Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

I absolutely loved this one!😆

This is such a good story...and its really commendable that all you wonderful writers out there are managing to continue this while keeping the original story intact, and also...the flawless way the story is being narrated by each writer. 👏

Wah! Kya progression hui Payal aur Akash ke lives mein! So much drama in a first meeting! Wow.

And Manorama...she's my darling. Such a bootiphool darling she is. :)

Nk...Awww...i love him. Bas. he's so cute with his Bhangra talk here :P❤️

Leave Arnav and Khushi alone with both of them in a fuming mood, things are bound to get volatile and out of hand! Zor ka jhatka...! What a slap Khushi gave him.😆

I was surprised Arnav was so into seeing Khushi angry he actually let her push him that far.😆

Though in the end...he did react as is normal for him, I adore Khushi for replying back that way to him. You go girl!😆

And what an ending!!! Can't wait to see the next twist and turns that come up in this story. Great job you guys!! :D

Edited by raomedhz - 12 years ago

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Yayy! Congo I didnt know you guys opened a new thread!

where is the chapter? :D

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jisa

@jisa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

love this one...
when r u updating this next??

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

New thread? And res for update?

Sunday evening never looked better!

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

I see a res for update...can't wait...kerchief

Unes..

So the star stuck Payal has a voice in tis story..I am so glad...I could not have handled another crying blubbering Payal..that character has so much potential...but Akash is unaware of her existence..interesting

khushi slapped Arnav and he let her rave and rant and push him around😲..you go girl..physical violence is not cool in any form and I am glad you put the point across...

NK 's mystery is still open to speculation...

Nice progression of the story...well done😊

Edited by Polkadots78 - 12 years ago

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Anon

@infiresmayn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Chapter updated Page 12! :D

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Res yayyy will comment kal!!

Unres: 🥳*OSSSUMM* that just sums up the update!!! Lets start with Arshi's Bhangra!!! 😆

Arnav was his usual jealous hand-grabbing self what i loved was the THAPPAD *claps*👏😛...Super!!! Loved the way Khushi showed him what his hand-grabbing deserves...n i am a fan of her awesome shoves from the show...glad she showed him who's the boss...and the way she told him this was over..n walked off🥳!! 😆 BTW Akash doesnt know Payal?? 😛 I thot Akashji n she were on the verge of getting married by the way she was talking!!😆 N she faints when she meets him!! Her dream crush i guess😛!! Manorama mami n NK were too good!! ❤️

Edited by swat.g - 12 years ago

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

loved the update!! payal finally met her aakashji😉 mami s funny... nk bhangra and dishum😆 huh oh!! khushi is no less than asr!!! two cud defo play the game😉

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Res

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Like OMG! Never though I'd get see a slap so soon. Not that I mind, I mean he totally deserved it. 😃

And OMG Part 2 - So Payalia had a little crush on Aakash, and now Aakash is in already love with her? I'm so glad that Aakash got his dream-girl.

And oooh Manorama Mami. Man, she's the best! Bass, we can play around with characters, but Manorama mami deserves never to be changed. She's just that awesome. Beside's she was so bollywood in this update, totally fell in love.

and then we see NandKishor, always the same. Bhangra 😆

Okay, the story did flip, but only for the better I hope 😃 Can't wait to read the next part.

Btw, you did an excellent job!

Edited by blahblah16 - 12 years ago