Mohini SS:I Met A Beautiful but Mysterious Lady in

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Hey Guys I am back with my brand new SS to pakayofy your bhejas😈. I hope that you all will read it, like it(If you like) and leave your valuable comments on it(Please guys this is very much needed by me😭).
This one is also on my fav couple Mohit+Mouni=Mohini❤️
😳.

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INTRODUCTION, CHARACTER SKETCH AND
VOLUME ONE: PART ONE: 1
PART TWO AND PART THREE:3
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I Met A Beautiful but Mysterious Lady in Train


Introduction:

This is a short story actually an experience of our Hero Dev Roy who travelled in the train from Paris to Venice and met a mysterious but beautiful Lady during his journey and eventually involved in some unpleasant and unexpected activities thanks to his simple but dare devil and compassionate nature.


Character Sketch



Dev Roy, an entrepreneur and software genius. He invents a microchip that may help to track out a certain person from the crowd. The microchip must be transplanted in that very person's body .If this gadget will come to the market it may help to reduce the crime rates i.e. Murder, Kidnapping etc. But it attracts and invites so many perils for him. 10 big fat mafia and terrorist group want this gadget to fulfill their desire to destroy this world and Intelligence dept. of 7different countries including Raw,ISI and Inter-pole want to grab this gadget as well as the inventor of that gadget ,Dev Roy.


Elena, a mysterious Lady with whom Dev will face some unpleasant and unexpected activities.



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Volume One: Meeting with a Beautiful but Mysterious Lady

Part One:

"This Train Journey is very boring for me. I can't understand why people enjoy this kind of idiotic journey. Plane journey is far better from the train journey. And I have to spend next 8-10 hours in this train. Horrible!!! Thanks to Sreejita and Nikhil, that two morons has sent me the ticket of this super boring journey. But yes!! They care for me very much and as they shifted from London to Italy last year they want me to be there with them. But I was too busy in so many things''"

"Excuse me Monseigneur , can you clear your stuffs from my seat Please???" A beautiful voice rang near Dev's ear. Dev was writing his diary but hearing this sweet voice he unwillingly lifted his head from it. He became dumbstruck. Because he never saw such a beautiful and gorgeous Lady till then his life. He could not control himself to stare at this beautiful Lady for a long time and his mouth became wide open in front of her. Seeing his behavior the Lady disgusted very much and again asked him this time little angrily "Excuse me Monseigneur you will have another 9 hrs to stare me and my face. But this time please clear your stuff from my seat because I need to sit and turn on my Laptop to check my mails. But without siting anywhere I could not do this." Dev ashamed so much for her dumb behavior and apologize to her and remove his backpack from her seat. The Lady sat next to his seat and brought out her Laptop from her gorgeous leather Laptop bag and turned it on and made herself busy in her works. Dev sighed and concentrated to write his diary.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow wow rimi loved it so much.

wow i can actually imagine mouni saying this to mohit 😆😳

and keep the second pic of her.
Edited by foram. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Foram thanx and nice suggestion di😳
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wow...so beautiful bhai😊...really grand opening⭐️👏⭐️...Good title...tui to janis title ami koto pachhando kori😆...& diary writing- I want to do it...bt can't get time😭...will follow it after 25th mar'13 ...humara Mahadev babu Sati ko dekhke aapna hunsh hi kho baitha😳...& the part-" u'll hv nxt 9 hrs to stare me"...ohh...hilarious ..🤣...I like short part much coz..I get time to read & enjoy👍🏼...over all khub sundor part...upd soon.😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey surprising sory forgot ur name but you said it right.
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Originally posted by: foram.

Hey surprising sory forgot ur name but you said it right.



m Rumpu...bt love to be addressed as surprising😊...& what right???...i said many things.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏Wow, well done, superb, bravo. My fav couple too😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good one dear..interesting plot..carry on

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