virman NEW ff LINMFA * teaser pg 142 * 15 jan 2014

Kidrauhl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Okay firstly thank you soo much for the pm shukriya 😃. Secondly kya update tha yaar mind blowing 😳. Only joking amazing ly wrtten hunni 😳. And ofttt kabir ishhh yeh kya yaar two nahi ab three hotties in one ff isnt it againt the law 😳.
Update soon and pm me please
Inayah 😉

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sreshta90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Another ff frm u woww.. Good one naina first part itself is amazing.. The way u describd swamini's feeling wile virman sharing apple is hilarious.. Nd jeevka nd manvi convo is also superb.. Kabir loves manvi a lot nd manvi too loves him.. Intrstng

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sreshta90

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Another ff frm u woww.. Good one naina first part itself is amazing.. The way u describd swamini's feeling wile virman sharing apple is hilarious.. Nd jeevka nd manvi convo is also superb.. Kabir loves manvi a lot nd manvi too loves him.. Intrstng.. Do pm me.. Nd thank u fr anothr ff..

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.Yamin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Great update naina...hate tat swamini bua... 😡 ...and abt virman separation ...we have totally faith on u tat u would never do tat ... 😊 ...it interesting...do continue soon...n will be waiting for next update...thank u so much for the pm.. 😊

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Shivani Rajput

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Kabir my hottie Wahii... ❤️
Nice start cant wait for next update...!!

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-Sweety-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

wowww kushal and karan superb update 😃
nice dear

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uroosha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Thanks for writing another wonderful FF
I really love ur work

Love this one a lottt.
Plz continuance soon

Thanks for the PM.
Plz PM me when u update.

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cukky

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

nice starting

and nice concept

loved it

pls cont soon

pls pm me when u cont😊

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bluebolt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Hey Naina, its really good update. I like how you spend the time to find appropriate pictures. Really looking forward to next updates..keep updating :))))

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Jannat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

I trust u Naina... U never ever separate virman
Chapter 1 is awesome, swamini is never be change, ummm what we expect from her
Virat didn't like, the way jeevika took manvi from him... That means he loves her or likes her
But i have a question if manvi loves karan and he loves him than what the reason, they are far away from each other
Thanx 4 d pm
Update Soon

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