#5 Guzarish [D3 Revisited] Parts 23-26

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

awesome update...smrti ne kriya ko permission diya...mumbai mem zaroor kuch hoga...thanks 4the pm...waiting 4 next part...

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

Pehle toh sory for the late comment 😳...

This part was Superb 😃...

Pehle mai Kria ki Mom ke bare mein pata nai kya kya sochti thi But now i just want to give a Huge Hug to 'This Smriti'...

She actually allowed her to go N made all the arrangements as well 👍🏼...

Woh scne parh kar even i wanted to Scream with Joy 😳..

Seriously loved this part ❤️...

But the thing is what will Kria see when she is there...

Cause Rey has misunderstood her , Only U N God knows what are u planning to do next 😳...

See now i can't trust u after what have u done in the previous part 😛...

Will be waiting for the next part...

N thanks for the pm 😊.

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

Ummm.. M sowie fr d late comment... 😳 Hufff... D3 is makn me go insane these days 😕 😕
Cumin to d update.. I shud b vry happy seeing dat kriya is gonna return bk to her world buh m nt...
N u kno y.. Coz I kno,something is surely cookin in ur mind.. N trust me.. M freakin Afraid rite now
Reyaansh hs alrdy misunderstood kriya thr.. He thnks tht kriya hs moved on n thus decided tht he wud too move on in hs life n here kriya is goin bk n she's vry vry happy as she thinks tht Reyaansh knows d truth thus no problems buh less she knows wht he hs assumped ! Hufff.. I sense trouble.. A major one
Also,thrs no mention of Reyaansh's behaviour aftr dat marriage whch means vishakha too isnt aware of Reyaansh's mind state.. *Sigh*
Kya hoga ab?????

Cumin to d gud notes...
I loved kriya-vish convo.. Its really gud to c vishakha's true self..
We all know wht dil dosti n dance means to kriya buh now it feels gud to c tht these thngs matters d most to vish too.. Vish concern fr hr frns.. Fr Reyam.. She knows wht kriya means to dem n wht Reyam means to kriya.. I jus lovd it !

Cumin to Smriti-Kriya dining convo.. I lovd dat d most..
C dis is d beauty of a mum n daughter relationshp.. :)
Kriya jus fr her mom's sake trying to cope up wid d situation.. She completely understnds wht her mom hs gone thru.. Thus wants to support hr,stand fr hr.. :)
Kriya knows tht hr mom did wrong buh stl she wud confide her trust in hr mom !

N thr Smriti realise tht wht blunder she has done.. Thus to rectify,she's sendin kriya bk to hr Dil Dosti n Dance n also understnds kriya's dreams... Wow !
I lovd dat line.. I kno how it feels bein away from d one u love.. ! It showed smriti's immense pain :(

Wht an update.. Last two updates wer a roller coaster ride.. Pura plot e chng ho gya...

Excited to c whts gonna hpn nxt buh also scared !
*Fingers Crossed*

update soon.. Waitin :)

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

omg!!!!! omg!!!!! omg!!!!! khushi
love you yaar
da end was awsome
aisa lg ra tha jaise abhi dialouge ayega "ja kria beta ja ji le apni zindagi" lol 🤣 🤣

sachi awsome update
loved it lyk hell seriously