#5 Guzarish [D3 Revisited] Parts 23-26 - Page 47

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

WTH jus hpnd.. Fr d vry first time,m startin from very last !
Is Reyaansh mad o wht??? I mean.. Whts wrong wid him??? Heightsh yar.. Jus coz he heard hr mum sayin,finally tmne naya dost bna e liya doesnt means Boyfrn fr lord's sake.. I mean Dost.. Reyaansh ka hindi is poor nah.. Plz someone tl him,dat dost means friend nt boyfrn.. N n how he exclaimed it to b a guy,from wea it did come frm????? He heard kriya's laughter frm d othr side so he thot she's happy n moved on.. Dude,get a life.. U bloody hav ur frns thr fr u.. They all support u,understnds u.. Buh Kriya.. She's all alone thr.. Agree,she hs vishakha buh still na.. Dis is Sick !
Right now,m fln lik goin n kill him.. Agghhh.. Damn 😡 So,dis is how t____ wud enter his life.. Greaaattt !! 🤬<font color="#9900ff">Sorry for this anger 🤗 ut you're damn right. Rey shouldn't misunderstand and he did. I promise.. I didn't do it without a purpose in the future 😳</font>

I guess.. Now I must review abt thngs too..
Naina.. She has grown closer to kriya in so less time.. N Its a true frnshp fr sure :D <font color="#9900ff">Yes.. true friends can be made in split of seconds even before you realize it.</font>
Kriya's anger towards hr dad is totally justified !
Dat guy lft hr n hr mom to liv by demselves buh m evn happy dat she has no grudge against Sharon.. <font color="#9900ff">right.. none of it was Sharon's fault after all.. all this while, kriya longed for fatherly love while Sharon longed for motherly. Only, fate had something else planned :/</font>
One Req.. Sharon too shud come to know abt d fact kriya bein hr sis,from her dad only !
I wud lik to c her reaction.. Dun want,kriya to tell hr but her own dad.. <font color="#9900ff">I was thinking about that as well...let's see.</font>

Ohki.. Now,d probability is.. Sharon is gonna b d sixth dancer but as far as I remembe,in dat OS.. Kriya was d 6th dancer.. Mtlb,Sharon wudnt b d sixth dancer.. Buh ye hoga kaise.. Does dis indicates towards tonn of misunderstndngs..???? No no no..<font color="#9900ff">Oh no. Of course not. I don't want to create a pile of MU's to leave it to be solved myself 😆 But yes... Kriya is the 6th Dancer in the OS. That only means something happens along the way ;)</font>

N wht dis tani is upto??? Is she lik is gonna search fr kriya??????
Wud she play a role in unitin kriyaansh o wht???
She seems to b quiet impressed frm kriya n kriyaansh.. Reyaansh se toh alrdy h e ! <font color="#9900ff">That, time will tell 😳</font>

Omg.. Whts goin on?????
Plz yr.. Yeh reyaansh ki misunderstndn clr kro yr.. I jud cnt tk it..
Glti se d3 dkh liya tha.. Thursday ko.. N tbse band bji pdi h.. Upr se Ye Reyaansh.. Ufff..
Whts wrong wid him yr??? Satak gyi h uski sch !
Idiot.. Huh <font color="#9900ff">D3 is highly hazardous to watch nowadays.. Yes though.. it will be fixed here soon..</font>

Evn aftr dat letter,Reyaansh doubt kriya's love.. Holy Shit !
Update soon :)
Waitin !

Tnx fr dis lOng reply :)
Lets c wht hpns nxt !

Originally posted by: Nirju99

awesm

Originally posted by: shaani2209

M sorry for being late but was caught up with Indiafest, College fest and all... It's kay. Hope you had fun 🤗

coming to the update..

nice one...

Liked how u put thing up..the mood that you created was nicely done...thanks!

kria-smriti convo at dinning table was well put to reveal the things later..Glad it worked out :D

vishaka-kria chat was lovely, it got a smile on my face :) the kria's unknowingly concerned for sharon part was nicely down too... Thank you!

and finally smriti understood that keeping rey away is not the way to protect kria...looking forward how things will turn up :) Yes! hope you'll like what I have planned =)

do update soon..

thanks for the pm...

PS: whats the prob with Word doc??? pm me if u want, i'll try to help :) The problem goes above my head! =( I'll pm once I'm done with updating. Thanks!

Originally posted by: alisstar

wow... kria back to mumbai...

eager to know what's coming up nxt...

plz update asap...

Originally posted by: kriyansh_Alisha

awesome update...

kria-vish email convo was superb...

kria gonna b back in mumbai...

loved it...

thnx for pm...

Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha

lol.. 😆 ... Honestly Khushi i love the name [My Version D3] only... But... [D3 Revised] is also not a bad option... 😉 ... Anyways... Tkcre of yourself re... Be back soon... Lotssof Love... 😊

Originally posted by: deetha

awesome awesome :P

laalbatti i think this suits us...

dekhle asma

khullam khulla pyaar karenge hum donon!!!!!!

🤣

Originally posted by: aishu3003

awesomeee update👏

shorry for d late comment😳

waiting for d nxt part😳

Originally posted by: Tanya_Swaronluv

Khushi, I read this whole FF in one go, not like i have never came across to it. I did, but i always run away from the write consist of Kriyaansh and i know this is very bad on my part too, but i can't help it even if i try. Thus, i only read on Swaron in whole India-Forums. Haha! I completely understand. it's okay. I've tried to put all of them in here but I know it hasn't been proper just yet. Still in process of fixing that :)

You are doing an absolute spectacular work in this FF, please update soon and give us some more good SwaRon scenes! Will be waiting for it and one more thing which is that i have sent you buddy request to Guzarish. do accept that to! 😃 I'm glad you love it so far!! I'm gonna try to. Hopefully they go along their track I'm keeping in here 😃 Will accept it too 🤗

I am crazy about Swaron! 🤗 ID says so ;) i love em too! Thanks for reading and commenting!

--Tanya --