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rehnu

@rehsanzsobti

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#831

update soon.plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz

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dimpidave

@dimpidave

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Posted: 12 years ago

#832

updateee nexxxttt parttt sooonnn eagerly waitinggg... 😭

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Dazz

@Dazz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#833

Awsm update kushi will miss him a lot n realise his love :-D

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Chaiya_Chaiya

@Chaiya_Chaiya

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#834

Aww. This is such a cute part! I love how Arnav is slowly making her realize her feelings for him. It's really cute to see Arnav convincing Khushi about his feelings for her with his sweet gestures! I also love how nicely he explains to her the danger of sharing everything with an anonymous person online. Oh, how I wish that he had made a suggestion to share everything with him instead of her mysterious friend! But Alas. Maybe in near future??

I'm also glad that Mohan is officially out of the picture! He's gone for good! Oh and thinking of Mohan, it reminds me that whenever you write "portray," I think you mean "betray." Portray is like representation of something. For example, "She's portraying the character of Ophelia in Hamlet." Betray means "Dhoka." You mention it twice in the email part and once when she thinks that her mysterious friend betrayed her:

"It was a tears because of unknowingly harming Anav ji, it was because of her mysterious friend's portray,"

And in this context, "betray" is used as a noun, so it should be betrayal.

p.s I hope you don't mind me writing this in the reply. If you want me to edit this, I will.

Edited by nine2 - 12 years ago

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#835

hiya - waiting for your update. thanks

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#836

hey wen r u updating! plz plz plz make it soon

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nida

@fattou

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#837

eagerly waiting 4 ur update😭plz make it fast

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jeshsaiiii

@jeshsaiiii

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#838

I read all the parts in one go!! I am so mesmerised by Arnav in this FF!! Please update soon, dying to know how the story will progress!! You are an amazing writer!!