~*~Road Trip A-K~*~LAST PART p66 on 11/19 - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG that was an awesome part!!!! I fell in your love with your fan fic already!!! Cont. soon!
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dude sounds amazzzzzzzzzzzzzing! totally cant wait to read more!!!
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Originally posted by: nabz8888

wow!! that was really good! n i rly like the format u r using!! this kind of format makes it interesting to read for me!! keep up the good work n cont. soon dear!! n btw, beware the local astrologer is back!!!!!!!! 😃 😆

im glad..i missed her😉

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just looove your story so far 😆 😛
continue soon 😉
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hey prakriti
wow another fan-fic!i loved the first part!!!!!!
cant wait to see wht happens to kripa on a whole road trip to ny 😆 😆 cont sooonnn..i missed your fan-fics alot!!glad ur backk 😃 oo and plzzz cont high school 😉 thxx
himani 😛
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wow this sounds interesting look forward to it but i was wonderin wen u r continuing 7 guys n 1 girl...coz reali wat that to continue as well if not too much trouble!....but well dun it sounds fab!
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Starting hte new part rite now!
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sounds awsome man. love it. so cant wait too read more
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sry for the dealy but its gonna b up soon! i promis!
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Road Trip

Chapter 2

"What will be interesting?" Angad asked, smirking. Kripa blushed and shook her head. She reached into her backpack and took out a bunch of papers staples together and her treo, which was one thing she had never gone anywhere without." What are those?" Angad asked with his nose up in the air.

"Well, I made reservations at these hotels, that we will pass along the way, and these are all the maps, and these are all the major landmarks and" Kripa started. But before she could continue, Angad laughed. "What?" she snapped. He stepped towards her and grabbed all the papers.

"This crap is useless. We are going to do what we feel like when we feel like it." He said. Kripa stared at him like he was crazy. He sighed and said "Kripa, I know this is totally not in your biological make-up, but learn to live! Be spontaneous!"

"I am spontaneous!" she snapped and crossed her arms over her chest.

"Right and I'm a fan of Backstreet Boys." He scoffed.

" For your info, I LOVE Backstreet Guys!" Kripa replied.

"What else did I expect from a girl like you?" Angad laughed and sat in the car. "Get in". Kripa reluctantly got in. Angad put the key in the ignition and turned. Nothing. He turned the key again. Nothing. He yanked the key really hard and finally the ignition started with a loud roar, causing Kripa to jump in her seat. Angad started laughing loudly. "are you ok? Or should I put a bandage over the boo-boo?" he teased with a straight face. She got pissed and lunged at him.

"YOU!!!!" she shrieked. He laughed and kissed her on the cheek. She blushed and sat back down. "what was that?"

"You know, just for old times sake" Angad said and winked. Kripa didn't want to but she smiled.

After driving for what seemed like forever, Kripa and Angad finally stopped at Seven Eleven.

"You want something?" Angad asked her.

She really wanted a huge slurpie and Doritos but Prithvi made her stick to an all natural diet, and she hadn't eaten but that since she started going out with Prithvi.

"Just a salad." She said reluctantly. Angad gave her a weird look. As much as he remembered, she was always a junk food junkie. With a shrug he was off.

40 minutes passed with Kripa wondering what's going on. Just then he came out carrying a bag.

"What the **** took you so long?" she snapped, irritated.

"I was getting the stuff, but then this hot girl started talking to me and soon we were making out and then…" his voice was cut off by Kripa.

"Ick! That's soo disgusting!" she murmured, "even more disgusting then when you and Mishti used to make out".

Angad grinned. He knew she never liked seeing him with Mishti. He turned to her, took her hand and said "its over. Chill."

Kripa pulled her hand back, although she wished he put it their always. " I don't care" she said brattily. Angad laughed and started the car one more time.

That's all for now. Sorry its not all that good[[its boring]] but I promise it will get better. I have a very limited amount of time, so that's why I haven't proofread, and thus, there will be lots of mistakes. Sorry about that. Im leaving for vacation on Friday so I think I can only do one more part. Ill be back on the 25th of August. I just have one request- please nobody else continue! Please. Thank You and please leave comments.


Prakriti

Edited by prakriti - 19 years ago

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