beginning... ! Now he's concerned more about her comfort than his!

I knew they didn't do it ! But cos she slept 😆
And he didn't have the heart to wake her up cos she looked tired ...Aww...And she can't stay angry with him when he looks all tired ... It was soo beautiful, the scene between them in his bedroom before he turned all naughty :D I loved that most !!

The way the story is progressing I love it... They live like a couple... She calls Raizada house her home...Their teasing each other...Their concern for each other...And their love for Arya...

"Payal gave Khushi an incredulous look that only two sisters who had lived all their lives together could read." - This reminded me of you two sisters :D

And the way she's postponing telling him about her meeting with Shyam? Is there going to be a MU ?


Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

I have told you repeatedly, this story belongs to Khushi and Khushi alone; now I would like to make a small change to that. This is Khushi's and Arnav's story, I really liked the way you showcased how they have become a couple through Akash's eyes (I like that guy in this story, damn witty and flirty). The subtle gestures go a long way to show how important a person is; Khushi and Arnav show that. Anyone else in Arnav's place would have woken Khushi up for the promised romp and not been sensitive to her condition. Anyone else in Khushi's place would have ignored the tiredness evident on the person's face and would have started off ranting, wanting to get their point across.

They are a unique couple and hence are together, they deserve to stay together. I am sure you have planned to surprise us further and I am so looking forward to it.

Arya is a child and is bound to feel threatened by someone else taking her Khushi Di's time and attention, hence the hostility towards Payal. That was a cute touch, my niece behaves in the same manner if I pay attention to anyone else when she is around. Akash is all sadak chap in front of Payal and that is so endearing, liked that bit of the update too. Now we have to see if he is going to woo her in total tapori style.

I know you were angry I posted a song as a comment last time, but I really found this song so in line with the update and I love it, I am going ahead and including it here.

Movie – Guide

Song –Tere mere sapne ab ek rang hai Link

tere mere sapane ab ek rang hain
ho jahan bhi le jaen rahen, hum sang hain

tere mere dil ka, tay tha ik din milana
jaise bahar aane par, tay hai phool kaa khilana
o mere jivan saathi

tere dukh ab mere, mere sukh ab tere
tere ye do naina, chand aur suraj mere
o mere jivan sathi

lakh mana le duniya, sath na ye chutega
aa ke mere hathon men, hath na ye chutega
o mere jivan sathi

Edited by Kalyaani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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~Edit~

I cannot decide whom I love most - Khushi or Arnav or Aakash or Arya.

God knows how much they want each other, but they still put the other one first. Arnav knew she had a rough day, he allowed her to rest rather than waking her up for the long awaited love making; Khushi's embarrassment and anger flew right out the window when she saw how tired he was. I always love scenes where one is sleeping and the other comes in, admires their peaceful face and gives it a light caress... these I find more lovely and intimate than the most graphic sex scenes, really. So it was an absolute delight! And what followed, of course, both sexy and heartwarming. Saccha pyaar hai yeh !

Arya apne papa ki beti hai - possessive, territorial and one who can kill with just one look. She has found a mother figure in her Khushi Di after being deprived of one for a long time, of course she will hold on to with all her might and refuse to share that. She feels threatened by Payal, lets see how her Khushi Di handles her. In the last update Khushi thought Arya changing sides, and now its the other way around. Oh, how they love each other! Their bond is special, I enjoy reading anything Arya!

Aakash is so adorable. Flirt away, darling!

Reading FS makes me happy. This is my happy place. Bas!

PS- The sisters like to cuddle and sleep? And the brothers take due note of that. Hmmm
Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay...that is what I'd thought too! Kuch nahi hua tha uss raat ko!😆
But...she slept off? LOL...now that explains all the sly looks Arnav kept giving her the whole day.

They have come such a long way! From all that hatred in the beginning...to the lust, to the care and concern surfacing...to openly talking about their desire for each other. And yet...wanting to take it slow at the same time.

I'm loving Payal here! She is a perfect match for Akash..I must say. She knows exactly how to respond to his flirting...leaving him stunned at times. You go girl! :D

As a sister...its perfectly understandable for Payal to be concerned about Arya and Khushi's closeness...also given the fact that everybody in the Raizada family is a stranger to her. But she just has to be given time to understand everything.

Awww...I loved the last part. In between all that desire...Arnav still remembered his daughter. He's a wonderful father..no doubt.
And I loved the way Khushi didn't hesitate to ask Arnav if he felt offended or not...and the way they cleared everything out was so...lovely.

Great Chapter Saiyu! :D


Edited by ..SankiMedhz.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edit:

Khushi!!!!!!!!!

Why oh why did you fall asleep!!
That opportunity has gone now!!
Well, great thing was that
arnav being a gentleman and letting you sleep and
NOT demanding sex.. Our man has grown up!! :) .. but I wonder how much..
LOL.. And our Khushi has become bolder, well trying to.. aha.. she has come a long way ..!!

LOL is our Akash the New Raj..from DDLJ 😆 love his so called flirting aha..
Adore how smitten he is of payal.. and she's not interested, well we think..;)
she's playing hardball.. he keeps chucking the ball and she keeps knocking it back!! Ahaha.

Uh oh, arya and the jealously bug!! Especially at that age, highly protective..aha..
I hope khushi explains with a lot of care and affection..
we don't want Daddy to get angry on making his baby cry."/..

:O she's going to.meet shyam..:O she better tell arnav..

Hurry up weekend!! I want to know now ...!!


Edited by .._sonii_.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really really sorry for editing this late. Im glad nothing as such happened between ArHi. Poor khushi is feeling so embarassed. I wasnt really fond of Arnav here but i THINk my opinion is changing gradually. May be its early, but im really looking forward to their confession about their feelings
Edited by arathyvr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I did it. I DID it. I unresd. 😛
coming to the update. You absolute cheater. You cheated us out of all the gooey sex and AWESOMENESS 😳 so I dont like you for that. Bubbly and Payal... wars? AHAHAAHA! I love Payal. I love this Akash! 😆
Okay this is all you get because I'm feeling sleepy.
bye!
🥱
Edited by V323 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the update!. Have a safe and happy journey :) I can't wait to read about when Payal will find out Khushi and Arnavs relation and looking forward of the nokjhok btween Payal and Akash :)
Edited by eroni - 12 years ago

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