Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 2)

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preethi.saseeda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#431

I read ur as and I should tell you that it is written very well... Can't wait to read further... If u follow the ritual of pming... Pls pm me when u update

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Venicestar88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#432

thanks for the PM!!i was waiting for the update 😊

i love how the story is progressing... and Khushi starting to doubt but then clearing it... VERY practical of her... i love how her character is portrayed. As for Arnav... green eyed monster is coming out, is it?

look forward to the next one

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john-angad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#433

lol it will be a sight. akash asking as for permission so khushi can meet his family :p

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nadianatalie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#434

Again fantastic! Can't wait to see how arnav will handle this.

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annab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#435

loved the update...👏 ..The green monster ready to come out...poor akash...wt will happen to him nw??? A jealous man is worse than a angry man...cnt wait to read the next chap..pls pls continue soon...thanx...

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anjs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#436

would love to read something where he falls sick and Khushi freaks out... nothing major...maybe just a viral or something and Khushi freaks out for nothing...

in the mean time Akash's family starts planning Akash's and Khushi's wedding and Khushi freaks out more on listening to that as she knows that what she feels for Arnav is not just obligation but something much more

these thoughts just came to my mind so thought of sharing em...hope i dint offend you by giving u ideas

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#437

So now Arnav will act possessive I guess.

May be he can fake illness or low sugar level.

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proshomi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#438

I read the last 3 updates in one go today...Awww its beautiful,loved the way you describe their inner feelings...And now Khushi has also been smitten by him ...Sooo cute...Beautiful updates,update soon ..

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rrd29

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Posted: 12 years ago

#439

Hey, just came across your SS
Really really liked it a lot
Your style of writing is wonderful
Looking fwd to next update
Please PM me

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--BumbleBee--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#440

I loved the update.

Awesome awesome awesome..

Starting off with the conversation in the car- Arnav is so adorable and Awww!!!

Khushiii, please understand already!

'Ofcourse, you are okay and I am Sultan of Brunei' Arnav smirked inwardly. But nodded his head as if believing her answer, yet again. -🤣

Anyway, the way he was solicitous about making sure if she was okay, while internalyy he was literally dancing and smirking- Nice touch!! Loved it 😆

Then her running off. Typical Khushi. I don't understand something, so I have to run and calm myself and then try explaining what happened.

"Hell it was actually reassuring, if she stops hyperventilating and thinks. It was like he wanted her to get comfortable. "

I like how you have made this real. Considering her innocence, one of her most endearing qualities is her lack of hypocrisy and her ability to put into words her feelings.

'Comfortable with what? Party? Or Him?' the thought sprang up.- Beautifully penned!!

The parts about her initial feelings about Arnav was a revelation..

She came into his complicated life like a restful sleep, if he would compare. - That was awesome. I loved it!!

Khushi feeling shy around Arnav.. *sigh* 😳

'Taking her to meet the family now, are we? Like hell I'll let that happen' growled a very displeased Arnav Singh Raizada, as he made his way to where the two 'friends' sat chatting.

Haha!!😆 🤣

I can't wait to read and see what happens.

I like how you have managed to weave in emotions, humour and maintain a feeling of all of being real, in the way your characters react and respond, think and act.

Awesome update..

Please please update soon..

Thanks for the PM..

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