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Well I have been thinking of writing a SS since a long time now on MY favourite Jodi ArHi

The PURPOSE of writing this is actually for a cause and I hope everyone will like and enjoy this SS

So HERE is my first SS

Addiction- stop it

Prologue

What happens when you want to live but death stares you in the eye. What happens when your world comes tumbling down and you realize it all of a sudden. How do you save yourself and your loved ones. Is there a way out or are you supposed to go away forever. To what extent can your Past actions affect Your present and your Future.

note: If anyone is interested in reading this ss PLZ comment

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'Arnavvv' a girl suddenly woke up startled from her sleep. She looked around the small room and thanked God that there was no one in the room to see her scream like this in her sleep.

She wondered why after so many years she suddenly saw him again and screamed out his name. Her intuitionn told her something bad is going to happen today. Why else would he appear in her dream all of a sudden?

Being a girl who holds a positive attitude always and being true to her name

Khushi: Khushi, koi gal nahi, ek sapna hi to tha, shayad is liye kyunki tu kaam karke itna thak gayi hai

(Khushi, don't worry it was just a dream, may be since you are tired because of working the whole day)

Well saying this and brushing her weird thoughts off she got off the bed from her short nap of about 2 hours that she got everyday because of her hectic working hours. Well to say she was lucky to have got that nap would be an understatement. She was way too lucky for that nap or else she would have to simply doze off for 5-10 minutes on a chair in the ward.

She got off the bed, entered the bathroom and got ready in 5 minutes. Well that was the amount of time she was given to get ready. She tied her hair up in a neat bun, wore her dress and took her coat and other belongings, locked her room and hurried towards the lift.

Khushi: I hope I don't get late today for my shift.

The lift opened and she got into the lift. She was in her thoughts as usual when she started feeling uncomfortable as though her heart skipped a beat and she was feeling breathless.

Was she suffering from arrhythmia (a disorder of the heart) Hell, no how could it be. She do been normal all these days. But the strange thing was she could feel his presence. To say she was surprised would be an understatement, she was shocked with the realization as to what possibly 'He' could be doing here.

Khushi: (to herself) Kaash woh theek ho. (May he be alright)

So HOW was it. Hope U liked it

Note: Below Pg1

Chapter 1, chapter 2, chapter 3: Below: pg 1

Chapter 4, 5 Pg 2

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note

since this is my first ss you are welcome to give suggestions on my style of writing

Also I had earlier decided to give a Character SKETCH of the characters

But now I have decided to introduce the different characters as the story moves on

So which of the 2 OPTIONS do you LIKE

Option 1 or Option 2

plz let me know through your replies

I will accordingly post the next part

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Chapter 1

As Khushi came down to the 1^st floor of that building a man was being taken to the 3^rdfloor of the same building.

She entered the ward and saw the attendant

"Good Morning Dr. Khushi Gupta''

''Good Morning Miss Simran. Could you please inform me about my shift for today.''

''Sure Maam, it is at 8.30 and you have to assist Dr.Shashank Sharma today.

''Thank you Simran.''

She saw the time. It was 8.25 and she quickly turned towards the exit.

Khushi: (to herself) Jaldi kar Khushi tujhe tere paas sirf 5 minutes hai. (Hurry up Khushi you have only 5 minutes with you)

With that she went or simply ran towards the elevator but realized it was on the 7^thfloor now. She gritted her teeth and clenched her hand to a fist and simply ignoring the elevator marched off towards the staircase. She hurriedly walked towards Dr. Shashank's cabin but as she was nearing it her heart went DHAK DHAK, a feeling she felt when he was around. Dismissing the thought she reasoned it out practically that it was probably due to palpitation because of all the running around and jumping she had done while climbing up the staircase. Nevertheless she felt weird today but brushed aside the thought and finally reached Dr. Shashank's cabin.

Here on the other side a man was being rolled into ward no. 305 of the hospital. A woman was bitterly crying her heart out.

'Chhote, Chhote aankhe kholiye kya ho gaya hai aapko?' (What has happened to you)

The wardboy called the doctor as the unconscious patient was rolled inside.

Doctor: Check his blood pressure, quick.

Intern: Sir its too low. He is showing signs of slow breathing.

There Khushi goes to Dr. Shashank's cabin and knocks the door.

''Sir may I come in.''

No REPLY. She pushes it slightly to see if Dr. Shashank is there. She finds no one inside and turns to find a ward boy moving along with some tools.

''Raju, have you seen Dr. Shashank?

Yes Ma'am, he is in ward no. 305 attending to a patient. He told me to inform you that he is attending to a patient and you are to assist him in this case.''

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OMG thts an awesome story...plz update soon...eagerly waiting to read more...and plz plz pm me 4 this...just loved the story :)

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Hello Friends

Its nice to KNOW that my SS has BEEN viewed by so many PEOPLE.

So HERE I go WITH my next UPDATE:

Readers PLZ try and COMMENT on the SS

Chapter 2

She walked towards the ward and with each step she took she could only think about him.

She hurried towards the ward as she decided to stop thinking about him.

As she entered the ward several people looked at her. She had worn a white coat over a pink salwar kameez and she had tied up her hair in a bun. The difference was she wore specks now and she looked a bit pale and tired.

'Good Morning Doctor' the patients greeted her. She gave them a warm smile and moved towards Dr. Shashank.

Dr.Shashank: He needs to be shifted to the ICU, quick everyone. Ask the family to fill up the forms and complete the formalities.

Intern: But the ICU is full.

Dr.Shashank: Hurry we don't have much time. Do as I say. I have allowed a patient to be shifted from the ICU.

The new patient was wheeled into the ICU.

Meanwhile someone stood still with her eyes popping out of their sockets and a mouth wide open looking at the site in front of her. He, her Arnav...How could it possibly be? There lay Arnav on the bed unconscious and still as a rock, no movement at all except some shallow breathing. She tried to go near him to see whether he was for real or was this all her illusion. And she moved forward to touch him and see him clearly when all of a sudden Dr.Shashank ordered him to be taken to the I.C.U

It could indeed not be made out whether Dr. Khushi stood still or time stood still for her. She cursed herself for thinking that something bad had happened to Arnav now that she knew it was true. But what she did not know was that their Hearts had been joined together by DESTINY. When something happened to either the other could feel it.

She was soon brought out of her thoughts by someone who called out her name. ''Be QUICK Dr. Khushi and follow me to the ICU'' said Dr.Shashank

(After entering the ICU)

Shashank: Quick, we need to stabilize his breath. Get the Oxygen cylinder fast. One of them is kept in that corner. The wardboy carried the oxygen cylinder near the bed while a nurse helped to put on the oxygen mask.

Meanwhile the doctor gave him PRELIMINARY treatment.

Dr Shashank: Dr. Khushi, take a blood sample of the patient and send it to the lab and tell them to be quick and everyone the patient needs to be monitored continuously for any improvement or deterioration in his condition.

Dr. Khushi: 'Yes sir' with that she moves towards Arnav, lifts up Arnav's arm and inserts the needle in his vein and collects the blood.

She delivers the sample to the lab and asks the lab staff to deliver the report immediately. After sometime the tests are performed and the report is generated.

A wardboy hands over the report to Khushi and she immediately looks at it. Her eyes open wide looking at the report as though ready to pop out.

Dr. Shashank orders her to read out the report but she is unable to. He snatches the report from her and reads it himself. He gets angry and walks out of the ICU.

Hello FRIENDS so hope you liked the update

Note: Henceforth this update will be updated in Addiction Stop it-TEASER updated and as individual CHAPTER in MY posts.

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amazing..poor Khushi she is so shocked bt wht is in his reports??

Plz plz update soon...really loved it :)

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Chapter 3

Her eyes open wide looking at the report as though ready to pop out. Dr. Shashank orders her to read out the report but she is unable to. He snatches the report from her and reads it himself. He gets angry and walks out of the ICU.

Khushi goes near Arnav and holds his hand and looks at him with a tear stained face.

Flashback

Khushi: Hey Arnav, how are you, are you OK

Arnav: Yes I am fine of course. Waise mujhe kya hoga. (What will happen to me)

Khushi: Well nothing, I just asked because you did not attend the biology class today

Arnav: Which class are you talking about? Bb

Payal: Well she is talking about health class

Arnav: Oh, health class, well whats the use of attending those boring lectures where its so difficult to understand what the teacher is speaking. And anyways I am going to do M.B.A so there's no need for me to attend those lectures.

Khushi: Well if that's so then why have you opted for biology as a subject, Mr. businessman and how do you think are you going to appear for your exams if you don't attend lectures

Arnav: Well MISS bio nerd, its not that I am interested in those biology lectures. Unlike you I have many other things to do like practice for our basketball match to be held next week. Besides I can very well read from the books and appear for the exams.

Khushi: Hey, Mr. Basketball player, if you think you can read from the books and appear for the exams then let me remind you that you are indeed missing a lot.

Arnav: Hey babes, cool down if you think arguing like that is gonna affect me then forget it. And by the way I know Miss Bio nerd that you are for sure going to become a doctor someday. So you could better keep your concern for your PATIENTS.

Khushi:(getting angry) Well who am I talking to, a person who wont realize the importance of attending health class. But don't worry Arnav, I promise you one day you will.

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Well I have decided to update the next chapter now.

But BEFORE that I wanna tell my readers that I want lots of comments for this chapter.

For those who felt that the previous chapter was too short I am here with a longer and more EXCITING one for YOU.

But a longer update also means more comments... So plz leave your comments at the end of the chapter

Chapter 4

Dr. Shashank gets angry and walks out of the ICU. He walks towards his cabin. In the meanwhile he walks past the family.

Anjali: Aakash what has happened to Chhote? Woh aise kaise…. You go and ask the doctor.

Aakash: Di don't worry he will be fine soon. The doctors are treating him. Anyway I will go and ask the doctor.

Dr. Shashank: (to the wardboy who is walking past him) Ask a member of the patient's family who was brought here sometime back to meet me in my cabin now. His name is Arnav Singh Raizada.

Wardboy: Yes sir I will inform them. (Well looking at his face today he could definitely make out he was angry)

After all he had observed Dr. Shashank for so many years. He had been the Head of the Department at Life Care Hospital. He did see him during the times he had a critical case and how he handled them with calmness. How he had successfully carried out the most difficult of operations. He truly admired this man. Normally he would not react much on a patient's condition. But today was a different case….

Wardboy: (To Akash) Are you from Arnav Singh Raizada's family, the patient who was brought here today.

Aakash: Yes, I am his brother

Wardboy: The doctor has called you in his cabin.

Aakash: Thanks, I was going to meet him only.

Wardboy: (Praying to God) May everything be fine. Sab kuch theek kar dena.

Aakash enters the cabin.

Aakash: Good Morning Doctor. I am Aakash. How is Bhai, I mean Arnav Singh Raizada

Dr.Shashank: Good Morning to you. Well regarding your brother he is under observation now. I have called you to discuss his health. Well I want to know how long has the patient been in this condition.

Aakash: Well doctor today morning Di found him unconscious in his room and then we hurried him to the hospital as the family doctor was unavailable.

Dr. Shashank: Well is that it. Do you want to say something else.

Aakash: Well doctor, that's it. Why did you ask?

Dr.Shashank: Well I want to meet the person who found him unconscious.

Aakash: You mean Di.

Dr.Shashank: Yes I want to talk to her.

Aakash goes out and tells Anjali to meet the doctor.

Anjali enters the cabin with Aakash beside her.

Anjali: Doctor how is Chhote, I mean Arnav. Is he fine. Unhone hame dara hi diya tha.( He scared me a lot this morning) Can we meet him.

Dr.Shashank: Relax for a while Miss…

Aakash: Mrs. Anjali Shyam Jha.

Dr. Shashank: So Mrs. Jha, I want to ask you when did you find him unconscious.

Anjali:(almost sobbing) I found him…unconscious in the morning. He was lying on the bed and did not respond when I called out to him.

Dr. Shashank: Is there anything else you want to say

Anjali: No.

Dr. Shashank (thought to himself) Was this family trying to hide something from him or was it that they themselves were unaware about the severity of the patient's condition….

In the ICU,

Khushi cursed herself for speaking those words. Although she wanted him to realize what he had lost by not attending lectures, she never wanted him to suffer the way he was currently.

She said a silent prayer: Arnav ko jaldi se theek kar do. May Arnav become fine soon.

Khushi's flashback continues:

While Khushi just turned around to leave, she heard a voice from behind calling out Arnav's name.

Well she was least bothered to know who it was. But then she had got really angry at the next words that were spoken by that person…

So how was it. Hope to receive lots of comments for this chapter

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Chapter 5

Khushi's flashback continues:

While Khushi just turned around to leave, she heard a voice from behind calling out Arnav's name. Well she was least bothered to know who it was. But then she had got really angry at the next words that were spoken by that person'

'Hey Arnav, here take this cigarette, how's basketball practice going on by the way

'Hey Rahul, the basketball practice is going on just fine. And thanks but I don't have cigarettes.'

'Come on don't be a bore, its just a cigarette after all.'

Khushi turned around and was about to say a few words to Rahul

Rahul: Whoa Khushi, you here, now I am sure you must have told Arnav something about not drinking cigarettes, Isn't it true miss BIO NERD (he said jokingly BUT in a playful way)

Khushi: Guys enough of all this and Arnav is not a child that I have to tell him whether or not to have cigarettes

Arnav(gets angry at this): Yeah, sure I am not a child anymore and with that he grabs the cigarette from Rahul. He looks at Khushi once and then starts smoking. Khushi just looks at him as if to tell him to stop all this. With the first puff he coughs and then starts enjoying it.

Khushi gets impatient and simply takes the cigarette from his mouth and throws it on the ground.

Khushi: Look Arnav, you don't need to start smoking just to prove a point.

ASR: (In his ASR avatar):Oh! Please Miss Khushi Kumari Gupta, I don't need to prove myself in front of anyone. And one more thing, don't give yourself so much importance.

Khushi: No Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada, its you who needs to learn that cigarette smoking is injurious to health. Oh but how would you know this. You would never have done such a thing if you attended the health class (she mocked him to make him realize his mistake)

ASR: Oh! Of course how can I forget, now Miss Bio nerd has decided to give health class lectures herself and that too on the college campus.

Both of them were going on like swords ready to rip each other off any moment. As the war of words continued it required the others surrounding them to intervene in the fight. Aakash came and took Arnav along with him to the basketball court while Payal took Khushi along with her to the library.

Looking at the scene in front of him Rahul who had offered Arnav a cigarette made a mental note of the fact that he would never offer anyone a cigarette in the future. Oh hell! he was so scared of the fight in front of him that he decided to quit smoking himself! lest he should get involved in a war of words and end up fighting like these Arnav and Khushi were fighting and before he could die due to smoking he would be dead due to a fight.

If Arnav and Khushi were together this was bound to happen. After all they somehow ended up having a fight every time they met.

End of Flashback

As Khushi remembered this incident from the past she had a small smile on her lips and a glint of tear in her beautiful hazel eyes.

She moved towards Arnav who was unconscious and took one of his hand in hers.

Khushi: Why Arnav, why ? was all she could manage to say as her emotions began to give way to the tears in her eyes and they began to flow down her cheeks.

Note: This SS has been written for a cause as the title of the SS suggests. The topic deals with a sensitive subject. I would like to have the readers views on the topic. You are welcome to say something regarding your personal experiences or anything related to family in this matter.

I am going to portray Arnav and Khushi as two headstrong personalities. If there are any QUESTIONS or Doubts regarding the characters introduced so far I will be glad to answer them

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Hello IF friends

I am really happy today because my previous chapter has got a lot of viewers and much more happy because I may soon start working on a project against nicotine addiction..😃

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