So this concept was in my mind from god knows when...so thought to post it...it starts from the rey and taani rehersal hall scene...
~~Got My Life Back~~
Rey realised what he had just done right now...he looks at taani who was now looking at him...he moved back shocked at himself...he looks at taani he saw her smiling at him...he looks at the mirror and saw his reflection on the mirror...his eyes went wide as he saw her...standing their...tears rolling down her soft cheeks...he turns but she moved back and ran away from their...he saw a letter fallen down from her hand...taani who had closed her eyes opened them and saw rey going to the door...he picks it up and he opens it..
Aap kaise ho rey???...kaisa sawaal puch rahi hun mein aap theek hi hoge...aapko aapke friends ne udaas toh rehne hi nahi dia hoga na...6 mahine hogaye hain jabse meine aapko dekha nahi hain...mujhe abhi bhi yaad hain kaise aap aur mein jhagadte rehte the...kaise hum dono dost banne aur kaise meine aapko kaha ki aap mere acche dost se kuch zyaada ho...voh har pal jo maine aapke saath bitaye yaad hain mujhe...
Aaj mein aapse 6 mahine baad milne jaa rahi hun...pata nahi aapko dekh kar kuch bol bhi paaungi ki nahi..lekin aapko iss letter se ek sach bolna hain...uss raat jo kuch bhi maine bola voh sab jhut tha rey...meine aapko use nahi kia tha...sach toh yeh hain ki uss din rehersal hall mein maa ne hum dono ko ek saath dekh lia tha...unhe pata chal gaya ki mein footloose mein dance kar rahi hun aur aap ke aur mere beech mein kuch hain...unhone mujhe kamre mein band kar lia tha aur jab agle din neha vishakha aur amar aaye toh maa ne mujhe jaane dia lekin dp shart rakhi mere saamne...pehli thi ki mujhe humesha ke liye dance chodna hoga aur dusri ki mujhe aap se apne saare rishte todne padenge...meine apne doston ko chuna rey...mein apne selfish reasons ke liye unhe aise beech mein chodkar nahi jaa sakti thi...uss raar jab aap aaye mujhe aapka dil todna pada...mein chahti thi aap move on karo apni life mein...aur mein dehradun aagayi...
Pichle hafte maa ne achanak se voh dono sharte wapas le li...aur kaha ki mein mumbai wapas jaaun.baad mein pata chala unhe cancer hain aur unke paas do din se zyaada nahi hain...mein tut gayi yeh jaan kar...mom ne mujhe promise karwaya ki mein mumbai wapas jaun unhone mujhe meri life ke baare mein ek sach bataya jo mein shayad aapko iss letter mein bolne se darti hun aur shayad kabhi bolne ki himmat bhi nahi kar paaungi..maa ne jaate jaate mujhe mumbai ki tickets dedi waha rehne ke liye bhi unhone sab ko ready kar dia tha..mein dar gayi thi mujhe laga aap sab mujhse nafrat karte hoge...lekin phir socha ki aisa nahi hoga...mein jaanti hun aap sab mujhe bhule nahi hoge...aur aapne abhi tak toh move on nahi kia hoga apni life mein...rey dar lag raha hain mujhe agar aaj mein wapas aaun aur aapko kissi aur ke saath dekha toh mein mar jaaungi rey...
I LOVE YOU REY...ur baatcutter!!...
Rey fell on his knees...he broke down...taani went to him..
Taani-Rey??...
Rey dint look at her and again read the line.."mein mar jaaungi"...rey got up and ran out...he went to the fire escape hoping she would be their...and she was...he sighed seeing that she was sitting their he went to her but his world came crashing down as he saw blood oozing out from her hand...rey picked her up in his arms and takes her away...
He called swayam who was teaching the gang how to play basketball...he picks it up...
Swayam-Rey kya hua???...tu ro kyun raha hain...hospital!!!...tu hospital mein kyun ho rey kya hua sab theek hain na??...
Swayam's phone fell from his hand...his world came crashing down...he fell on his knees...all ran to him...
Neha-What happening swayam??...
Swayam-Usse kuch nahi ho sakta...kuch nahi hoga usse...
Vicky-Kisse??...
Swayam-KRIA!!...
All look at him...all went into flashback of their time spend with kria...they look at swayam...
Bharat-Voh mumbai mein hain??...kaha hain??..
Swayam-Ussne apna haath kaat lia hain!!...shez in the hospital...rey hain usske saath...
All ran out...they reached the hospital and saw rey sitting their...the doctor came out...
Doctor-She is out of danger...agar zara si bhi der ho jaati toh we would have lost her...
Rey-Can we meet her??..
Doctor-Pehle unhe private ward mein shift kia jaayega...
Kria was shifted...rey went to her...and caressed her cheeks...he broke down...all look at each other and decided to gave rey some time with kria...they went out...kria woke up after awhile and saw him..she turns away...rey turns her...
Rey-Itni naraz ho mujhse ki dekhogi tak nahi??...
Kria-Nahi hun naraz...mein hoti kaun hun aapse naraz hone waali...dukh ke bajaye dia kya hain meine aapko!!...
Rey-M sorry kria!!...
Kria-Aap sorry kyun bol rahe ho???...waise congratulations to you and your new girlfriend!!...
Rey-Kria taani meri girlfriend nahi hain voh sab jo bhi tumne dekha sab sirf ek attraction tha kria...sach mein..mere mann mein sirf aur sirf humesha se tum hi thi...
Kria-Mein thak gayi hun reyaansh...mujhe neend aarahi hain...
Rey looks down and nods...kria turns away closing her eyes as tears rolled down her cheek...she heard the door being opened and then shut...she turns and saw that he had gone away..she closed her eyes and broke down...thats when swayam came...he saw her crying and immediately ran to her...
Swayam-Kria??..
Kria hugs him and cried in her bestfriend's arms...
Kria-Voh mujhse pyaar nahi karta na??...he has moved on na!!...
Swayam-Kria...aisa nahi hain...tum toh rey ko jaanti ho na...usska ego jab hurt hota hain toh he dosent know what the hell he is doing...and taani ne rey ko bahot insult kia hain kria...i guess thats it...kria rey loves you alot...tere jaane ke baad voh badal chuka hain kria...he is not the same rey anymore...
Kria-Voh mujhse pyaar karte hain??..
Swayam-He loves you alot kria...give him a chance...
Kria-I dont know swayam...
Swayam-Kria...your more important to me then taani...hum sab apni life mein busy hogaye...mein bhi tere baare mein baat nahi karta tha...isska matlab yeh nahi tha ki i forgot you...you were and will always be my bestfriend...
Kria broke the hug...and looks down...swayam cups her face and wiped her tears..
Swayam-Kria your one decision..can change everyone's life...agar tune rey ko ek chance dia sab pehle jaisa ho sakta hain kria...lekin agar tune rey se saare rishte tod diye toh tum dono toh effect hoge lekin hum sab bhi...humare friends tujhe nahi lekin rey ko support karenge..weaklings karte tujhe support but ab baaki sab unke liye important hain..mein yeh nahi keh raha ki tu friends ke liye rey ko ek chance de..apne liye kria...kyunki koi hurt ho ya na ho...tu sabse zyaada hurt hogi...aur tu hurt hogi toh mein neha bharat amar aur rey hum sab hurt honge...
Kria-Pehle kehhte ho they would support rey and ab yeh ki voh hurt honge??...
Swayam-Haan they would kyunki tu humse help nahi legi na hi kuch bolegi...khudh hi saare pains mann mein rakhegi...i know you very well kria...
Kria-Swayam...mujhe thoda time chahiye...
Swayam-Take all your time kria...but now you better take rest...
Kria nods...swayam made her lie and soon she slept..he came out...
Swayam- I guess abhi usse baat na hi karo toh theek hain...
All nod they sat...swayam went to rey who was sitting and looking lost...he sat beside him...rey looks at him...
Swayam-She needs time rey...
Rey nods...
The next day...rey came to meet her...she was reading a book that swayam had given her yesterday...she saw him and kept it aside...
Rey-Umm kria...
Kria-Haan??...
Rey-Sorry...
Kria hugs him...rey shocked...
Kria-Aapne jo bhi kia sab gusse mein tha...aur haan rey...mein bhi huyi thi kissi se attract dehradun mein...
Rey went numb...
Rey-Kaun???..
Kria-Mere dehradun ke college ka tha...bilkul aapki tarha...dance karta tha aur egoistic tha aur ek cassinova waali image thi...do teen baar meri help bhi ki thi lekin meine misunderstand bhi kia tha usse...cute tha...
Rey-Accha??.
Kria-Haan...sorry...
Rey-Its okay kria...tum sirf attracted thi lekin tumne aisa kuch nahi kia jo mein kal taani ke saath...
Kria-Beeti baaton ko bhul jao rey...
Rey-Ek question puchun??..
Kria-Haan...
Rey-Tumne usske saath...
Kria hits him playfully...
Kria-Nahi pagal ho kya??...cute tha issliye cute bola!!...
Rey-Wait...i am confused...tum usse attracted thi right??..
Kria-Haan...lekin waisa wala attraction nahi just ek small sa crush jo mujhe uss par bachpan mein bhi tha...
Rey-What!!...tum usse bachpan se jaanti ho???...
Kria-Haan he was in my school as well...aur ussne mujhe udhar propose bhi kia tha when we were in 12th...
Rey-Usska naam kya hain kria???...*Gritting his teeth*...
Kria-Aap gussa kyun ho rahe ho rey??...aapne toh na jaane uss taani ke saath kya kia tha??...
Rey-It was a mistake m sorry!!...lekin uss ladke se dur raho...
Kria-Jab aisa koi ladka exist hi nahi karta toh mein usse dur kaise rahungi rey??...yeh joke tha just to show you how much it hurts when your love gets attracted to some one else...
Rey broke the hug...he wiped her tears away nd kissed both her eyes...kria who had closed them smiled...as he kissed her...she reasponded with the same love...through the kiss rey conveyed how much he loved her and that he would never ever betray her once again he conveyed that he would remove all those memories of their seperation from her life and will make it more beautiful then ever he promised to love her till the day he lived...they finally broke the kiss...and kria blushed to the core...
Rey-I love you baatcutter...i am really sorry for what i did...
Kria-I love you too rey!!...and lets just forget it once and for all...
Rey smiled...the louians entered kria's room and saw kriyaansh having an eye lock...they clear their throat...and kriyaansh move back...taani was very angry...all scold kria for what she did...even sharon did from delhi as they had called her to speak to kria...but all noticed that kria was looking here and their as sharon spoke...
Kria-Umm...sharon...mein aapse baad mein baat karun please??...
Sharon-Kria...dekho mein jaanti hun whats bugging you...
Kria-Aap kaise jaante hoge!!...
Sharon-Dad told me everything kria...when he got to know that mom had cancer he told me everything...kria i know its very shocking for you and even for me...but right now m very angry on you!!...
Kria-Sorry...*tears rolling down her cheeks which rey wiped*...
Sharon-Sorry??...for??...its not your mistake!!...listen sweety i need to rush now...you dont need say anything to anyone...mein bataungi sabko...tum abhi rest lo...and mr.reyaansh singhaania let her rest...tumse toh mein baad mein baat karungi...now you sleep kria...mein kal tak mumbai pahoch jaaungi...and ya dad is also coming back...
Kria-Lekin sharon...i cant face him...after what i did...
Sharon-Daat khaani padegi and chill mein bhi tumhe daatne ka mauka dungi so chill...ab so jao shaanti se...baad mein baat karenge!!...
Kria-Byeee...
Sharon-Byee!!...
She cuts the call...all look at kria with a weird expression but remembered what sharon said...so dint ask kria anything...and they left after awhile so that she can take rest...rey kissed her forehead...
Rey-Kuch bhi chahiye toh bol dena neha is outside...
Kria-Your going??..
Rey-Kal mein aaunga...abhi doc ne kaha hain koi ladki hi rahe toh better hain...kay??..
Kria nods...and rey went..neha came inside...the two girls talk for awhile and then kria fell asleep...so neha went away...the next day...she woke up just to see a bouquet of orchids beside her...she took it and saw a card..she opened it...
"TO MY PRETTIEST DAUGHTER SORRY COULD NOT COME TO SEE YOU BUT THIS DOES NOT MEAN YOUR NOT GONNA GET SCOLDED WELL TAKE CARE YOUR DUMB DAD!!..."
Kria smiled...she had met him as smriti's last wish was to meet him and she had to fulfill it...he had told her his side of story and she had forgiven him cause he was afterall her dad...and she had to forgive him...he even bought her a new home...and in just a short notice he had admitted her to st.louis again...her thoughts were broken as she heard some one clearing their throat...she looks up and saw sharon...
Sharon-Dad ne bheja??...
Kria nods...
Sharon-Toh mein isska kya karun??...
She bought the same bouquet...kria took it and it also had a card...she opens it...
"TO MY PRETTIEST SISTER EVER...AB DEKH GUSSA TOH MEIN TUJHSE BAHOT HUN PEHLE TOH TUNE AUR DAD NE MUJHSE CHUPAYA AND AB YEH SAB TU EK BAAR THEEK HOJAAYEGI NA TOH MEIN TUJHE BAHOT DAATNE WAALI HUN...YOUR ANGRY TWIN SISTER"
Kria smiled at sharon...who sat next ot her...they were talking and laughing alot...reyam came and saw their lady loves laughing and playing...krisha saw them and they stopped laughing...reyam came to them and sharon explained them everything...how smriti and gautam got married...and when gautam got to know that smriti was pregnant he left her becuase some rival was plotting to kill both krisha after they came on earth as he was attracted to smriti and wanted her and dint want that any sign of smriti and gautam's love stays alive...but after smriti gave birth to krisha...she gave sharon to gautam and took kria...as by now the man had been put inside jail...but smriti had never known the truth...
Krisha were in tears...and the four had group hug...the louians came and were talking and luaghing with each other...when taani came...kria looked here and their...
Taani-Kya mein aapse baat kar sakti hun??...
Kria nods...she looks at everyone who left...taani couldnt control and broke into tears...
Taani-Sab meri wajha se hua!!...i am the culprit...m so sorry...
Kria-Its okay taani...ssh...galti tumhaari nahi hain...but m sure jaise meri life mein rey hain waise kahi na kahi tumhaara real prince charming tumhaara wait kar raha hoga...so stop crying..,.
Taani smiled at her...
After awhile...kria was discharged and sharon took her home...she was sitting in her room...when suddenly she felt a stone fall on her hand...she picked it up and saw a paper attatched to it...she opens it...
"COME AT YOUR TERRACE AT 12"
Kria understood that it was rey...and she was becoming restless...at 10 sharon came to her room and starts talking to her...it ws 5 minutes to 12...
Kria-Sharon mujhe bahot neend aarahi hain...
Sharon-Arre kria...thodi der baat karte hain...chal 12*30 tak and usske baad tu so jaana na!!...
Kria-Sharon please...
Sharon pouts...
Sharon-12 baje terrace zarur jaayegi lekin apni behen se baat karne ka time nahi!!..
Kria-Tujhe pata hain??..
Sharon-Obviously...chal i'll take you...
She helps her...and they reached the terrace...sharon went away...and kria opens the door it was pitch black..kria was scared and got inside...suddenly lights were switched on and she saw the place decorated beautifully...and tujhko jo paaya playing...in the centre was a table for two...and a path was made till their with rose petals...kria smiled and walked on it...suddenly someone picks her up...kria looks and saw rey...who smiled at her and made her sit on a bench...rey points up as fire crackers bursted...and she saw that an I LOVE YOU BAATCUTTER was formed with them...kria smiled and hugs him...while he whispered in her ear...
Rey-I love you alot kria..m sorry...
Kria-Its okay rey...i love you too...
Rey smiled...he made her stand..and holding her hand took her to the table...she saw all her favourite dishes...she smiled and they were eating...but rey was lost in her...after they finished...the door was knocked...
Sharon-Rey..kria and tum please aajao...she needs to sleep na!!...
Rey *slowly*-Kabab mein haddi...
Kria giggels and they go...in kria's room...kriyaansh were talking to each other...sharon was sleeping in her room.kria was lying in rey's arms..and soon both love birds slept in each other arms...with a promise to never leave each other once again...with a promise to be together in each other's arms forever...with a promise to love each other till their last breath...
Rey *in his sleep*-You were and will always be mine baatcutter...thanks universji aapne meri baatcutter ko mujhe wapas de dia meri life mujhe wapas mil gayi..
Kria cuddels with a smile on her face...as if hearing him in her sleep...and in her mind she thanked her universji as she got her life back...
END...Hope u all lyked it...
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