My Heart Is Forever Yours KR SS; Pt 1 pg.17 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kriyansh_jaanu

awesome...

continue soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Malvaika

Taani😈
going 2 hell!!
Chirag Ghai is Kria's bro na????
Hope he is!!
Bt 1st chappy!!!
Jaldi update karo!!
& thnx fr pm!


thnkuu!!!
wil try ..to updte soon
u welcum
nd wait fr da story to unfold
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Seems interesting
update fast dear


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: loverkriyansh

awesum
plz update soon
waiting


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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am anticipating good fun here! (: Eager to read ahead and know how you will develop the story!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

I am anticipating good fun here! (: Eager to read ahead and know how you will develop the story!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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cookie himu!!!!!!! plz udpadte soon guys!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98


Here is Part 1

A boy was walking to and fro in his room and tlking sumthing to himself...
B: god plz help
I need to propose her
last maine reject kardiya tha ab kahi woh na karde...
agn continuolsy walkin to nd fro
boy - ohh god plss help me'
after thinking fr sumtym he says
Idea
boys- i'll tell her today no no'I'll propose her
B: yes this a gud idea but use propose kaha karu *thinks* ahh fire exit
B perfect fire exit usne bhi mujhe waha apne dil ki baat batayi thi ab mai batauga
Ok done, I'll propose her today nly chal rey beta get ready u hav to propse her today only
okk i noe u all must hav guessed it ,yaa its rey...
Re: hey God plz use mere dil ki baat batane mai madat karna
A girl walking here & there in her room
G: rey ne mujhe fire exit kyun bulaya
She talking to her self.
rey- oh god ...rey chill u r da dude man dnt be scared...chil all iz well
the girl enters nd sees rey walking to and fro
Re: khud ko all iz well all iz well bol raha hu but all iz not well
G: rey kya hua.?? aapne mujhe yahan kyun bulaya..??: kch kaam tha kya..??
R: ha wo actually mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai
girl- haan rey kaho na kya kehna chahte ho aap
Re: wo wo
grl- rey kaho na..itna hakla kyu rahe ho aap..??
rey- haan woh woh woh...
grl - ap kabse kyawoh woh kar rahe hai , agr aapko nahi batana toh rehne dijiye, i dnt want to waste my tym m going bye...
rey- I LOVE U TAANI...he said in a go... (kyu lagaa na jhatka...??)
Taa: what
Taani was just shocked listening to it...she did not wat to do ?wat to say..?
after sumtym she was smilin from ear-to-ear..she was so excited but before she could say anything her cell beeped indicating a call
Taani picked up the call
Taa: hello
caller- taani cum home asap i hav sumthing important to tell you.
Taa: ok bhai mai a rahi hu
Taa- rey i gotta go, bhai ka call tha, i'll answer u tomorrow bye
rey- (his face fell down after listening to this bt did not show it )
Re: ok i will be waiting
after that taani left and proceeded towards her house
Taani reached the house nad saw swayum trying to bandage his hand, she got worried and ran towards him
and started bombarding him with questions
Taa: bhai yeh kese hua
Aap thik toh hai ne
zyada dard toh nahi ho raha na
swayum- taani chill chot si chot hai...
Taani- choti si chot cum on bhai kitni bleeding ho rahi hai btw aap kya kar rahe the ke aapko itni chot lag gayi and y did u call me so urgently?
she was sayin this while bandaging his hand
swayum woh actually woh maine kuch imp papers rakhe woh mujhe mil nai rahe hai , mujhe u must be knowing so i called u as i need asap...
Taa: kon se papers bhai
Swayum- woh college ke kuch events ke papers main uss din ghar laaya tha, bt i don't know where i kept it ..and mai wohu dhund raha tha cupboard k upar achanak se woh vase gir gaya on my hand nd u see the result.
he looked towards swayum and saw his face, it was red from crying
Taa- bhai aap ro kyu rahe the, bhabhi se koi serious fyt hui hai kya?
Sw: nahi taani
he said dis without makin any contact with her
she was just gonna askin wen she saw sum pics lying on the table and swayum starring at them, she was shocked by seeing those pics, they were pics of kriya and the gang.
She went to the table and picked it up
She saw swayam hugging kriya in one pic
Taa: kr..kr.. kriya
swayum heard this and quickly took the pics away, kept them in a place where he keeps all his prized possesions and changed the topic
Swayum- taani can u please find me the papers pls
Taa: but bhai
she came forward and kept her hand on his shoulders and said

Taa- bhai, u still miss kriya na...?

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Edited by lil_devil_himu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NOTE

hello guys

dis note is just tell you coz the updates will be a bit slow b'coz o ftym difference and evn my exmas are gonna start at the end of this month

so pls dnt expect updtes regularly

and those who did'nt get pms we ad told u guys before habd to add the pm account

i repeat for pms of this SS pls add devilsisters to ur account

and guys pls like and comment

silent reader pls atleast like if u dnt wanna comment

next update nly after 30 likes

thnku !!!

luv devils COOKIE nd HIMANI

Edited by cookie_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey me 2nd to comment..woww
Coming to d update..it was awesome
Rey ne tani ko propose kiya😡
I soo hate it..bt swayam was missing kriya..aww

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