Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#621

Verrry nice and funny ...I like this Khushi ,who jumps to conclusions and makes confident assumptions of the likes of ASr secretly wanting to marry her...and I like this Anjali who seems to be loveably eccentric and moody and quite capable of throwing tantrums ...

Thnx for the pm in advance ...I always find you guys before you find me ..

Quote

inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#622

Hell funny...awesome...it will be fun to read how Anjali misunderstands the whole situation.

Great going!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#623

she so didnt say that did she to the autorishewala
dont even think of raping me who says such things
gosh are they all crazy here or something
but must say i like it like that only
and arnie did you just say she is dying to marry you
werent we the one who said yes to marrying her when she was talking about the job as the designer
hain na yeh ajeeb
and gosh what with him kissing her every few mins
hope he hasnt become addicted to her lips man
could be deadly for him
as overdose of sweet aint good for his health for sure
does he keep forgetting he is diabetic so no overdosing on the sugar
really cant belive i actually read whhat i read
wow wouldnt it be so cool if this had been in the show
but never mind much fun this way
and why pray is anji thinking that shyam is having an affair
could this MU be due to khushi perhaps
man thinga are getting too hilarious to be true
wonder what the next writer shall do with this
well what ever it may be am looking forward to it for sure

Quote

segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#624

Another awesome update. i thought the last one was hilarious but this one was the perfect topping for it. like hot fudge on icecream

nice save by arnav

Quote

zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#625

Superb update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I Loved it.

Arnav is so surrounded by drama queens.

First his sister Anjali and now His woman KHushi.

I can't believe she thought she was going to die of a stomach ache.😆😆😆

She scared the poor auto guy to death almost.😆😆😆

Update soon. Can't wait to read more.

Thanks.😃

Quote

riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#626

He is ok with marriage and not marriage situation if he get what he wants...
He know how to cover himself he said we are ready to marry how he
changed it.
One sayng I should eat Jelebi while other saying no... that was🤣
Khushi is always Khushi.Her doubts and conversation between her and auto driver😆
Anjali with same expression and a juice that was another superb.
Nice update.
MU from Anjali??? new twist..

Quote

@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#627

awe...totally awesome, loved it...kushis too funy ...continue soon...

Quote

Mahrin17478

@Mahrin17478

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#628

wow...dhamaka update...Arshi scenes are too good and Khsuhi's thoughts are way too funny...enjoyed it thoroughly.👍🏼

Quote

Dalmuthuya

@Dalmuthuya

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#629

Some say eat a lot of jalebis, some say don't. What to do, Devi Maiyya, what to do?)'

LOL I AM JUST DYING AT THAT LINE. Omg. Khushi, khushi.. gosh this woman! LOVED THIS CHAPTER. Brilliant! Seriously all of you guys are perfectly flowing with this story! Wonderful, hilarious, and romantic.