The Proposal (A Maaneet FF) Part 2 Teaser 11.01

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello everyone. This is my very first FF so please be forgiving. I have been a silent FFs reader for a while now. I love writing and have been thinking of writing a FF so here goes...This FF is called the proposal. Why is it called so; you'll find out soon. Meanwhile, any guesses? 😛
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Part Two (teaser): Page 1
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Character Sketch-
Geet Handa: Geet is one of the two kids of Mohinder Handa's clan, who live in Delhi. Geet is a passionate but slightly crazy girl and there is nothing she won't do for love.
Dev: A suave and charming London-return gent. He went to London to do his masters. Geet and Dev were best friends at their college. Everyone told Geet Dev was in love with her but she never believed them. On the contrary, she told Dev about her boyfriend troubles.

Naini: Geet's friend from college. Naini is very modest by nature and also bubbly. Geet and Naini were quite close in college but lost touch when Naini moved back home after completing her degree.

Maan Singh: Geet's co-worker. These two say hi to each other now and then and sometimes get coffee together in their break as they have their break at the same time. Geet shares her family stories with him sometimes although we don't know if he actually listens to them 😛

That's it for now. Stay tuned for part one.
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Part One

Our story begins at a big and lavishly decorated farmhouse just outside Delhi. This wasn't just any ordinary house; it was a shaadi ka ghar. The flowers, mandap and many, many guests gave this away and if turned your eyes to the first floor, you could just about notice a girl (the bride-to-be) surrounded by her friends, who were teasing her as she laughed with them. You would think no one would notice an (expensive) car stop by, admist the hustle and bustle but people noticed this and many stopped what they were doing to get a good glimpse of our newest guest, who by now was taking the atmosphere in and her glasses out.

To the untrained eye, Geet may have looked confident and cool but inside she was feeling anything but those two things. She was wearing a pin-striped halter neck dress that framed her petite upper body well and flared at the hips. Her hair was up in a messy 'do. She wore big sunglasses; this was to hide the signs of her many sleepless nights in recent days. ''You can do this; you've practiced what to say. Just stay calm and remember why you're here,'' she told herself. She then proceeded towards the farmhouse putting one foot in front of the other.

Geet said hello to all the Uncles and Aunties in the house, and after enquiring about their health etc. Made her way to the upstairs bedroom where the bride-to-be was. She took a deep breath and said, ''knock knock'' even though the door was open. Everyone looked in her direction, and one particular person, Naini, was ecstatic to see her. She quickly got up from where she was sitting. They both hugged each other; the joy of seeing each other after ages, evident to everyone around. Once they broke their hug, Naini was the first to speak, ''Maine to socha that tu nahi aane wali Geet. Kitna busy rehti ho apne kaam mein? Tu nahi aati to main tujhse zindagi bhar baat nahi karti.'' 'Typical hindi dialogues bolne wali Naini' Geet thought in her mind but did not dare to say this out loud. ''Teri shaadi ho aur main nahi aau? Aisa kabhi ho sakta hai, jhalli!'' Geet finally said. Geet was shown to her room and once inside she thought 'aati kaise nahi.. Geet kya ho gaya tha tujhe? 5 minutes iske saath rahi nahi, kit tu bhi hindi dialogues bakne lagi,' and flopped on the bed.

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Part Two (teaser)

After the Mehendi, Geet was sprawled across the bed, thinking about what her next move was going to be when she heard a knock. ''Come in,'' said Geet. She looked up from where she was to see Naini who clearly had the bride-to-be glow. Geet sat up straight while Naini too joined her on the side of the bed. ''You must be tired, and rather than rest you've come to see me?'' said Geet with a welcoming expression. ''Yeah there is something I wanted to speak to you about,'' Naini said hestitantly. Geet remained silent because she knew what it was.
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